Accident's Happen
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Accident's Happen is a one shot that I did about 8 months ago and thought I'd share it with you guys.
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Jill is laying on here bed reading a magazine when a knock on her door brings here back to the present. “Come in,” Jill says as she puts the magazine down and her dad comes in. “What brings you to my room daddy?” Her voice is sweet and tender as she sits up on her bed.
“Your mom just left to visit her sister,” Jill's dad says. “I thought you and me could fool around.”
Jill's father walks over and sits down on the bed, beside his daughter. Her expression is not one of horror, because this has happened before. But one of worry. “Daddy we mustn't be doing this anymore,” Jill pleads. “If mom was to find out...”
“But she won't,” Jill's father interjects. “She's not here, she won't find out.”
“I know daddy,” Jill sighs. “I just worry.”
“Do not worry,” Jill's father says as he lays her down on the bed. “Now just relax and let daddy, make love to his little girl.” Jill's father slowly rubs his hands up her blouse and grasp onto her breast. “How I love your breast, they are so soft and big like Auntie Karin's.”
“Daddy,” Jill gasp. “You have made love to Auntie Karin? Your sister?”
“Yes sweetie,” Jill's father purrs into her ear. Like you Auntie Karin is a secret lover of mine.” Slowly Jill's father removes her blouse and then starts to pull away her pants. Jill is wearing nothing but a pair of White Cotton Panties. “OH HONEY You are the most beautiful woman in my life.”
“I love you Daddy,” Jill says as she holds onto her father as he fingers her through her panties. “Daddy, I'm getting wet for you. Can you feel it how wet I am?”
“I can honey,” Jill's father says as he pulls away her panties. “Now hold still, Daddy has something for you.” Jill's father slowly unzipped his pants and then let his erection fall out.
“Please daddy Give it too me,” Jill pleads, as the wetness about her pussy starts to ooze slightly. “Please I beg you.”
“Hold still Sweetie,” Jill's father says as he sticks himself into her tight pussy.
“OH DADDY!” Jill screams, as she grabs at the blankets on her bed. For a few minutes Jill moans and screams as her father relentlessly pounds away at her pussy. “I'M CUMING!”
“I Can't hold on anymore,”Jill's father says as Jill orgasms.
“NO DADDY PULL OUT!” Jill Screams as her father trys to pull out but to no avail, he blows his load a split second before he is all the way out.
“I'm Sorry honey,” Jill's father says as the remaining cum that is shouting out of his dick splatters across his druthers body. “But it looks like some of my juices spilled into you.”
“It's alright daddy,” Jill says wiping the cum from her face and then licking her fingers. “Accidents happen.”
“Your mom just left to visit her sister,” Jill's dad says. “I thought you and me could fool around.”
Jill's father walks over and sits down on the bed, beside his daughter. Her expression is not one of horror, because this has happened before. But one of worry. “Daddy we mustn't be doing this anymore,” Jill pleads. “If mom was to find out...”
“But she won't,” Jill's father interjects. “She's not here, she won't find out.”
“I know daddy,” Jill sighs. “I just worry.”
“Do not worry,” Jill's father says as he lays her down on the bed. “Now just relax and let daddy, make love to his little girl.” Jill's father slowly rubs his hands up her blouse and grasp onto her breast. “How I love your breast, they are so soft and big like Auntie Karin's.”
“Daddy,” Jill gasp. “You have made love to Auntie Karin? Your sister?”
“Yes sweetie,” Jill's father purrs into her ear. Like you Auntie Karin is a secret lover of mine.” Slowly Jill's father removes her blouse and then starts to pull away her pants. Jill is wearing nothing but a pair of White Cotton Panties. “OH HONEY You are the most beautiful woman in my life.”
“I love you Daddy,” Jill says as she holds onto her father as he fingers her through her panties. “Daddy, I'm getting wet for you. Can you feel it how wet I am?”
“I can honey,” Jill's father says as he pulls away her panties. “Now hold still, Daddy has something for you.” Jill's father slowly unzipped his pants and then let his erection fall out.
“Please daddy Give it too me,” Jill pleads, as the wetness about her pussy starts to ooze slightly. “Please I beg you.”
“Hold still Sweetie,” Jill's father says as he sticks himself into her tight pussy.
“OH DADDY!” Jill screams, as she grabs at the blankets on her bed. For a few minutes Jill moans and screams as her father relentlessly pounds away at her pussy. “I'M CUMING!”
“I Can't hold on anymore,”Jill's father says as Jill orgasms.
“NO DADDY PULL OUT!” Jill Screams as her father trys to pull out but to no avail, he blows his load a split second before he is all the way out.
“I'm Sorry honey,” Jill's father says as the remaining cum that is shouting out of his dick splatters across his druthers body. “But it looks like some of my juices spilled into you.”
“It's alright daddy,” Jill says wiping the cum from her face and then licking her fingers. “Accidents happen.”
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wow was not expecting that lol..im all for incest and w/e hell i love it but idk when it comes to a father and a daughter i dont tend to like that...but its still a ok read =]
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.........not my cup of tea seriously...... but i guess there will be people who like this sort of thing......
Incest is bad enough but father and daughter is just wrong.........
Ok to the writing...
1)the clothes were not given a description. i think it would affect the story since this is a sex story so you should give your readers the details that way the readers can imagine.
2)the scene is too short i should say but it is quite life-size or more accurately more reality to it. Unfortunately...... it doesn't satisfy the most readers (including me :roll: )
I rate it 4/10 for lack of plot and elements to make a good sex type story. Hope your won't hate me for that lol :wink:
Incest is bad enough but father and daughter is just wrong.........
Ok to the writing...
1)the clothes were not given a description. i think it would affect the story since this is a sex story so you should give your readers the details that way the readers can imagine.
2)the scene is too short i should say but it is quite life-size or more accurately more reality to it. Unfortunately...... it doesn't satisfy the most readers (including me :roll: )
I rate it 4/10 for lack of plot and elements to make a good sex type story. Hope your won't hate me for that lol :wink:
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Incest!
I'm a big fan of Incest, but somehow Damien pointed out what you lacked.
Still! This is a good oneshot.
btw... why did name the girl Jill? Just curious^^
I'm a big fan of Incest, but somehow Damien pointed out what you lacked.
Still! This is a good oneshot.
btw... why did name the girl Jill? Just curious^^
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Damienthedevil wrote...
.........not my cup of tea seriously...... but i guess there will be people who like this sort of thing......Incest is bad enough but father and daughter is just wrong.........
Ok to the writing...
1)the clothes were not given a description. i think it would affect the story since this is a sex story so you should give your readers the details that way the readers can imagine.
2)the scene is too short i should say but it is quite life-size or more accurately more reality to it. Unfortunately...... it doesn't satisfy the most readers (including me :roll: )
I rate it 4/10 for lack of plot and elements to make a good sex type story. Hope your won't hate me for that lol :wink:
Thank you for the constructive criticism but I would like to re iterate that this is a one shot piece which is just something short and simple.
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Angelus Lapsus wrote...
Damienthedevil wrote...
.........not my cup of tea seriously...... but i guess there will be people who like this sort of thing......Incest is bad enough but father and daughter is just wrong.........
Ok to the writing...
1)the clothes were not given a description. i think it would affect the story since this is a sex story so you should give your readers the details that way the readers can imagine.
2)the scene is too short i should say but it is quite life-size or more accurately more reality to it. Unfortunately...... it doesn't satisfy the most readers (including me :roll: )
I rate it 4/10 for lack of plot and elements to make a good sex type story. Hope your won't hate me for that lol :wink:
Thank you for the constructive criticism but I would like to re iterate that this is a one shot piece which is just something short and simple.
i know it is a one shot but you should give descriptions no matter what type of story it is be it a long novel or a one shot there should always be descriptions. Just pointing that out :wink: