Critique my work, please.

I'm not fishing for compliments, I want honest opinions on what I can improve.

It seems pretty repetitive, but other than that I don't really have much to say about it.

Nice, though.

I tried to learn how to play piano a few times, but I'm pretty musically challenged.

I definitely added a repetitive form to the composition, but I tried different drum fills throughout the whole track. There are 4 different drumfills that I programmed.Thank you for the feedback.

Mm. Finding the sweet spot between repeating and breaking/layering on the pattern is a difficult thing in any kind of music. Always gave me trouble back in my MOD scene days.

20 seconds of a near-silent riff then 10 seconds of silence leading up to main song is a bit too long for my liking.

Sounds like a boss battle theme to an all black, trench coat wearing lunatic who fights by just tossing hooks and chains while the screen randomly goes black.

I would also sugest removing the first 30 seconds

Ya that part was added last, didn't really turn out as good as I hoped.

Actually the riff drones on during those last 10 seconds, it's just really quiet.

To be honest, i almost left the page when i only heard silence. Maybe i just had adhd, but i think a 5 second silent beginng is long enough. But i did enjoy your work so far. It's very good to me, and in the end was glad i didn't skip out.

Reminded me of Kyuss and the circus leaves the town. Needs more rhythm if you ask me.

If you can make something like this, you will be a winrar.

I generally don't really go for pixies-esqe sounding music, since it just kind of feels dull imo. This is as close as I can get to that sound.

Nice one, reminds me of this