WideEyedMan wrote...
Yume Miru Kusuri:
Girls are made of Cake Frosting
Brings to mind a haphazardly joyful girl dancing erratically but elegantly in a motionless and silent meadow, as if the world froze just to watch her frolic. It feels like she would vanish if one glances away from the smile on her tranquil face. Did I mention she has a massive rack and was incredibly gorgeous? Well now I did.
The erratic, but elegant dancing imagery eludes me. I'm wondering if I would understand your interpretation a bit more if I read Yume Miru Kusuri.
For me, the song gives off an indoor-esque feel. The piano and the acoustic sound that is played in the middle makes it feel like this is something you might hear at a laid back cafe in a quiet summer day. It helps that the melody gives off a jazzy feel to it.
Foreground Eclipse wrote...
And as an honorable mention, a guitar cover of the soundtrack Sin from Saya no Uta. I feel this cover managed to capture the entire energy of the story perfectly. From beginning to climax to end. I can envision the entire story when listening to this.
I would like to say I did not understand your interpretation of this song until I reached towards the end. The turning point where it switches to a dominant guitar definitely invokes a sort of climax. I have not personally read saya, but I've heard enough about it to have some bias on my interpretation.
To me it sounds like the ticking of someone's patience. The tension that builds up almost becomes redundant, but when the climax hits, it feels like you understand. Chaos descends, the patience is broken, and along with that, the sanity of that someone. This is intensified by the repeating chords at the very end. It's as if that someone burned out. It is was comes after the chaos. It is a feeling of emptiness.
As for my own submission...
This song plays in the VN Narcissu, which happens to be among one of my all time favorites.
To me, this song is the epitome of many negatives. Sorrow, loneliness, and regret. Throughout the song, the tone and general melody carries through. There is no climax; the melody simply continues to cycle. That repetition feels like it adds to the core of the song in that it brings about a type of sadness that does not get resolved.
Anyways, for me this brings to mind the scene of a girl laying on a hospital bed all alone. She's in a white room with her window open and the curtains are ever so lightly flowing from the breeze outside. She looks out the window and sees a freedom she would never reach and tears flow down her eyes, but she doesn't let out a sound. She's letting her tears run silently down her face because she's accepted the fact that her life will have no climax or resolution outside of her death.