Need some opinions. [ch-1 of a light novel I'm writing]
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Send me your email if interested and I'll send back a 38pg .odf or .rtf file. Looking for some opinions and critiques on a story I'm writing. Can't seem to get anyone to look it over (even my own father[sarcastically cries]) and would like some feedback.
Much appreciated.
(does this qual as a request?)
[btw, rated R for language and violence]
Aeon Children
Set a few years in the future in Japan. Long story short, after WWII the elemental form of Aeon is discovered. Development leads to the Aeon Project, ending in a failed mass-modification of 100 human subjects and a technological 'reactor' developed to harness it instead. N. Korea nukes Japan, Japan goes genocide on N. Korea, China declares war on Japan.
Story follows Fuji International PMC Major Maya Kudou, ex JASDF fighter pilot with an impressive kill record and Aeon Project by-product, through the course of the war and her personal development.
Much appreciated.
(does this qual as a request?)
[btw, rated R for language and violence]
Aeon Children
Set a few years in the future in Japan. Long story short, after WWII the elemental form of Aeon is discovered. Development leads to the Aeon Project, ending in a failed mass-modification of 100 human subjects and a technological 'reactor' developed to harness it instead. N. Korea nukes Japan, Japan goes genocide on N. Korea, China declares war on Japan.
Story follows Fuji International PMC Major Maya Kudou, ex JASDF fighter pilot with an impressive kill record and Aeon Project by-product, through the course of the war and her personal development.
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Ramsus wrote...
Why not just post it in the writing section?Like I said...it's 38 pages in Word format.
38 pages. All one, un-break-up-able chapter.
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sv51macross wrote...
Ramsus wrote...
Why not just post it in the writing section?Like I said...it's 38 pages in Word format.
38 pages. All one, un-break-up-able chapter.
Oooooh. Well you might want to tell people more about it so that they'd be interested.
