My First Attempt At A Story.

Hello minna!♡

I just wrote and posted my first story on adult-fanfiction. I was wondering if you all could check it out, and tell me what you think. :3

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107789

I wouldn't call it a story. Now don't get me wrong, I do think it is a nicely written piece, but it having just a scene makes me unable to call it a story. Keep it up.

Well, there's a reason I called it a one-shot. I don't know what else you'd call it besides a piece of writing.

A story. Regardless of whether or not it's just a scene or a 50,000 word novel, if it has a beginning, middle, and end, it's a story.