Xenon wrote...
A nice AABCCB rhyming poem, though I'm having a seriously hard time reading it to the appropriate rhythm. Maybe it might just not appeal to me, however it shows talent through the story with the appropriate rhyming I know I could not create through frustration and impatience.
Yeah, I noticed the rhythm problem too, since even when I read it I get the timing messed up occasionally, but I can see where the problem is, because I didn't use a repeating rhythm, and instead changed it up from stanza to stanza.