My poem for Miku Hatsune's song
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Um... I did this poem while listening to Miku Hatsune's "Hope". I did this in roughly 30 minutes. Please listen to the song as you read this. Even though I say it's a poem, it can sort of be a song.
Er... If you've seen the romaji of the song, mine sort of matches up with the verses and each part and stuff... You can probably sing along if you want to.. Just remember it's not an English translation of the song.. It's just a poem I made to fit it. "Hope".
I should stop talking.. Typing now.
But for those that are too lazy to do a lot of work to read a poem, here is the entire poem. I must ask of you to at least just listen to the song (it's below) while reading the poem. Unlike the bonus stuff below.
Stand up and live.
Do not stop for too long.
Rather than take, just give.
Each life keeps playing like a song.
Run through the darkness,
With no thought, no meaning.
Do you feel that heartbeat in your chest?
It means you're a living being.
Go forward, do not go backward.
Do not stay on your knees and grieve.
Your thoughts can be heard.
Get up and fight, for what you believe.
Shout till your throat is sore.
Sing till your voice is gone and dies.
It needs you to, more and more.
Till dead you are, free from the dark and lies
Cry if you want to.
But you can do more than just that.
Die if you want to.
Just remember where you are at.
It's within the deepest reaches of your heart.
Live your life, try not to cry.
Live well and content, you deserve it, definitely.
Run out of the darkness; make your way into the light.
Please don't give up, it's not your destiny.
*BONUS!*
I worked hard on this, as it may be my best poem yet. Please enjoy. Here is Miku's video, this is also for a "bonus" way of reading my poem.
Please listen to it while reading.
Which means as she sings, read the poem. If she stops singing, stop reading. (Which is why I inserted the break) And PLEASE OPEN ALL THE SPOILERS BEFOREHAND, FROM THIS POINT ON.
As you are reading this part, Miku should be singing this part:
Stand up and live.
Do not stop for too long.
Rather than take, just give.
Each life keeps playing like a song.
As you are reading this part, Miku should be singing this part:
Run through the darkness,
With no thought, no meaning.
Do you feel that heartbeat in your chest?
It means you're a living being.
As you are reading this part, Miku should be singing this part:
Go forward, do not go backward.
Do not stay on your knees and grieve.
Your thoughts can be heard.
Get up and fight, for what you believe.
As you are reading, Miku should be singing this part:
Shout till your throat is sore.
Sing till your voice is gone and dies.
It needs you to, more and more.
Till dead you are, free from the dark and lies.
Instrumental Break.
As you are reading this part, Miku should be singing this part:
Cry if you want to.
But you can do more than just that.
Die if you want to.
Just remember where you are at.
As you are reading, Miku should should be singing this part:
It's within the deepest reaches of your heart.
As you are reading this part, Miku should be singing this part:
Live your life, try not to cry.
Live well and content, you deserve it, definitely.
Run out of the darkness; make your way into the light.
Please don't give up, it's not your destiny.
*Edit*
I edited this at least 100 times...
When I first put it up, I thought people wouldn't take the time to read it 'cause it's a bit complicated. So I tried to make it less complicated. I also re-edited the poem. It took an hour to edit 30 minutes of work. Oh jeez...
Well, to those who actually read the poem, thank you. And to those who took precious time to do the bonus and read the poem along with the song, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
And for those who actually did all that AND read my edit, YOU'RE AWESOME!
(And you will all be given infinite amounts of hugsies!)
Spoiler:
Er... If you've seen the romaji of the song, mine sort of matches up with the verses and each part and stuff... You can probably sing along if you want to.. Just remember it's not an English translation of the song.. It's just a poem I made to fit it. "Hope".
Spoiler:
I should stop talking.. Typing now.
Spoiler:
But for those that are too lazy to do a lot of work to read a poem, here is the entire poem. I must ask of you to at least just listen to the song (it's below) while reading the poem. Unlike the bonus stuff below.
Stand up and live.
Do not stop for too long.
Rather than take, just give.
Each life keeps playing like a song.
Run through the darkness,
With no thought, no meaning.
Do you feel that heartbeat in your chest?
It means you're a living being.
Go forward, do not go backward.
Do not stay on your knees and grieve.
Your thoughts can be heard.
Get up and fight, for what you believe.
Shout till your throat is sore.
Sing till your voice is gone and dies.
It needs you to, more and more.
Till dead you are, free from the dark and lies
Cry if you want to.
But you can do more than just that.
Die if you want to.
Just remember where you are at.
It's within the deepest reaches of your heart.
Live your life, try not to cry.
Live well and content, you deserve it, definitely.
Run out of the darkness; make your way into the light.
Please don't give up, it's not your destiny.
*BONUS!*
I worked hard on this, as it may be my best poem yet. Please enjoy. Here is Miku's video, this is also for a "bonus" way of reading my poem.
Please listen to it while reading.
Which means as she sings, read the poem. If she stops singing, stop reading. (Which is why I inserted the break) And PLEASE OPEN ALL THE SPOILERS BEFOREHAND, FROM THIS POINT ON.
Spoiler:
As you are reading this part, Miku should be singing this part:
Spoiler:
Stand up and live.
Do not stop for too long.
Rather than take, just give.
Each life keeps playing like a song.
As you are reading this part, Miku should be singing this part:
Spoiler:
Run through the darkness,
With no thought, no meaning.
Do you feel that heartbeat in your chest?
It means you're a living being.
As you are reading this part, Miku should be singing this part:
Spoiler:
Go forward, do not go backward.
Do not stay on your knees and grieve.
Your thoughts can be heard.
Get up and fight, for what you believe.
As you are reading, Miku should be singing this part:
Spoiler:
Shout till your throat is sore.
Sing till your voice is gone and dies.
It needs you to, more and more.
Till dead you are, free from the dark and lies.
Instrumental Break.
As you are reading this part, Miku should be singing this part:
Spoiler:
Cry if you want to.
But you can do more than just that.
Die if you want to.
Just remember where you are at.
As you are reading, Miku should should be singing this part:
Spoiler:
It's within the deepest reaches of your heart.
As you are reading this part, Miku should be singing this part:
Spoiler:
Live your life, try not to cry.
Live well and content, you deserve it, definitely.
Run out of the darkness; make your way into the light.
Please don't give up, it's not your destiny.
*Edit*
I edited this at least 100 times...
Spoiler:
When I first put it up, I thought people wouldn't take the time to read it 'cause it's a bit complicated. So I tried to make it less complicated. I also re-edited the poem. It took an hour to edit 30 minutes of work. Oh jeez...
Spoiler:
Well, to those who actually read the poem, thank you. And to those who took precious time to do the bonus and read the poem along with the song, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
Spoiler:
And for those who actually did all that AND read my edit, YOU'RE AWESOME!
(And you will all be given infinite amounts of hugsies!)
Spoiler:
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U should take a rest ^_^ u're overworked for this !! really awesome work u had here !! *kiss* !! Ruu...
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I have to say, that was excellent. I hit play on the video and started reading (paused at the instrumental) and the poem fit right in with the song. In fact, if I didn't understand some or most of the words (unfortunately or fortunately, I do) I would have thought that your poem was the direct translation. It's that good. It fits. Beautifully written. I hope to see more from you. :D
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I think this wonderful poem deserves a small bump.
I loved it. ^^
It seriously was awesome, and the poem fitted right in with the song. Just as Fak_ku said, if I hadn't understood most of the song lyrics I'd think that it was an actual translation.
I loved it. ^^
It seriously was awesome, and the poem fitted right in with the song. Just as Fak_ku said, if I hadn't understood most of the song lyrics I'd think that it was an actual translation.
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wow this was really nice zeph. The fact that the poem matches the song as Fak_ku said only makes this even more beautiful.
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Took me a couple of times to relisten and read it to truly get the feeling of the poem but after my 4th time re-reading while listening to the song I found common ground or felt it went well throughout the majority of the poem. It was like I imagined someone narrating the poem while the song was playing. I especially thought the first half of poem leading to the instrumental break went so well with the song but had a harder time trying to see a connection with the 2nd stanza.
P.S. Also thanks for adding a new song to my Miku library, first time I heard this song.
P.S. Also thanks for adding a new song to my Miku library, first time I heard this song.
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lelouch20 wrote...
Took me a couple of times to relisten and read it to truly get the feeling of the poem but after my 4th time re-reading while listening to the song I found common ground or felt it went well throughout the majority of the poem. It was like I imagined someone narrating the poem while the song was playing. I especially thought the first half of poem leading to the instrumental break went so well with the song but had a harder time trying to see a connection with the 2nd stanza.P.S. Also thanks for adding a new song to my Miku library, first time I heard this song.
No problem, and thanks for commenting and giving feedback.
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