AvatarEnd - Poetry
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Prayers
Praying into the sun,
knees worn into the snow,
I can't see tomorrow,
and I wish for yesterday.
Hands clasped so tightly,
eyes blinded by the radiance,
thoughts released into whispers,
lost in the snowy sky.
Angels,
their feathers falling delicately,
blessing me with their caress,
the bare brush of divinty.
Euphoria lies in my breast,
heart racing and consumed,
as I fall slowly to slumber,
my prayers finally answered.
I don't usually share anything with others, but there's one for you.
Praying into the sun,
knees worn into the snow,
I can't see tomorrow,
and I wish for yesterday.
Hands clasped so tightly,
eyes blinded by the radiance,
thoughts released into whispers,
lost in the snowy sky.
Angels,
their feathers falling delicately,
blessing me with their caress,
the bare brush of divinty.
Euphoria lies in my breast,
heart racing and consumed,
as I fall slowly to slumber,
my prayers finally answered.
I don't usually share anything with others, but there's one for you.
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Haunting Little Designs (WIP)
unfinished and hit a mental roadblock. so any commentary or criticism would be helpful.
Spoiler:
unfinished and hit a mental roadblock. so any commentary or criticism would be helpful.
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
I'm liking your work, but I'm no expert on poetry. However, it seems both verbose and affectionate. Slightly religious and intriguing. I don't know how to help you, but suffice to say I feel you're going in the right direction.