a developed idea for a hentai manga!!
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This is my first creative outlet in hentai so collaboration and constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated! I want to create something! :)
TITLE: Prometheus (I didn't have a really strong title but it works. Any better ideas?)
SETTING: *movie preview voice* IN A WORLD... *giggles* ok, I'm serious now :3 I want this set in an age where the technological gap is so huge that only 12 people possess the full digital potential, a physical and digital existence dubbed "Olympus." (The physical manifestation is on a frozen mountain that is the height of Mt. Everest...ish. High enough to make normal infiltration impossible.) With the help of less than 50 highly specialized programmers, infrastructure techs and various other specialists and security, these 12 "elite" control the over-populated and technology-dependent population of the world in the palm of their hands.
PLOT: A group of rebels decide that everyone should have digital access to everything the Elite 12 do. They form a plan that depends on the sacrifice of individuals for the greater benefit of the whole. The special access codes and back-door passes *winks and giggles* are held in the "Fire Keys." There are two parts to each of the two keys - a physical component (a special key-shaped USB-like drive) and the Key-codes to activate them. Once these are acquired, the world can be in control of its own politics, economy, taxes and currency (which are currently held in such a state by the 12 Elite that they keep everyone barely surviving.)
CHARACTERS:
THE TWELVE ELITE: I figured they could be code-named after the 12 gods of Olympus, since I'm already borrowing so heavily from the mythology here. That would also allow them having real names.
THE REBEL GROUP: A group made up of 3 girls and 5 guys - the best of the best who have been secretly training for this mission their whole lives.
OUTLINE: The Rebel Group (I need to find a better name for them, preferably related to Greek mythology) decides to execute a relay-race style of infiltration and the passing of information/the Fire Keys. The group is split into units that work together but separately.
Two (one guy, one girl) slowly climb the mountain in an effort to remain unnoticed (and of course get it on on their way up - gotta keep warm, right? ;3 they just have to stay really quiet!) They make the first infiltration and steal the physical copies of the keys.
At the same time one of the guys back at the base is hacking the system in an effort to open doors and find the digital components to the Fire Keys.
Another guy meets them outside Olympus to take the keys and snowboard down the mountain to the next meetup: an old tunnel, where he'll meet the next two.
A guy and a girl (who climbed the mountain with the original pair but stayed behind when they reached the old tunnels and stayed there for about a week - being bored and getting it on of course... and they had climbing ropes and wouldn't be so cold they couldn't perform a little shibari to help the time fly by) take the keys from there and the snowboarder leads any pursuit off their trail.
The two from the tunnel run into trouble and the girl escapes to pass the information on to remaining two who wait at the bottom of the mountain. I have this image of the two that're waiting for her having to block the tunnel so only the information can be passed (through bars or a hole in an avalanche/rock burial of the entrance) and they see a few of the Elite promise to torture her forever, like Prometheus - afterall they have the technology!
In the end, the programmer gets the components for the Fire Keys and accidentally separates the world from Olympus. So the Elite still have their power, they just don't have it over the world, but they get to play with all their multiple Promethei (is that the plural of Prometheus?)
What do you think? Does it have potential? I like long series so I'm hoping the information here offers enough for at least 4 chapters! :)
TITLE: Prometheus (I didn't have a really strong title but it works. Any better ideas?)
SETTING: *movie preview voice* IN A WORLD... *giggles* ok, I'm serious now :3 I want this set in an age where the technological gap is so huge that only 12 people possess the full digital potential, a physical and digital existence dubbed "Olympus." (The physical manifestation is on a frozen mountain that is the height of Mt. Everest...ish. High enough to make normal infiltration impossible.) With the help of less than 50 highly specialized programmers, infrastructure techs and various other specialists and security, these 12 "elite" control the over-populated and technology-dependent population of the world in the palm of their hands.
PLOT: A group of rebels decide that everyone should have digital access to everything the Elite 12 do. They form a plan that depends on the sacrifice of individuals for the greater benefit of the whole. The special access codes and back-door passes *winks and giggles* are held in the "Fire Keys." There are two parts to each of the two keys - a physical component (a special key-shaped USB-like drive) and the Key-codes to activate them. Once these are acquired, the world can be in control of its own politics, economy, taxes and currency (which are currently held in such a state by the 12 Elite that they keep everyone barely surviving.)
CHARACTERS:
THE TWELVE ELITE: I figured they could be code-named after the 12 gods of Olympus, since I'm already borrowing so heavily from the mythology here. That would also allow them having real names.
THE REBEL GROUP: A group made up of 3 girls and 5 guys - the best of the best who have been secretly training for this mission their whole lives.
OUTLINE: The Rebel Group (I need to find a better name for them, preferably related to Greek mythology) decides to execute a relay-race style of infiltration and the passing of information/the Fire Keys. The group is split into units that work together but separately.
Two (one guy, one girl) slowly climb the mountain in an effort to remain unnoticed (and of course get it on on their way up - gotta keep warm, right? ;3 they just have to stay really quiet!) They make the first infiltration and steal the physical copies of the keys.
At the same time one of the guys back at the base is hacking the system in an effort to open doors and find the digital components to the Fire Keys.
Another guy meets them outside Olympus to take the keys and snowboard down the mountain to the next meetup: an old tunnel, where he'll meet the next two.
A guy and a girl (who climbed the mountain with the original pair but stayed behind when they reached the old tunnels and stayed there for about a week - being bored and getting it on of course... and they had climbing ropes and wouldn't be so cold they couldn't perform a little shibari to help the time fly by) take the keys from there and the snowboarder leads any pursuit off their trail.
The two from the tunnel run into trouble and the girl escapes to pass the information on to remaining two who wait at the bottom of the mountain. I have this image of the two that're waiting for her having to block the tunnel so only the information can be passed (through bars or a hole in an avalanche/rock burial of the entrance) and they see a few of the Elite promise to torture her forever, like Prometheus - afterall they have the technology!
In the end, the programmer gets the components for the Fire Keys and accidentally separates the world from Olympus. So the Elite still have their power, they just don't have it over the world, but they get to play with all their multiple Promethei (is that the plural of Prometheus?)
What do you think? Does it have potential? I like long series so I'm hoping the information here offers enough for at least 4 chapters! :)
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Tsujoi
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Maybe start storyboarding the first chapter since you have a vague idea of what you want to happen already.
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I'm unfortunately only a mediocre artist at the very best, I was kinda hoping to hook someone into my story to illustrate it :P I can do stick figures though ^_^ they'd be very proportionate! lol
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Tsujoi
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mari_shibari wrote...
I'm unfortunately only a mediocre artist at the very best, I was kinda hoping to hook someone into my story to illustrate it :P I can do stick figures though ^_^ they'd be very proportionate! lolstick figures are fine, it's just to flesh out the story and to see how it would look panel wise.
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mari_shibari wrote...
I'm unfortunately only a mediocre artist at the very best, I was kinda hoping to hook someone into my story to illustrate it :P I can do stick figures though ^_^ they'd be very proportionate! lolLook into ComiPo, think there is a free trial version even! Good for basic story boarding well, until the actual ero stuff, that you'll have to DIY.
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story boarding is so much harder than I thought it'd be! pacing and where/when and how much information to put in each panel is really difficult. my 1% inspiration was there and I only have like 30% of the necessary perspiration... Man I wish I had a partner in crime :/ I don't have any friends who're into hentai let alone anime ir comic creation in the first place T_T