Tsubasa Sakura and Mokona's XD Sketch

Hi Im wondering what do u guys think of this sketch i did b4 i started coloring it

please criticize me so i know what I need to do to improve

XD

thank you

She look so slim !! A whole her body look so skinny !!
Cant say much cuz I really dont good at critic !!
anyway, great fanart !!
Ruuuuuuu.....

thank you so much

Ill look into that but i think characters from clamp series are usually skinny but oh well

thank you

Ruuuuuuuuu XD