My Friend's work!

Well, this is my second topic. :D

My friend was making a manga. 8)
But he still just make a chapter.
Here is the cover...


But it still not translated yet... It's in Indonesian language.
Here is the page 1...



I hope it will be complete later... :wink:

That looks pretty good.
I couldn't read the writing, but it looks good that's all I can say...

Hahaha. That's Indonesian language.
It just only the copies of his prototype manga...

I'll translate it later.

......lol........Ben10? the fire form?........nice manga btw.........too bad cant understand Indonesian ...............

I can understand it, seeing as both Malay and Indo languages are very similar. I could make out what's going on.

So anyway. It looks like it could be something quite good. Not sure about originality but... I'm sure something will pop up~

Is that so? :o

Well, I have more. :D

Page 2:


Page 3:


I hope u enjoyed this...

haha really indonesian-like manga.

really interesting for me, can't wait for moar.

UPDATE ( maybe )!!! :o

I'm still not translate it yet... But someday will surely(maybe)...

Here's page 4...


And page 5...


Page 5 was resized so it smaller...

Hope u enjoy~ 8)

Oh, don't forget to vote the poll :wink:

At least...I have good internet to load the pics my internet before is too slow to load the pic.

back to topic:
first, you publish it here without your friend knowing it? It's not really a nice thing In my opinion; or maybe this is actually your comic? you know people tend to use term my friend is...something like that just curious, no offense okay?

second, the drawing is good and clean for indonesian manga nice :D , but the sound effect (i.e: gluduk, blar, etc) is looked rather plain, could be much cooler if the sound effect draw in more dynamic style like Japan manga. And you better translate it, so lot people here can understand the story.

third, sorry but can't vote the poll yet if we don't see it until it's finished.

The way that he do reference and "Plagiatism", Hell yeah, Indonesian like!

This like remembering the old days, when i also do a comic without thinking like this.
Until this time, i can't say anything. Probably the story is too fast, or the story is just for fun(not a serious one). But i'm sure that he/she can be better, looking at how the drawing made.

And Matatabi, Rin_Penelope is right. If your friend don't know, let him/her know.

Ok, reviving!

I told him and he give me a permission to do that... What a relief :D

I still learning how to use Adobe Photoshop (CS3) ...

So be patient 8)