Evangelion Rewrite Chapter 1
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Evangelion Rewrite
Author's Note: Not sure what to say here, other than i'm attempting to rewrite Evangelion from the ground up.
I understand that this website has quite some a number of Evangelion fans (or rather, Evangelion girls fans). So I hope you all enjoy my potrayal of Neon Genesis Evangelion.
End of Author's Note
Shinji's eyes opened and his pupils dilated to the sudden introduction of light shining through a torn up curtain covered in holes. He lies still for a few moments in order to let the light wash over him. The door shudders as knocking noises fill the room.
"Shinji!" Boomed a voice. "Shinji! I know you're in there, open this damn door right now!" Shinji gets up and staggers over to the door, wiping the tiredness from his eyes. Upon opening the door, he is greeted by the sight of a large African-American staring down at him. "Shinji. Have you got my money?" he asks Shinji.
"Oh, do you mean your rent money, Sam? Well I thought we agreed that I pay you four weeks worth of rent every month. But aren't we only three weeks into this month?" Shinji lazily fires this reply to the giant of a man.
"You're forgetting about last months rent, Shinji, and you only managed to pay the rent before that by selling your cello." Sam intimidatingly growls at Shinji.
"I loved that cello." Shinji says with a reminiscent voice. He looks up at Sam and smiles. Sam, however, contorts his face into an even deeper grimace and forces his left fist into Shinji's stomach with alarming power. Dropping to the floor, Shinji coughs and spits out drool. "I guess that I'm going to be pissing out blood tonight." He mutters to the floor. "You have three days to pay me Shinji or I'll kill you in your sleep." Sam threatens as he bends down to Shinji's level. "You have a letter." He adds after grabbing hold of Shinji's hair, harshly slapping an envelope against his face and leaving. "Thanks Sam!" Shinji shouts into the corridor "I swear we become better friends every day!"
Shinji holds his gut with one hand as he pulls himself back towards the rusted bed, with a lumpy mattress. When he gets to it, he rolls over on top and opens the letter. A photograph falls against his face and he huffs out a breath of air and catches the picture in midair. Studying the picture, he sees a young adult woman wearing a light yellow shirt exposing a deadly cleavage. "Nice tits." Shinji mutters as he looks the photograph over on both sides, only giving a glimpse at the info. Opening the drawer next to him, not paying any attention to the handle falling off after it opens, Shinji pulls out a heap of pictures and looks over them. "Well this makes one more to add to the collection." He pays particular attention to the photo of the young woman in her military suit and again with another picture of her in a light shirt. Moving one hand against the bruise forming on his gut, Shinji gives a closer look at the details written on the newest photo that he received earlier. 'Fine, I'll go join them at Nerv.' He thinks and smirks at the thought of reuniting with his father. 'Yes, today should be the day in which I turn to face him and stop running away.' With this last thought, Shinji gets off of the bed and moves towards the drawer and starts ripping things out of the drawer, money, photographs of the girl, clothes and smokes, he throws it all in a pile on the floor. Reaching into the back of the drawer he pulls out a switch blade and hides it in his pocket, then he folds up the newest photo and also decides to put that in the same pocket. Then he pulls out a lighter from his other pocket and flicks it until a small flame jumps into life. Letting it live delicately for a while, he finally throws it into the pile as well, starting a fire in the middle of the room. Shinji opens the window and climbs out down a pipe, after hitting the floor, he looks up to see smoke follow him from behind in a trail before drifting off into the sky.
The cicadas were making their usual racket in the distance somewhere, but that didn't matter to Shinji as he leaned against a telephone box. He was more focused on this mystery woman being late... and the damn telephone not working. Gazing into the distance he reached into his secondary pocket for some smokes but realized too late that they were gone and so instead he let his hands drop as weakly as his gaze.
A blue haired girl appeared in the distance, Shinji's eyes refocused in an instance, but in that instant she was gone. But a rumble appeared in her place and then a large crashing noise as a monstrous black creature stepped onto a small car and squashed it flatter than paper. The towering nightmare looked like something out of a kid's nightmare and gave Shinji a scare, as he took a stronger stance in case he had to run. An explosion brought a horrid, thick smell to the air and Shinji was just about to run for his life when a slim, blue car screeched to a stop in front of him. "Sorry, did I keep you waiting?" The young female driver asked when the car door opened. Shinji stood up slowly and took out the photograph giving it a hard stare before giving the woman a glance. "Nah, this isn't the right person, she's not showing enough cleavage." He says after putting the photo back in his pocket. "Hey now, don't you think that there are better times to start messing around." She says to him in reply. Shinji just shrugs and goes into a crouching position letting his eyes go unfocused again until another explosion knocks him off balance and a piece of falling rubble crushes the telephone box next to him. "Fine." Shinji finally says "I'll go with you" and with this, Shinji finally gets in the passenger seat of the car and it speeds out of immediate danger.
Fire leapt across the monster and light beamed off of it's body as the missiles impact against it with no effect. Helicopters dart around it firing all manner of explosives and making themselves look like annoying flies in the process. A group of military men watch this in a control room as it is displayed on a large screen. Finally one of them stands up and barks an order. A man using a red telephone nods.
The blue car has made it's way out of danger and is, for now, safe outside the inner area of the city. The driver is looking out through Shinji's window with a pair of binoculars, cramping him in the process. "No... they can't be." She whispers to herself. "Get down!" She yells all of a sudden and pins herself on top of Shinji... A great, blinding light creates a second sun with the force of god. A destructive shock wave blasts the car into the air and it rolls on the ground like a ragdoll before crashing against a large mound of dirt.
Both Shinji and the driver lean against the car after having made it out of the wreckage alive. "Are you alright?" She asks him. Shinji responds by spitting out dirt. "Well you look fine, okay, stand up and HEAVE HO!" She says this and start pushing her back against the car in an attempt to force it over; Shinji gets up and helps her until the car is back on it's wheels. "Well, thanks for you're help." The driver declares to Shinji with a victorious smile. "I've forgotten your name." Shinji declares in a less than humourous manner. "Just call me Misato." She says with the same smile.
"Shinji will do for you then." Shinji replies with. Misato frowns at his bluntness, but smiles again and finally says "I'm glad I've finally met you. Shinji Ikari-kun."
Author's Note: Not sure what to say here, other than i'm attempting to rewrite Evangelion from the ground up.
I understand that this website has quite some a number of Evangelion fans (or rather, Evangelion girls fans). So I hope you all enjoy my potrayal of Neon Genesis Evangelion.
End of Author's Note
Shinji's eyes opened and his pupils dilated to the sudden introduction of light shining through a torn up curtain covered in holes. He lies still for a few moments in order to let the light wash over him. The door shudders as knocking noises fill the room.
"Shinji!" Boomed a voice. "Shinji! I know you're in there, open this damn door right now!" Shinji gets up and staggers over to the door, wiping the tiredness from his eyes. Upon opening the door, he is greeted by the sight of a large African-American staring down at him. "Shinji. Have you got my money?" he asks Shinji.
"Oh, do you mean your rent money, Sam? Well I thought we agreed that I pay you four weeks worth of rent every month. But aren't we only three weeks into this month?" Shinji lazily fires this reply to the giant of a man.
"You're forgetting about last months rent, Shinji, and you only managed to pay the rent before that by selling your cello." Sam intimidatingly growls at Shinji.
"I loved that cello." Shinji says with a reminiscent voice. He looks up at Sam and smiles. Sam, however, contorts his face into an even deeper grimace and forces his left fist into Shinji's stomach with alarming power. Dropping to the floor, Shinji coughs and spits out drool. "I guess that I'm going to be pissing out blood tonight." He mutters to the floor. "You have three days to pay me Shinji or I'll kill you in your sleep." Sam threatens as he bends down to Shinji's level. "You have a letter." He adds after grabbing hold of Shinji's hair, harshly slapping an envelope against his face and leaving. "Thanks Sam!" Shinji shouts into the corridor "I swear we become better friends every day!"
Shinji holds his gut with one hand as he pulls himself back towards the rusted bed, with a lumpy mattress. When he gets to it, he rolls over on top and opens the letter. A photograph falls against his face and he huffs out a breath of air and catches the picture in midair. Studying the picture, he sees a young adult woman wearing a light yellow shirt exposing a deadly cleavage. "Nice tits." Shinji mutters as he looks the photograph over on both sides, only giving a glimpse at the info. Opening the drawer next to him, not paying any attention to the handle falling off after it opens, Shinji pulls out a heap of pictures and looks over them. "Well this makes one more to add to the collection." He pays particular attention to the photo of the young woman in her military suit and again with another picture of her in a light shirt. Moving one hand against the bruise forming on his gut, Shinji gives a closer look at the details written on the newest photo that he received earlier. 'Fine, I'll go join them at Nerv.' He thinks and smirks at the thought of reuniting with his father. 'Yes, today should be the day in which I turn to face him and stop running away.' With this last thought, Shinji gets off of the bed and moves towards the drawer and starts ripping things out of the drawer, money, photographs of the girl, clothes and smokes, he throws it all in a pile on the floor. Reaching into the back of the drawer he pulls out a switch blade and hides it in his pocket, then he folds up the newest photo and also decides to put that in the same pocket. Then he pulls out a lighter from his other pocket and flicks it until a small flame jumps into life. Letting it live delicately for a while, he finally throws it into the pile as well, starting a fire in the middle of the room. Shinji opens the window and climbs out down a pipe, after hitting the floor, he looks up to see smoke follow him from behind in a trail before drifting off into the sky.
The cicadas were making their usual racket in the distance somewhere, but that didn't matter to Shinji as he leaned against a telephone box. He was more focused on this mystery woman being late... and the damn telephone not working. Gazing into the distance he reached into his secondary pocket for some smokes but realized too late that they were gone and so instead he let his hands drop as weakly as his gaze.
A blue haired girl appeared in the distance, Shinji's eyes refocused in an instance, but in that instant she was gone. But a rumble appeared in her place and then a large crashing noise as a monstrous black creature stepped onto a small car and squashed it flatter than paper. The towering nightmare looked like something out of a kid's nightmare and gave Shinji a scare, as he took a stronger stance in case he had to run. An explosion brought a horrid, thick smell to the air and Shinji was just about to run for his life when a slim, blue car screeched to a stop in front of him. "Sorry, did I keep you waiting?" The young female driver asked when the car door opened. Shinji stood up slowly and took out the photograph giving it a hard stare before giving the woman a glance. "Nah, this isn't the right person, she's not showing enough cleavage." He says after putting the photo back in his pocket. "Hey now, don't you think that there are better times to start messing around." She says to him in reply. Shinji just shrugs and goes into a crouching position letting his eyes go unfocused again until another explosion knocks him off balance and a piece of falling rubble crushes the telephone box next to him. "Fine." Shinji finally says "I'll go with you" and with this, Shinji finally gets in the passenger seat of the car and it speeds out of immediate danger.
Fire leapt across the monster and light beamed off of it's body as the missiles impact against it with no effect. Helicopters dart around it firing all manner of explosives and making themselves look like annoying flies in the process. A group of military men watch this in a control room as it is displayed on a large screen. Finally one of them stands up and barks an order. A man using a red telephone nods.
The blue car has made it's way out of danger and is, for now, safe outside the inner area of the city. The driver is looking out through Shinji's window with a pair of binoculars, cramping him in the process. "No... they can't be." She whispers to herself. "Get down!" She yells all of a sudden and pins herself on top of Shinji... A great, blinding light creates a second sun with the force of god. A destructive shock wave blasts the car into the air and it rolls on the ground like a ragdoll before crashing against a large mound of dirt.
Both Shinji and the driver lean against the car after having made it out of the wreckage alive. "Are you alright?" She asks him. Shinji responds by spitting out dirt. "Well you look fine, okay, stand up and HEAVE HO!" She says this and start pushing her back against the car in an attempt to force it over; Shinji gets up and helps her until the car is back on it's wheels. "Well, thanks for you're help." The driver declares to Shinji with a victorious smile. "I've forgotten your name." Shinji declares in a less than humourous manner. "Just call me Misato." She says with the same smile.
"Shinji will do for you then." Shinji replies with. Misato frowns at his bluntness, but smiles again and finally says "I'm glad I've finally met you. Shinji Ikari-kun."