Loving Life
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I could feel my body stirring so I opened my eyes, but all I saw was darkness. I looked at the time and saw that it read, 2:25 AM.
†˜About two and a half hours of sleep.’ I think as turnover on the bed. I smile as I see your sleeping face next to me. I tenderly place a soft kiss on your lips and close my eyes to sleep. As I slowly relax my body, I feel your hand run up and down my thigh. I opened my eyes to see you smirking at me.
“Did I wake you up?” I ask.
“A little.” You answer.
“I’m sorry.” I reply.
You brought me closer to your body so that my bare breasts lay against your naked chest and you kissed my forehead.
“It’s okay, Babe.” You say, “But, to make sure you don’t do it again, I’m gonna have to punish you.”
Your hand began to wander away from my thigh and inward. You began to rub your fingers over me, again and again. I closed my eyes, enjoying my punishment. You pushed me onto my back and stopped rubbing me. I opened my eyes and stared up at you.
“What?” You ask.
“I thought you were gonna punish me.” I say.
“I don’t know.” You answer.
I looked at your face and then down your body to find your manhood already standing. Needy and waiting.
“Really?” I ask, stroking you, “You’re already this excited and pulsing. I think he wants to punish me”
I sat up and kissed you passionately, making your body weak so I was able to push you onto your back. I moved backwards on the bed a bit, leaned over, and licked the tip. I looked up as I stroked you.
“Should I stop?” I ask, blowing on your shaft.
“No.” You answer.
I smile and say “Okay.” I switched between licking and blowing air on you for a while, getting you wet and making you harder. I kissed the tip, right before I placed my mouth over your need. I teased you, only playing with the tip. You moaned as I licked, sucked, and nipped at the tip before allowing you further entrance to my mouth. You gripped the covers as I started sucking, while stroking you. I rubbed my tongue over and around you as I sucked.
I broke away and leaned back to you and kissed you, passionately, while stroking you. You began to rub me again, in the middle of our kiss and broke to tell me that I was already soaked. I smiled at you.
“Is that a problem?” I ask.
You smirked at me and began to put your fingers inside of me. You began to move them in and out, getting me even wetter.
The rhythm of the strokes slowed as I enjoyed the pleasure you were giving me. The more I felt you inside me, the slower I stroked you.
You took your fingers out and licked my juices off, as I collected my breath. I gave you a quick kiss before I started sucking on you again. My tongue rolled over your tip and down your shaft as I sucked and stroked you, doing so until you were wet again.
I kissed you again and this time, you lowered me onto my back. I smiled, feeling your naked body on top of me.
“I love you.” I say.
“I love you, too.” You reply and then kiss me.
You slowly begin to leave a trail of kisses down my neck and my chest, but go back up to blow in my ear, knowing that it would turn me on further. Before I know it, you were already sucking on one breast and playing with the other, teasing my already hard nipples.
I moaned, enjoying the sparks running through my body at your touch. Quickly, you switch from one breast to the other. You move your mouth to the top of my bust and begin sucking and nipping at my skin, making me arch my back and buck my pelvis. You look at my naked body and your mark, claiming me as yours. You eye my hard nipples and gently tug on them. I let out a loud moan.
“Seems like you love to be punished.” You say.
A blush creeps over my cheeks as I think about all the pleasure and love you have given me.
“Only you. “ I pant, “I want to only be punished by you. I don’t want anyone else touching me. You know my body, all my weaknesses, everything. It’s not my body anymore; it’s yours.”
You smile down at me and place a soft kiss on my lips. “I feel the same. This is your body, now. You’re the only one who can make it cry and bring it pleasure.” You say before you push your fingers inside of me.
I began to feel the pleasure again and my body began to cry for you more.
“Something misses you babe.” I tell you.
“Someone misses you, too.” You reply.
You pull me up and I can tell you want me on top of you so I gently push you down on the bed.
First, I kiss you with all of my heart and begin to go down liking your neck. As soon as I get to your chest I lean up and lightly blow in your right ear. I make my way down to your stomach and kiss you. When I get to your upper thigh, I start to suck, causing you to moan. I smile and sit just below your stomach as I grab a hold of your hard cock, positioning myself. I slowly sit on top of you, feeling overwhelmed by you and your size.
Quickly, you grab ahold of my hips and push me down the rest of your length. I cry out and shudder in pleasure, feeling all of you inside of me once again.
“You’re pussy feels so tight around my cock.” You moan, being the first to recover.
“Your cock feels so big. I can feel you pulsing inside of me.” I cry, still feeling the pleasure.
You tighten your grip on my hips and thrust upwards, even more if possible. I cry out again as you begin thrusting in and out of me. Once I had gotten use to your size, I take over. I place my hand on your chest and begin moving my hips up and down on my own. You close your eyes, as you feel my womanhood wrap around you, gripping your most sensitive area. I quickly begin rubbing my hips against yours, causing you to moan. Wanting to feel more pleasure, you grab my waist and thrust upwards. You knock me forward and kiss me, while you forcefully thrust into me from your position. I moan into your mouth, feeling nothing but pleasure as you thrust into me faster and harder. I can feel the pleasure building deep inside of me, waiting to explode, but before I can tell you, “Faster!”, you stop thrusting into me altogether.
I just stare at you, waiting for an answer.
You smirk at my face and say “How should I punish you now?”
“It doesn’t matter.” I say, rubbing my hips against yours.
“Get off.” You say.
Fearing I did something wrong, I quickly get off you and the bed. You sit up and quickly go to my side, grab my wrist, and push me face first onto the bed. You grab my hips, position them, and thrust your thick manhood inside of me.
I let out a moan and grip onto the sheets.
“You feel so much bigger this way.” I pant, “I can feel you all inside of me. So deep! ”
“But you like it this way, don’ t you? You like when my cock is deep inside you pussy, huh?” you say , slapping my ass.
I let out a moan and arch my back, while you keep thrusting into me.
“Ha-Harder!” I cry out, “Faster! I want to feel inside me more!”
You move one of your hands from my waist and grip my hair that was hid my face. I moan feeling the electricity running through my entire body from two different places. You tug a little bit more and moan.
“You’re such a naughty girl. You love the rough stuff, huh? Maybe I should find some rope and tie you up. Would you like that?” you say, placing random kisses on my spine, “Every time I pull your hair, I can feel your pussy tightening around me; trying to make my cock cum.”
I shudder under the pleasure from your lips against my flesh and can feel the pressure building inside of me again.
“Don’t stop!” I cry, “I’m gonna cum soon.”
You let go of my hair and start thrusting deeper, harder, and faster than you had before. My breathing becomes short and rapid pants as you keep the same pace. I grip onto the sheets more, if possible, and explode around you.
“Your pussy’s gotten so much wetter now, but I still haven’t came.” You say, pulling out of me and flipping me onto my back. Before I have time to recover, I feel your tongue lapping away at me. I close my eyes and moan, arching my back, as you lick my clit. Your tongue twists around it, playfully teasing me, bringing more pleasure and excitement to my body. Without a word, you stop and push your manhood inside my wet folds again.
“I want to satisfy you so much. I want to make you cum! I want you to feel good, too!” I pant, as you rub and tease my clit more, while thrusting your whole length in and out, again and again.
“I know and you always make me feel good, no matter what.” You say, kissing me again. You continue going in and out my womanhood, leaving nothing but pleasure, grinding your hips against mine. I feel the pleasure building again, as you thrust into me harder and harder, faster with each breath. I can feel you pulsing inside of me, getting ready to unleash yourself within.
“I’m gonna cum! I’m gonna cum!” you cry, forcefully thrusting harder and faster until you’ve hit your peak and mine, causing us both to wither in ecstasy. Panting above me, you try to regain some energy as you leak inside me still. Even though you are still pulsating inside of me, you pull your cock out, shooting some on my hips and lay next to me on the bed.
“I love you.” You say, closing your eyes.
“I love you, too.” I reply, doing the same.
“Sweet dreams.” You answer.
I smile and say, “Of this.” And fall asleep.
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†˜About two and a half hours of sleep.’ I think as turnover on the bed. I smile as I see your sleeping face next to me. I tenderly place a soft kiss on your lips and close my eyes to sleep. As I slowly relax my body, I feel your hand run up and down my thigh. I opened my eyes to see you smirking at me.
“Did I wake you up?” I ask.
“A little.” You answer.
“I’m sorry.” I reply.
You brought me closer to your body so that my bare breasts lay against your naked chest and you kissed my forehead.
“It’s okay, Babe.” You say, “But, to make sure you don’t do it again, I’m gonna have to punish you.”
Your hand began to wander away from my thigh and inward. You began to rub your fingers over me, again and again. I closed my eyes, enjoying my punishment. You pushed me onto my back and stopped rubbing me. I opened my eyes and stared up at you.
“What?” You ask.
“I thought you were gonna punish me.” I say.
“I don’t know.” You answer.
I looked at your face and then down your body to find your manhood already standing. Needy and waiting.
“Really?” I ask, stroking you, “You’re already this excited and pulsing. I think he wants to punish me”
I sat up and kissed you passionately, making your body weak so I was able to push you onto your back. I moved backwards on the bed a bit, leaned over, and licked the tip. I looked up as I stroked you.
“Should I stop?” I ask, blowing on your shaft.
“No.” You answer.
I smile and say “Okay.” I switched between licking and blowing air on you for a while, getting you wet and making you harder. I kissed the tip, right before I placed my mouth over your need. I teased you, only playing with the tip. You moaned as I licked, sucked, and nipped at the tip before allowing you further entrance to my mouth. You gripped the covers as I started sucking, while stroking you. I rubbed my tongue over and around you as I sucked.
I broke away and leaned back to you and kissed you, passionately, while stroking you. You began to rub me again, in the middle of our kiss and broke to tell me that I was already soaked. I smiled at you.
“Is that a problem?” I ask.
You smirked at me and began to put your fingers inside of me. You began to move them in and out, getting me even wetter.
The rhythm of the strokes slowed as I enjoyed the pleasure you were giving me. The more I felt you inside me, the slower I stroked you.
You took your fingers out and licked my juices off, as I collected my breath. I gave you a quick kiss before I started sucking on you again. My tongue rolled over your tip and down your shaft as I sucked and stroked you, doing so until you were wet again.
I kissed you again and this time, you lowered me onto my back. I smiled, feeling your naked body on top of me.
“I love you.” I say.
“I love you, too.” You reply and then kiss me.
You slowly begin to leave a trail of kisses down my neck and my chest, but go back up to blow in my ear, knowing that it would turn me on further. Before I know it, you were already sucking on one breast and playing with the other, teasing my already hard nipples.
I moaned, enjoying the sparks running through my body at your touch. Quickly, you switch from one breast to the other. You move your mouth to the top of my bust and begin sucking and nipping at my skin, making me arch my back and buck my pelvis. You look at my naked body and your mark, claiming me as yours. You eye my hard nipples and gently tug on them. I let out a loud moan.
“Seems like you love to be punished.” You say.
A blush creeps over my cheeks as I think about all the pleasure and love you have given me.
“Only you. “ I pant, “I want to only be punished by you. I don’t want anyone else touching me. You know my body, all my weaknesses, everything. It’s not my body anymore; it’s yours.”
You smile down at me and place a soft kiss on my lips. “I feel the same. This is your body, now. You’re the only one who can make it cry and bring it pleasure.” You say before you push your fingers inside of me.
I began to feel the pleasure again and my body began to cry for you more.
“Something misses you babe.” I tell you.
“Someone misses you, too.” You reply.
You pull me up and I can tell you want me on top of you so I gently push you down on the bed.
First, I kiss you with all of my heart and begin to go down liking your neck. As soon as I get to your chest I lean up and lightly blow in your right ear. I make my way down to your stomach and kiss you. When I get to your upper thigh, I start to suck, causing you to moan. I smile and sit just below your stomach as I grab a hold of your hard cock, positioning myself. I slowly sit on top of you, feeling overwhelmed by you and your size.
Quickly, you grab ahold of my hips and push me down the rest of your length. I cry out and shudder in pleasure, feeling all of you inside of me once again.
“You’re pussy feels so tight around my cock.” You moan, being the first to recover.
“Your cock feels so big. I can feel you pulsing inside of me.” I cry, still feeling the pleasure.
You tighten your grip on my hips and thrust upwards, even more if possible. I cry out again as you begin thrusting in and out of me. Once I had gotten use to your size, I take over. I place my hand on your chest and begin moving my hips up and down on my own. You close your eyes, as you feel my womanhood wrap around you, gripping your most sensitive area. I quickly begin rubbing my hips against yours, causing you to moan. Wanting to feel more pleasure, you grab my waist and thrust upwards. You knock me forward and kiss me, while you forcefully thrust into me from your position. I moan into your mouth, feeling nothing but pleasure as you thrust into me faster and harder. I can feel the pleasure building deep inside of me, waiting to explode, but before I can tell you, “Faster!”, you stop thrusting into me altogether.
I just stare at you, waiting for an answer.
You smirk at my face and say “How should I punish you now?”
“It doesn’t matter.” I say, rubbing my hips against yours.
“Get off.” You say.
Fearing I did something wrong, I quickly get off you and the bed. You sit up and quickly go to my side, grab my wrist, and push me face first onto the bed. You grab my hips, position them, and thrust your thick manhood inside of me.
I let out a moan and grip onto the sheets.
“You feel so much bigger this way.” I pant, “I can feel you all inside of me. So deep! ”
“But you like it this way, don’ t you? You like when my cock is deep inside you pussy, huh?” you say , slapping my ass.
I let out a moan and arch my back, while you keep thrusting into me.
“Ha-Harder!” I cry out, “Faster! I want to feel inside me more!”
You move one of your hands from my waist and grip my hair that was hid my face. I moan feeling the electricity running through my entire body from two different places. You tug a little bit more and moan.
“You’re such a naughty girl. You love the rough stuff, huh? Maybe I should find some rope and tie you up. Would you like that?” you say, placing random kisses on my spine, “Every time I pull your hair, I can feel your pussy tightening around me; trying to make my cock cum.”
I shudder under the pleasure from your lips against my flesh and can feel the pressure building inside of me again.
“Don’t stop!” I cry, “I’m gonna cum soon.”
You let go of my hair and start thrusting deeper, harder, and faster than you had before. My breathing becomes short and rapid pants as you keep the same pace. I grip onto the sheets more, if possible, and explode around you.
“Your pussy’s gotten so much wetter now, but I still haven’t came.” You say, pulling out of me and flipping me onto my back. Before I have time to recover, I feel your tongue lapping away at me. I close my eyes and moan, arching my back, as you lick my clit. Your tongue twists around it, playfully teasing me, bringing more pleasure and excitement to my body. Without a word, you stop and push your manhood inside my wet folds again.
“I want to satisfy you so much. I want to make you cum! I want you to feel good, too!” I pant, as you rub and tease my clit more, while thrusting your whole length in and out, again and again.
“I know and you always make me feel good, no matter what.” You say, kissing me again. You continue going in and out my womanhood, leaving nothing but pleasure, grinding your hips against mine. I feel the pleasure building again, as you thrust into me harder and harder, faster with each breath. I can feel you pulsing inside of me, getting ready to unleash yourself within.
“I’m gonna cum! I’m gonna cum!” you cry, forcefully thrusting harder and faster until you’ve hit your peak and mine, causing us both to wither in ecstasy. Panting above me, you try to regain some energy as you leak inside me still. Even though you are still pulsating inside of me, you pull your cock out, shooting some on my hips and lay next to me on the bed.
“I love you.” You say, closing your eyes.
“I love you, too.” I reply, doing the same.
“Sweet dreams.” You answer.
I smile and say, “Of this.” And fall asleep.
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
I think this deserves a standing ovation. Nothing better in my book than the sweet spiritual connection of two romantic lovers intertwined in passionate and loving sex. A pity you didn't enter the contest, I think you would have been great. Needless to say this lemon is quite arousing and enjoyable. I think my favorite part was the admittance of the relinquish of ownership of their bodies to each other, as it was quite warming and heartfelt. I look forward to reading more from you.
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I'm divided on this one a bit, because I liked the quality of the lemon, the story, and the emotions, but while the first person to second person style is a bold direction to take, it wasn't executed as well as it could have been, and felt a little awkward and stumbling at points.
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mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
I like it. Using "you" was kinda awkward to me, but still, lemon-wise, awesome.
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GroverCleaveland wrote...
I'm divided on this one a bit, because I liked the quality of the lemon, the story, and the emotions, but while the first person to second person style is a bold direction to take, it wasn't executed as well as it could have been, and felt a little awkward and stumbling at points.^^^This.
Although having used "you" in the lemon made me feel uncomfortable since some of the actions taken in this lemon were actions I probably would not have done. However, I do like how the lemon was written, and the emotional aspect given.
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ya... i got confused w/ the You, I, me stuff... if u put some characters to them it would make things easier (only an opinion tho) other than that, its awesum work o.O
great work in executing a lemon
great work in executing a lemon
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I barely post anymore but I've got to say, this is pretty tight. I also like the first person style. Keep on writing.
