Rin After Story (A KS fanfic)
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Well shit, I wrote it. But it's not done. I don't even think I could call it the first chapter. There's a blowjob scene. Tell me what you think. This song would go along with it, by the way: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vt2wHUJHbbg
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The rattle of the wheels on the train tracks jolt me awake. My first thought is of the familiar warm sensation to my right; the natural phenomenon they call "Tezuka Rin", sleeping on my shoulder. My second thought is of the train we're on, and how we're the only two people in the car. The rattling softens, a sensation reinforced by the beams of morning sun pouring through the windows. I try to go back to sleep, resting my head on her head, while thinking about what happened yesterday.
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Rin's face crumples up like she smelled something bad.
"What is it?" I ask her, while holding the letter up for her.
"My dad. He wants me to go back home. For the holidays", she says through a slightly strained voice.
"Your dad?" I hope I didn't raise my voice too much, but of course, Rin shows her selective attention to detail by remarking, "Yes. I am a child, more specifically, a daughter".
She's wearing that half-a-smile, probably because I amused her. Immediately after delivering that obvious statement, her face scrunches up again, before relaxing and asking me, "Wanna come?"
"Where is it?" I ask back. She doesn't change her facial expression as she answers, "By the sea".
I take a quick look outside the window towards the horizon and then ask, "So it's a costal town?"
She nods, "Wanna come?" She turns her head away like she could care less, but I know otherwise. I reply, "Well...sure, why not".
I think about it, before asking, "Hey, one of these days, you wanna meet my parents too?"
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"...This is your conductor speaking. We have arrived at Osamuoka. This is the last stop on this train. Please check your belongings before..."
"Rin, wake up", I say. Her shoulders shiver, her consciousness rising from deep slumber, and then her eyes open and blink. She lifts her head off my shoulder and stands up with a nod. We leave the train together and step onto a station platform bathed in light. The walls and pillars of the open-air platform are like caramel yellow and the patterns on them are the same you could find in a long stretch of sand. The whole station reminds me of a beach, actually. Rin calls out, "This way" and I follow her lead. We walk down a tiny set of stone steps, past a station attendant who raises an eyebrow at Rin, before finally entering the seaside town of Rin's childhood.
I take a look around and I can see an ocean hiding behind an indefinite number of buildings. A natural aura permeates the town, and on the opposite edge of my view lies a forest, leaving Osamuoka in the middle. A large road that's probably the main path leads directly into the center of the town, with smaller paths and roads branching out.
"No place like home?" I ask Rin. With a confused look on her face, she replies, "...Aren't there plenty of other towns like this one?"
"No, I mean, how does it feel to be back in the place where you grew up?" I ask. She sweeps her gaze over the town, before saying, "Nothing's changed".
"How can you be so sure?" I ask. She shrugs, a very Rin-like response. I continue, "After all, you've changed, haven't you?" I give her a quick kiss on the lips. She looks bewildered.
"Hisao..." she begins, but I don't let her finish, and with a smile on my face, I ask, "So which way's your dad?"
She gives me a sulky look and then promptly continues leading the way, five steps ahead of me. Maybe that was too much...
"So, what does your dad do?" I ask. Rin answers, "He bakes".
"Oh. Is he g-" I start to ask, before walking into Rin by accident. She's stopped walking, and is simply standing there. I circle around to see her open her mouth for a second, and then close it again. Well, that's strange...even for Rin. I worriedly ask her, "What's wrong?"
Did my kiss upset her that much?
"Shhh", is the reply I get.
"Wha-"
"RIN-RIN! IS THAT YOU!?"
A man starts to run towards us, waving both of his arms in the air while smiling. Rin suddenly sprints off, running in full stride for the opposite direction. My head switches between looking at Rin's dashing figure and the man's increasing proximity.
(There would be a choice here to either chase after Rin or stay behind.)
I take off, chasing after Rin. Behind me, I hear the words, "OH?! IS THIS TAG?! THIS BRINGS BACK MEMORIES, IT DOES!"
I think he got even faster. I pick up the pace, and with some effort I manage to catch up to Rin. I'm a little pleased with myself, since it seems all those weeks spent running with Emi don't seem to have been a waste. It might be the air around here or something, but I feel like I could run for miles. I'm more than happy to go for a light run with Rin. I rush up beside Rin and ask her between breaths, "Rin, what's wrong?"
She suddenly stops, for the second time today, while I keep running for another five feet before stopping too. I turn around to see her looking from side to side, trying to find something. In a stroke of insight and luck, I look around and immediately find an open door. I beckon to her, "Rin, over here".
She hesitantly looks at the door, but I'm already inside. It's just an empty room the size of a small closet. A chain hangs from the center of the ceiling and I pull on it, letting it fill with light. I step back outside and motion for her to come. She takes a look behind her before following me into the room. I close the door behind us, and now it's just the two of us.
"Why were you running from him?" I ask. Rin takes a look around the room, and notices the chain before deciding to answer, "He's scary".
Coincidentally, we hear his voice cry out, "Rin-rin! Where are you?!"
Rin quickly stretches out her neck to grip the chain with her lips, turning off the light. The man's voice cries out again, this time louder and closer, "Rin-rin! I'm going to find you!"
And then it's quiet. Rin's breath is warm and touches my neck. I reach out to try and hold her, but then pain shoots through my arms and chest, and I involuntarily freeze up. The sound of my not uncommon irregular heartbeat is pounding in my eardrums, but I can make out one faint voice, "Hisao".
My outstretched hand moves past Rin and instead props itself on the wall, while I reach up with my other hand to clench my throat. A second of fear, pain, and anxiety passes, and then another. Suddenly, I feel a warm pressure on my chest. Another heartbeat joins mine, and as time passes, the pain begins to subside. I hear the words, "I'll make you feel better, Hisao".
I look down to see Rin moving below me, and I struggle to cry out, "Rin?!"
She rubs her head on my groin, and blood starts to flow downwards. She continues to nuzzle her face against my nascent erection while I try again, "Rin, that's enough..."
Instead, she swiftly pulls the zipper down with her teeth and uses her tongue and lips to fish out my hardening erection, taking it all into her mouth. She starts sucking and licking my rod, sending waves of pleasure throughout my lower body. Blood is rushing to my cheeks and my whole face feels hot as I groan out, "Rin...stop...I don't...I don't want you to...you don't have to do this..."
I look down and my gaze meets her viridian eyes. She stops applying her ministrations and instead looks right at me. Even in the darkness, I can see a crimson tinge on her cheeks, which I find matches the color of her hair. And then I realize my fully erect manhood is still in her mouth and I blush furiously. She blinks, and then closes her eyes, presumably to focus on her task at hand. Her tongue rolls against the head over and over, causing my knees to buckle and for me to groan with my teeth clenched. Then, she slides her tongue and lips over the entire length, taking it all into her mouth. She pulls her lips back to the crown, all the while sucking on my cock that's about ready to burst. She continues to deepthroat me and soon I can't take it anymore.
"Rin...I'm about to...ungh...!"
I let it all out, shooting the first of several strands in her mouth. I can still feel the sucking motion that's trying to extract everything I have from my discharging rod. After I'm finally done, I take a deep breath and let it out, before looking down. Rin smoothly pulls her lips away, leaving my shaft all alone again in the cool air. Rin stares at me again with her pools of green, and I watch as she swallows something in her mouth. She gives me another lick on the tip, and she's hit with one last strand of semen, which lands on her face.
"Ah, sorry, Rin, I, I'll clean that" I stammer out, while getting a clean napkin from my pocket. After I wipe her face clean, she stands back up, and I nervously put my goods back where they belong before zipping up.
"S-so, Rin, you-", I start to say before being interrupted.
"Hisao, we're doomed", she says. I wait for her to continue, but when it appears she's not going, I ask for her, "Doomed because of...?"
"I have become Death, the destroyer of worlds", is her offbeat answer. I don't get fed up, however, and instead I just smile before embracing her. I softly whisper to her, "You've already destroyed mine".
I don't know how to explain it, other than, I love her. She's become almost everything to me. I love her, and I feel complete having her wrapped in my arms. I can't see her face when we're this close, but I feel her pressing her lips on my right shoulder, and she lets herself be held. I whisper again, "I love you, Rin".
"You'd love a serial killer?" she asks with anxiety in her voice. I reply, "If it's you, yea".
Another moment passes with our heartbeats in tune, before I continue, "What do you mean you're a serial killer?"
"I just killed all those people", she replies.
"You mean...my semen?" I ask. She nods. The gentle smile on my face freezes, and I silently remind myself to throw my face into my palm later. I reluctantly let go of her, and still with a calm voice, I say, "Well, that's fine with me. Just don't tell anyone else".
"Okay", she says with a nod, "You shouldn't tell anyone else, either".
So she did drink my semen, huh.
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Woah! Heat flares up on my cheeks again, and I nervously glance at Rin's face. She notices, and I blush even harder. I stammer out, "R-rin, where did you learn to do that?"
"Do what?" she easily asks. I take a guess, "It was Emi, wasn't it?"
Rin simply stared at me.
"I... Thanks Rin, I really appreciate that. It felt great", I say, before giving her a quick hug.
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'That's how you eat ice-cream, right?'
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The rattle of the wheels on the train tracks jolt me awake. My first thought is of the familiar warm sensation to my right; the natural phenomenon they call "Tezuka Rin", sleeping on my shoulder. My second thought is of the train we're on, and how we're the only two people in the car. The rattling softens, a sensation reinforced by the beams of morning sun pouring through the windows. I try to go back to sleep, resting my head on her head, while thinking about what happened yesterday.
...
Rin's face crumples up like she smelled something bad.
"What is it?" I ask her, while holding the letter up for her.
"My dad. He wants me to go back home. For the holidays", she says through a slightly strained voice.
"Your dad?" I hope I didn't raise my voice too much, but of course, Rin shows her selective attention to detail by remarking, "Yes. I am a child, more specifically, a daughter".
She's wearing that half-a-smile, probably because I amused her. Immediately after delivering that obvious statement, her face scrunches up again, before relaxing and asking me, "Wanna come?"
"Where is it?" I ask back. She doesn't change her facial expression as she answers, "By the sea".
I take a quick look outside the window towards the horizon and then ask, "So it's a costal town?"
She nods, "Wanna come?" She turns her head away like she could care less, but I know otherwise. I reply, "Well...sure, why not".
I think about it, before asking, "Hey, one of these days, you wanna meet my parents too?"
...
"...This is your conductor speaking. We have arrived at Osamuoka. This is the last stop on this train. Please check your belongings before..."
"Rin, wake up", I say. Her shoulders shiver, her consciousness rising from deep slumber, and then her eyes open and blink. She lifts her head off my shoulder and stands up with a nod. We leave the train together and step onto a station platform bathed in light. The walls and pillars of the open-air platform are like caramel yellow and the patterns on them are the same you could find in a long stretch of sand. The whole station reminds me of a beach, actually. Rin calls out, "This way" and I follow her lead. We walk down a tiny set of stone steps, past a station attendant who raises an eyebrow at Rin, before finally entering the seaside town of Rin's childhood.
I take a look around and I can see an ocean hiding behind an indefinite number of buildings. A natural aura permeates the town, and on the opposite edge of my view lies a forest, leaving Osamuoka in the middle. A large road that's probably the main path leads directly into the center of the town, with smaller paths and roads branching out.
"No place like home?" I ask Rin. With a confused look on her face, she replies, "...Aren't there plenty of other towns like this one?"
"No, I mean, how does it feel to be back in the place where you grew up?" I ask. She sweeps her gaze over the town, before saying, "Nothing's changed".
"How can you be so sure?" I ask. She shrugs, a very Rin-like response. I continue, "After all, you've changed, haven't you?" I give her a quick kiss on the lips. She looks bewildered.
"Hisao..." she begins, but I don't let her finish, and with a smile on my face, I ask, "So which way's your dad?"
She gives me a sulky look and then promptly continues leading the way, five steps ahead of me. Maybe that was too much...
"So, what does your dad do?" I ask. Rin answers, "He bakes".
"Oh. Is he g-" I start to ask, before walking into Rin by accident. She's stopped walking, and is simply standing there. I circle around to see her open her mouth for a second, and then close it again. Well, that's strange...even for Rin. I worriedly ask her, "What's wrong?"
Did my kiss upset her that much?
"Shhh", is the reply I get.
"Wha-"
"RIN-RIN! IS THAT YOU!?"
A man starts to run towards us, waving both of his arms in the air while smiling. Rin suddenly sprints off, running in full stride for the opposite direction. My head switches between looking at Rin's dashing figure and the man's increasing proximity.
(There would be a choice here to either chase after Rin or stay behind.)
I take off, chasing after Rin. Behind me, I hear the words, "OH?! IS THIS TAG?! THIS BRINGS BACK MEMORIES, IT DOES!"
I think he got even faster. I pick up the pace, and with some effort I manage to catch up to Rin. I'm a little pleased with myself, since it seems all those weeks spent running with Emi don't seem to have been a waste. It might be the air around here or something, but I feel like I could run for miles. I'm more than happy to go for a light run with Rin. I rush up beside Rin and ask her between breaths, "Rin, what's wrong?"
She suddenly stops, for the second time today, while I keep running for another five feet before stopping too. I turn around to see her looking from side to side, trying to find something. In a stroke of insight and luck, I look around and immediately find an open door. I beckon to her, "Rin, over here".
She hesitantly looks at the door, but I'm already inside. It's just an empty room the size of a small closet. A chain hangs from the center of the ceiling and I pull on it, letting it fill with light. I step back outside and motion for her to come. She takes a look behind her before following me into the room. I close the door behind us, and now it's just the two of us.
"Why were you running from him?" I ask. Rin takes a look around the room, and notices the chain before deciding to answer, "He's scary".
Coincidentally, we hear his voice cry out, "Rin-rin! Where are you?!"
Rin quickly stretches out her neck to grip the chain with her lips, turning off the light. The man's voice cries out again, this time louder and closer, "Rin-rin! I'm going to find you!"
And then it's quiet. Rin's breath is warm and touches my neck. I reach out to try and hold her, but then pain shoots through my arms and chest, and I involuntarily freeze up. The sound of my not uncommon irregular heartbeat is pounding in my eardrums, but I can make out one faint voice, "Hisao".
My outstretched hand moves past Rin and instead props itself on the wall, while I reach up with my other hand to clench my throat. A second of fear, pain, and anxiety passes, and then another. Suddenly, I feel a warm pressure on my chest. Another heartbeat joins mine, and as time passes, the pain begins to subside. I hear the words, "I'll make you feel better, Hisao".
I look down to see Rin moving below me, and I struggle to cry out, "Rin?!"
She rubs her head on my groin, and blood starts to flow downwards. She continues to nuzzle her face against my nascent erection while I try again, "Rin, that's enough..."
Instead, she swiftly pulls the zipper down with her teeth and uses her tongue and lips to fish out my hardening erection, taking it all into her mouth. She starts sucking and licking my rod, sending waves of pleasure throughout my lower body. Blood is rushing to my cheeks and my whole face feels hot as I groan out, "Rin...stop...I don't...I don't want you to...you don't have to do this..."
I look down and my gaze meets her viridian eyes. She stops applying her ministrations and instead looks right at me. Even in the darkness, I can see a crimson tinge on her cheeks, which I find matches the color of her hair. And then I realize my fully erect manhood is still in her mouth and I blush furiously. She blinks, and then closes her eyes, presumably to focus on her task at hand. Her tongue rolls against the head over and over, causing my knees to buckle and for me to groan with my teeth clenched. Then, she slides her tongue and lips over the entire length, taking it all into her mouth. She pulls her lips back to the crown, all the while sucking on my cock that's about ready to burst. She continues to deepthroat me and soon I can't take it anymore.
"Rin...I'm about to...ungh...!"
I let it all out, shooting the first of several strands in her mouth. I can still feel the sucking motion that's trying to extract everything I have from my discharging rod. After I'm finally done, I take a deep breath and let it out, before looking down. Rin smoothly pulls her lips away, leaving my shaft all alone again in the cool air. Rin stares at me again with her pools of green, and I watch as she swallows something in her mouth. She gives me another lick on the tip, and she's hit with one last strand of semen, which lands on her face.
"Ah, sorry, Rin, I, I'll clean that" I stammer out, while getting a clean napkin from my pocket. After I wipe her face clean, she stands back up, and I nervously put my goods back where they belong before zipping up.
"S-so, Rin, you-", I start to say before being interrupted.
"Hisao, we're doomed", she says. I wait for her to continue, but when it appears she's not going, I ask for her, "Doomed because of...?"
"I have become Death, the destroyer of worlds", is her offbeat answer. I don't get fed up, however, and instead I just smile before embracing her. I softly whisper to her, "You've already destroyed mine".
I don't know how to explain it, other than, I love her. She's become almost everything to me. I love her, and I feel complete having her wrapped in my arms. I can't see her face when we're this close, but I feel her pressing her lips on my right shoulder, and she lets herself be held. I whisper again, "I love you, Rin".
"You'd love a serial killer?" she asks with anxiety in her voice. I reply, "If it's you, yea".
Another moment passes with our heartbeats in tune, before I continue, "What do you mean you're a serial killer?"
"I just killed all those people", she replies.
"You mean...my semen?" I ask. She nods. The gentle smile on my face freezes, and I silently remind myself to throw my face into my palm later. I reluctantly let go of her, and still with a calm voice, I say, "Well, that's fine with me. Just don't tell anyone else".
"Okay", she says with a nod, "You shouldn't tell anyone else, either".
So she did drink my semen, huh.
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Woah! Heat flares up on my cheeks again, and I nervously glance at Rin's face. She notices, and I blush even harder. I stammer out, "R-rin, where did you learn to do that?"
"Do what?" she easily asks. I take a guess, "It was Emi, wasn't it?"
Rin simply stared at me.
"I... Thanks Rin, I really appreciate that. It felt great", I say, before giving her a quick hug.
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'That's how you eat ice-cream, right?'
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This was great. Brought back the fond memories of playing her route in KS.
Can't wait to see more.
Can't wait to see more.
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Tyranosaurus_Secks wrote...
This was great. Brought back the fond memories of playing her route in KS.Can't wait to see more.
What would you like to see next?
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NeoStriker wrote...
Tyranosaurus_Secks wrote...
This was great. Brought back the fond memories of playing her route in KS.Can't wait to see more.
What would you like to see next?
For starters, who the guy they were being chased by was. Maybe even a cameo appearance of another character from the game or something like that?
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Tyranosaurus_Secks wrote...
NeoStriker wrote...
Tyranosaurus_Secks wrote...
This was great. Brought back the fond memories of playing her route in KS.Can't wait to see more.
What would you like to see next?
For starters, who the guy they were being chased by was. Maybe even a cameo appearance of another character from the game or something like that?
That man wants your anal virginity. There will be a cameo of Emi.
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What the fuck do I post next?! Crippling self-doubt...eating my soul...
Should I turn it into a mystery? Or just let it stay as a drama? It should be...both. And there'll be routes! In an After Story?! What the shit?! Goddammit Neo, get your shit together! But wouldn't routes be fun for the reader? This is an After Story goddammit, it's a story to explore more of Rin's character! But wait, what if we made it like Persona or Clannad or Bliss Stage where you get stronger from relationships! That way, you can befriend the man who wants your anal virginity, earn mutual respect with Rin's father, get the jerkass bitch to calm her shit, and still have Rin as your main bitch! It's a harem route!
BY YOUR POWERS COMBINED, I AM, PIMP DADDY HISAO!
Or what if after doing the Rin route, I just open this shit up for the other routes? And then when you complete those, you can finish Rin's route again for a bonus/secret/better ending. Because, this story is about connecting with your fellow man, earning trust from them, learning about them, understanding them, good and/or bad. I...love you so much, Rin. I can't move on without satisfying you first. I can't live in a world where I can't make you smile.
Should I turn it into a mystery? Or just let it stay as a drama? It should be...both. And there'll be routes! In an After Story?! What the shit?! Goddammit Neo, get your shit together! But wouldn't routes be fun for the reader? This is an After Story goddammit, it's a story to explore more of Rin's character! But wait, what if we made it like Persona or Clannad or Bliss Stage where you get stronger from relationships! That way, you can befriend the man who wants your anal virginity, earn mutual respect with Rin's father, get the jerkass bitch to calm her shit, and still have Rin as your main bitch! It's a harem route!
BY YOUR POWERS COMBINED, I AM, PIMP DADDY HISAO!
Or what if after doing the Rin route, I just open this shit up for the other routes? And then when you complete those, you can finish Rin's route again for a bonus/secret/better ending. Because, this story is about connecting with your fellow man, earning trust from them, learning about them, understanding them, good and/or bad. I...love you so much, Rin. I can't move on without satisfying you first. I can't live in a world where I can't make you smile.
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NeoStriker wrote...
Tyranosaurus_Secks wrote...
NeoStriker wrote...
Tyranosaurus_Secks wrote...
This was great. Brought back the fond memories of playing her route in KS.Can't wait to see more.
What would you like to see next?
For starters, who the guy they were being chased by was. Maybe even a cameo appearance of another character from the game or something like that?
That man wants your anal virginity. There will be a cameo of Emi.
Oh god...I think I can see where this is going.
Chances are I might be wrong, though. Well, that being said good luck continuing this story.
