2 poems i made when the feelings struck

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                   [color=#006699]_{[b]Rise's maid!}

Not too bad, aside from a few typos here and there. Typing them up in Word or Firefox can help that as they will highlight obvious ones. The content is pretty magical in the sense that it seems ethereal in its entirety. I can enjoy it, though do mind to make sure it doesn't get excessive or superfluous. More practice like this and you'll build up your writing skills. Hope you do more.