Another day goes by.

"A day I long to spend with you, but we both know that can’t happen.
I hope your happy where ever you are, knowing you…of course you are.
If only I could be with you, to start a life anew.
Please forgive me from your heart. I couldn’t be what you wanted me to be.
So rest in peace my love, enjoy your everlasting life. It’s just that...
Another day that goes by, It's another day I miss you so."

This saying was said by a character in a story I wrote at least 3 years ago.The point is that you should cherish the people you care for and love that one person as much as you can, cause there is always something that can happen that would cause that bond to break.

So tell me how you feel about this. Tell me if I need to improve anything kay? Tell me if you can connect to this saying on a personal level. Give me your thoughts. I want to hear what your thinking.

I would say that as saying goes it lacks some punch, as most 'sayings' are at most acouple of lines long. Perhaps with if you can put it into context, it may be more understandable. Also I would say this is more of a love letter excerpt then a saying personally. Still good grasp of the language mate :)

I agree with the person above, hehe. I thought it was a love letter.. for somebody that was away.. but it looks like someone died.. sadly.

But even so I like it. It's creative with a cute message.

Thank you, both of you. I'll try to make my writing more...understandable.^-^