Something to kill time.

-Fivey- · 2013-05-13T05:54:00+00:00

Tape 1Spoiler:***bbzzzzzzzzzz*** -Tape 1 -Patient name : Ace ***bbzzzz..** December, where people are having a lot of fun... well... except me. You see, I envy people with mental disorder. They don't have to think about education, work, the world now, tomorrow, or anything but I'm also sad because they're stucked inside their own world. Unable to taste the feeling of being able to choose, to fight, to live. I am one of those people. The one who were stucked inside a world of my own. Where nothing can stop me, hold me down, command me what to do and go against me. It was the ultimate pleasure for some but as time goes by, I learned something. Being able to controlled what you want or desire doesn't make you feel happy at all. There's no point on living a world where there is no challenge or enemies as those things are the one that makes you stronger or makes you realize that world isn't a bed of roses. There was no sadness, there was no death, there was no trouble. Eerie smile was patch on everyone faces. It seems everyone was emotionless. I was terrified. Lost in my own delusion. I quit. I ran. I hide. I weep upon my poor soul. I couldn't do nothing. One day, I knew a way out. A way out of this trouble. A way to be free, completely free. As I put this gun on my head, I couldn't wish anything more that death. Farewell ****BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!**** (The sound echoed throught the dark room followed by the slow sound of a liquid falling on the concrete floor) However, I just realized that there's no such thing as a way out. It's always just another illusion. An illusion created by the state of mind I'm in. It was just a small show by my brain just to make me better, or worse. hehehahaHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAHA..... Please... Kill... Me... ......*bzzz*.. -End of tape 1-

-Fivey-

11 years ago

Tape 1

Spoiler:

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11 years ago

The ending's a bit confusing for me. Did he just take a gun and fire it not at his head or did he only imagine himself taking a gun and firing at his head? I think I'm leaning toward the second one seeing how this is apparently a patient's tape and no self-respecting institution that answers to any law would allow their patient to have a gun. Also, you have numerous typos which makes parts of this hard to understand.

Eerie smile was patch on everyone faces.

This one in particular.

You see, I envy people with mental disorder.

This part doesn't make much sense to me. You tell us how he envies people with mental disorders and then you reveal he has a mental disorder. I suppose that was meant to be a twist, but it just doesn't make much sense to me. Granted, clearly this guy isn't right in the head so that kinda makes up for it.

-Fivey-

11 years ago

Oh hey~ didn't notice your reply. >.< Thanks for the comment. :)
I'm new at this so please excuse my mistake. :)

Actually the reason I write this because a friend of mine told me a story about a mentally disturbed guy who think he's sane.

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