A Day In The Library - Mahou Sensei Negima Fic +18

I wrote this and is still currently in the works on its fourth chapter, just wanted your opinions on it.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3920078/1/A_Day_In_The_Library
Enjoy! ^-^

but anyway i thought it was ok, could have been better if u added a little bit more sexual tension(that was what i was expecting since i saw the +18 up there)

Very well writen. I've always had a thing for the silent Zazie, along with the other Negima girls. I would love to see a doujin adaptation of it some day. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Very nice story you should write some more they're pretty good