[Contest Entry 2011] Cafe Fakku
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This is my entry to the Seasonal Writing Contest of 2011, take 2. (Some things happened and I've decided to make a new one)
This story contains Oppai, Maids, Yuri, and Kemonomimi.
Enjoy.
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It was a cold Christmas Eve night and I was taking a stroll around Akiharaba, I had just finished wrapping and sending off all the presents I had bought for family and friends and was thinking of something to do. I then noticed an interesting cafe that went by the name of Fakku. As I entered the door I was greeted by a very beautiful maid saying "Welcome home master." Her chest was well rounded, and she had beautiful light blue hair. As the maid brought me to my table I couldn't help but smile as I fell in love with this place instantly. As I was looking through the menu I noticed it wasn't a usual one. Instead it seemed to have certain sections for different types of service. You could get anywhere from Ecchi service to just about anything else you could think of. The more I looked around the cafe and at the employees, and even the customers, I noticed that it wasn't just a normal cosplay cafe, it was something special that had something for everyone.
After looking through the menu for a bit I found something that caught my eye, it was a mix between Yuri, and Kemonomimi. It was described as... "You will be serviced by two maids, one as an animal of your choosing and the other being the dominant partner dressed as a maid". I got the attention of my beautiful blue haired maid and pointed to my selection. She then said "ah a good choice, what type of animal will you be choosing?" "A cat please" I replied. "Excellent, if you'd follow me we can get you're order right away." she said. I stood up and started to follow her, she brought me into the back of the cafe and into a room of my own, it had a large red couch near the back, and a small coffee table in front of it. As I sat down she handed me another menu, this one was normal where I could order from a large variety of drinks and food, I just decided on a normal chamomile tea. My maid left the room and I waited for about 10 minutes and one woman wearing cat ears, paws, a tail, and nothing else, with a leash around her neck being held by another maid wearing a very revealing outfit, and a short skirt with thigh high socks and high heals walked into my room. I was shocked at first seeing this, and quickly asked "wait what is this?" They both replied "this is what you ordered master." I was still a little shocked and couldn't say anything else, so I just fell back onto the couch. The woman dressed up as a cat crawled over to me, and jumped on the couch and started to cuddle with me, I could feel her breasts against my arm, and I turned bright red. "My name is Akemi, and her name is Aimi, just relax we will service you in any way necessary." The one dressed as a maid said to me.
I took a few deep breaths and tried to relax, but as soon as I look down at Aimi, seeing her naked body got me too excited and they both noticed what had happened right away. Aimi started to giggle, and said "look Akemi hes gotten excited." Akemi started to walk over to the couch and sat down next to Aimi and started to pet her hair. "Well I can't blame him. Anyone would get excited if a naked woman was crawling all over them like that." Akemi said. Aimi didn't say anything, just giggled some more and started to lick my face as she tried to unzip my pants. Akemi then stood up again and told Aimi to sit, being and animal she was obedient and sat down on her knee's looking at me. Akemi then stood in front of me and sat kneeled down in front of me and quickly took off my pants, and my penis grew even more now that they could see it right in front of their face's. Their eyes grew bigger as they saw it and Aimi pounced on it grabbing it with her hands and started to jerk me off, while licking the tip of it. "See doesn't that feel good?" Akemi said as she stood up again and sat on my thighs as she started to kiss me. I couldn't handle all the excitement at once, so as soon as she kissed me I started to lose it and came all over Aimi's face. "I'm so sorry" I quickly said. Both of them giggled, "don't worry about it" Aimi said. Akemi then started to kiss Aimi, and started to lick my cum off of her face. At that moment Akemi took off all her clothes and the two if them started to make out right in front of me.
As soon as I saw the two of them kissing, I suddenly got hard again. Both of them noticed and started to crawl over to me, Aimi pushing me down and sitting on my lap, my penis right in front of her pussy, which was now dripping wet. Akemi decided to sit above my face so I could eat her out. As I started to get Akemi wet with my tongue I could hear her starting to moan a little bit. I then felt my penis going starting to go inside of Aimi's tight pussy, it started to go in slowly, but then she finally took it all in al the way to the base. "Feels good doesn't it?" she asked, I couldn't respond since I was eating out Akemi. Aimi started to move up and down on top of me, my penis throbbing inside of her. I could hear the both of them starting to moan more and more, louder and louder. "Finger my ass as eat me out!" Akemi screamed, as her pussy was dripping all over my face. "You're dick feels so good, I'm going to cum!" Aimi shouted. I could feel the both of them starting to tighten up, it felt so good that I felt like I was going to cum. Suddenly the three of us all came together. Pussy juice all over my face and cock, my semen started to pour out of Aimi's pussy. "Ahh that felt so good." The both of them said. The two of them panting, started to kiss, my cock still inside of Aimi, and Akemi still on my face. Akemi then pushed Aimi over and started to make out with her again, kissing her all over. Sucking on her breasts, kissing her lips, kissing her neck, and fingering her pussy. I then got on my knees and grabbed Akemi's hip's and started to tease her with my penis, I could hear the both of them starting to moan again.
I quickly turned Akemi over onto her back and thrusted my penis into her pussy making her scream in pleasure. As I was pounding Akemi's tight wet pussy. Aimi then sat above Akemi's head, "eat me out!" she screamed. As I was pounding Akemi's tight pussy Aimi grabbed my head and brought it towards hers and started to kiss me, I fell into it and started to kiss her back. I decided to grab her magnificent tits, massaging them, I could feel Akemi starting to tighten up, squeezing my cock as it went in and out of her. "Oh that feels so good." I said, as I started to throb inside of her. "I'm going to cum!" Akemi said. "Me too! It feels so good" Aimi screamed. "I'm cumming." I said, as I pulled out of Akemi and started to cum all over the two of them. "Mmm, thank you master." The two of them said as they started to lick my cum off of each other.
Once the two of them were all cleaned up, I was satisfied and couldn't go another round, I kissed the both of them and said "Thank you, you two." "It was our pleasure master. We hope to see you again soon back at Fakku." The both of them said while looking just soo cute. "I will most defiantly be back soon" I said with a smile. As I was walking out of the room in the back, I noticed another customer walking into the back, he was wearing a horse head. I watched as he entered another room and I couldn't help but smile. As I was walking out of Fakku I heard my beautiful blue haired maid say "Have a safe trip master". This was the best Christmas ever.
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1452/1500 word were used.
I tried something a little different this time. Instead of trying to adapt a love with two people I decided to just make a sexy story. I hope you enjoyed =) <3 <3 <3
This story contains Oppai, Maids, Yuri, and Kemonomimi.
Enjoy.
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It was a cold Christmas Eve night and I was taking a stroll around Akiharaba, I had just finished wrapping and sending off all the presents I had bought for family and friends and was thinking of something to do. I then noticed an interesting cafe that went by the name of Fakku. As I entered the door I was greeted by a very beautiful maid saying "Welcome home master." Her chest was well rounded, and she had beautiful light blue hair. As the maid brought me to my table I couldn't help but smile as I fell in love with this place instantly. As I was looking through the menu I noticed it wasn't a usual one. Instead it seemed to have certain sections for different types of service. You could get anywhere from Ecchi service to just about anything else you could think of. The more I looked around the cafe and at the employees, and even the customers, I noticed that it wasn't just a normal cosplay cafe, it was something special that had something for everyone.
After looking through the menu for a bit I found something that caught my eye, it was a mix between Yuri, and Kemonomimi. It was described as... "You will be serviced by two maids, one as an animal of your choosing and the other being the dominant partner dressed as a maid". I got the attention of my beautiful blue haired maid and pointed to my selection. She then said "ah a good choice, what type of animal will you be choosing?" "A cat please" I replied. "Excellent, if you'd follow me we can get you're order right away." she said. I stood up and started to follow her, she brought me into the back of the cafe and into a room of my own, it had a large red couch near the back, and a small coffee table in front of it. As I sat down she handed me another menu, this one was normal where I could order from a large variety of drinks and food, I just decided on a normal chamomile tea. My maid left the room and I waited for about 10 minutes and one woman wearing cat ears, paws, a tail, and nothing else, with a leash around her neck being held by another maid wearing a very revealing outfit, and a short skirt with thigh high socks and high heals walked into my room. I was shocked at first seeing this, and quickly asked "wait what is this?" They both replied "this is what you ordered master." I was still a little shocked and couldn't say anything else, so I just fell back onto the couch. The woman dressed up as a cat crawled over to me, and jumped on the couch and started to cuddle with me, I could feel her breasts against my arm, and I turned bright red. "My name is Akemi, and her name is Aimi, just relax we will service you in any way necessary." The one dressed as a maid said to me.
I took a few deep breaths and tried to relax, but as soon as I look down at Aimi, seeing her naked body got me too excited and they both noticed what had happened right away. Aimi started to giggle, and said "look Akemi hes gotten excited." Akemi started to walk over to the couch and sat down next to Aimi and started to pet her hair. "Well I can't blame him. Anyone would get excited if a naked woman was crawling all over them like that." Akemi said. Aimi didn't say anything, just giggled some more and started to lick my face as she tried to unzip my pants. Akemi then stood up again and told Aimi to sit, being and animal she was obedient and sat down on her knee's looking at me. Akemi then stood in front of me and sat kneeled down in front of me and quickly took off my pants, and my penis grew even more now that they could see it right in front of their face's. Their eyes grew bigger as they saw it and Aimi pounced on it grabbing it with her hands and started to jerk me off, while licking the tip of it. "See doesn't that feel good?" Akemi said as she stood up again and sat on my thighs as she started to kiss me. I couldn't handle all the excitement at once, so as soon as she kissed me I started to lose it and came all over Aimi's face. "I'm so sorry" I quickly said. Both of them giggled, "don't worry about it" Aimi said. Akemi then started to kiss Aimi, and started to lick my cum off of her face. At that moment Akemi took off all her clothes and the two if them started to make out right in front of me.
As soon as I saw the two of them kissing, I suddenly got hard again. Both of them noticed and started to crawl over to me, Aimi pushing me down and sitting on my lap, my penis right in front of her pussy, which was now dripping wet. Akemi decided to sit above my face so I could eat her out. As I started to get Akemi wet with my tongue I could hear her starting to moan a little bit. I then felt my penis going starting to go inside of Aimi's tight pussy, it started to go in slowly, but then she finally took it all in al the way to the base. "Feels good doesn't it?" she asked, I couldn't respond since I was eating out Akemi. Aimi started to move up and down on top of me, my penis throbbing inside of her. I could hear the both of them starting to moan more and more, louder and louder. "Finger my ass as eat me out!" Akemi screamed, as her pussy was dripping all over my face. "You're dick feels so good, I'm going to cum!" Aimi shouted. I could feel the both of them starting to tighten up, it felt so good that I felt like I was going to cum. Suddenly the three of us all came together. Pussy juice all over my face and cock, my semen started to pour out of Aimi's pussy. "Ahh that felt so good." The both of them said. The two of them panting, started to kiss, my cock still inside of Aimi, and Akemi still on my face. Akemi then pushed Aimi over and started to make out with her again, kissing her all over. Sucking on her breasts, kissing her lips, kissing her neck, and fingering her pussy. I then got on my knees and grabbed Akemi's hip's and started to tease her with my penis, I could hear the both of them starting to moan again.
I quickly turned Akemi over onto her back and thrusted my penis into her pussy making her scream in pleasure. As I was pounding Akemi's tight wet pussy. Aimi then sat above Akemi's head, "eat me out!" she screamed. As I was pounding Akemi's tight pussy Aimi grabbed my head and brought it towards hers and started to kiss me, I fell into it and started to kiss her back. I decided to grab her magnificent tits, massaging them, I could feel Akemi starting to tighten up, squeezing my cock as it went in and out of her. "Oh that feels so good." I said, as I started to throb inside of her. "I'm going to cum!" Akemi said. "Me too! It feels so good" Aimi screamed. "I'm cumming." I said, as I pulled out of Akemi and started to cum all over the two of them. "Mmm, thank you master." The two of them said as they started to lick my cum off of each other.
Once the two of them were all cleaned up, I was satisfied and couldn't go another round, I kissed the both of them and said "Thank you, you two." "It was our pleasure master. We hope to see you again soon back at Fakku." The both of them said while looking just soo cute. "I will most defiantly be back soon" I said with a smile. As I was walking out of the room in the back, I noticed another customer walking into the back, he was wearing a horse head. I watched as he entered another room and I couldn't help but smile. As I was walking out of Fakku I heard my beautiful blue haired maid say "Have a safe trip master". This was the best Christmas ever.
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1452/1500 word were used.
I tried something a little different this time. Instead of trying to adapt a love with two people I decided to just make a sexy story. I hope you enjoyed =) <3 <3 <3
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It's quite funny to read while listening to Ieva's Polka (I was on the Leek spin website page on another tab)
Nonetheless, besides a few typos, it was good. I like the idea of fakku being a service maid cafe.
Nonetheless, besides a few typos, it was good. I like the idea of fakku being a service maid cafe.
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@ Keirova_47. Haha, I actually was listening to it with the Speech thing so I could hear how the story played out, that was funnier then I expected. I'm glad you liked it ^_^. Thank you, I honestly don't see this wining against some of the other ones I've read =) but aslong as I had fun ^_^ <3
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AssasinZAssasin
Not Hentai Protagonist
Interesting! I think this was better than your old one(no offense).
Winning really isn't everything(of course it would be nice to win but), Personally i entered the contest to better myself as a writer. What really matters(i think) is enjoying the process of writing it, seeing people comment...It is a joy i myself am unable to express in words.
Nonetheless, Good luck with the contest! Really nice read, thanks!
Winning really isn't everything(of course it would be nice to win but), Personally i entered the contest to better myself as a writer. What really matters(i think) is enjoying the process of writing it, seeing people comment...It is a joy i myself am unable to express in words.
Nonetheless, Good luck with the contest! Really nice read, thanks!
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@ AssasinZAssasin. Thank you. I do think this is better then my old one, at least for the contest ^_^. Well I don't mind if I don't win, it would be great but I had a fun time writing the stories. Its always good to see people comment on your work, it says that they liked it I suppose, and they took the time to reply and say good job ^_^. Thank you very much for reading and commenting xD and Thank you for wishing me luck =) <3 <3 <3
If you wish to read my other story (Datenshi) After I took it out of the contest and finished with this one I revised it making it longer and adding some of the things that I wanted too. Here is the link <3
https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=78403
If you wish to read my other story (Datenshi) After I took it out of the contest and finished with this one I revised it making it longer and adding some of the things that I wanted too. Here is the link <3
https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=78403
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Well there's an actual Fakku Cafe' in here lol =)
Jokes aside, this is one enjoyable read and I like it, really kinky start but I thought the scenes at the second half
of the story needs a bit more detailing to make it even more hot and steamy. Though there's still the word limit thingy
eh? Well good luck on the contest! =)
Jokes aside, this is one enjoyable read and I like it, really kinky start but I thought the scenes at the second half
of the story needs a bit more detailing to make it even more hot and steamy. Though there's still the word limit thingy
eh? Well good luck on the contest! =)
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high_time wrote...
Well there's an actual Fakku Cafe' in here lol =)Jokes aside, this is one enjoyable read and I like it, really kinky start but I thought the scenes at the second half
of the story needs a bit more detailing to make it even more hot and steamy. Though there's still the word limit thingy
eh? Well good luck on the contest! =)
O_o I had no idea there was an actual Fakku Cafe here lol =p. Thank you, I also love to hear criticism, it helps me with the story I'm working on to try and fix anything that I have done wrong previously. I always say any criticism is good criticism ^^. I really liked your's as well and I wish you luck in the final poll. <3