[Contest Entry 2011] --Fakku History--

News: I change the name From : --Rhyming Stuff-- into : --Fakku History--
-Update- : Added 5-9 lines. I also added names of the first people I met.
-Update- : Added Picture of the Story Teller.




So You've come to hear a story,
It started on two-thousand six,
I'm not good at grammar,
So let me know if there something to fix,

You see my friend,
It was on December,
When the year is about to end,
He created Fakku on his computer,
For all of his friend,

Jacob Grady is the name,
Who brought Fakku into fame,
The Website name was All About Hentai,
But got changed I don't know why,

Fakku now got more than 10 million visitor,
and more than 300,000 users,
When it all mixed together,

How to prescribe Jacob is really difficult,
But I try all I could,
He was an ordinary guy,
Has a side burn,a goatee,
And usually wears a tie,


Well I glad Fakku is still here,
I hope it would last forever,
Because the community here is great
Like that Pizza I just ate,

Sorry, I'm just kidding,
But the people is really nice and great,
Well that's the end of my rhyming,
I hope I post it not too late,

There so many great people here,
Like artcellrox which is a fakku elder,
There also lazyasschillypepper,
Which is one of Fakku uploader,
And Don't forget Jacob Himself,

In Fakku we don't any bookshelf,
Because many comics,
Just waiting to be click,
But there also some video clips,
All of that in your hand,
You can choose anything,
So your day won't be boring,

I'm also hoping for you this isn't long,
Because for me,
This where my anime heart belong,

-Nell
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Sorry Jacob if I describe you wrong T.T

This was fantastic!!!

Thanks, Finally T.T a reply..

nicely done :)

Great stuff!

Thank you~

[color=red][b]I don't quite understand at one point; which are the parts of the rhyme and which are the parts of where you simply leave out notes, which are not part of the rhyme itself.

My Fault.. :) .I know all my problem but if I create all rhyming. I'm afraid it all make no sense.

Want I want to do is try to write a rap,
But I'm afraid you don't allow that,
Because rap is a song,
maybe this is not where it belong,

[color=red][b]We allow that too, actually. We've had such an entry last year. So do it. When you do it, edit your first post of this thread and paste it and notify us (the judges) about it.

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That was rather interesting though. Poetry is my bane personally because of my self critiquing nature. There are some parts I didn't quite understand but the rhymes themselves were really great D: I could have learned about Fakku history from one of my friends but "Fakku History" kept my interest much more aflame :D Keep writing

hehe..this is interesting! good luck!

Thank You~ :)
Even though I doesn't win but I'm glad someone like it. :)

a lovely homage.
I'm not totally sure why but it reminds me of this funny text I read once: "Pizza is like sex, when it's good, it's VERY good; when it's not, it's STILL GOOD!"

Glad you like it. Vote for me~ :D