A poem i wrote for my creative writing class sometime ago. Just wanted to know what the internet thinks about this. Oh, and it is rather morbid. My other creative writing teacher said my stories had a rather gothic feel to them. Either way, you have been warned :D
Mustard Gas
creeping death; unaware presence
reaper’s shadow lingers above
the now living; the timer starts
t i c k i n g, r u n n i n g out and out
black shade of all
powerful existence; fate sealed
scratches
the madness starts
blisters, yellow blisters
forming and popping!
skin gets rip ped apart
begun has your.
madness:
scratching off your skin,
yellow o o z i n g out
of your own bag of meat
vision fades:
eyes popping out;
waving good-bye
to your rotten flesh
taste of blood rises
fills the mouth
from air sacks falling apart
one by one
the lungs bleed
the eyes cry out
the skin explodes
the... the... the...
never knew it was there
no symptoms, no warnings.
undetectable fatality
killing as it sees fit
infected? who knows
cure? suicide
safe? never
you? will die.