poem :)

i wrote this poem a while ago.


If life is a clock that forever winds, till those who have it go out of their minds,
A clock like this needs a very special key, and who better to hold it than someone like me,
I watch your clock, await your last breath, and I decide whats the right time or your death.
Don't look so sad, you don't get to choose, by the end of your days there's not much to lose.
From healthiest child to the old or impaired, I've no idea why you people get so scared.
It's not like I'm hunting, only for you, all I want is to take what I'm due.
Forgive me for snapping, I try not to be mad, it's just a bit difficult when you all look so sad.
I am not evil, lets get this clear, you have to come with, there's nothing to fear.
Please just think as you go on your way, what it's like for me to do this all day.

The poem must be about (the personification of) Death.

It was a pretty nice read, nonetheless.

it is. I find it easier to write sad things than happy things. Something about writing the sad feelings away :)

Hands down on the content. I find it interesting and relatable. I really enjoyed how you personified death, especially when he claims that he is innocent. If not for the punctuation marks and some grammatical errors, I will be satisfied to give you a perfect grade.

Thank you for sharing this. I hope more from you.