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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
Simply wonderful. This reminds me of what high_time subjects me to all the time.
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CHAPTER TWO
[spoil]King Fi of the West. That was his official title. But ask anyone who was been through his castle, and they would call him, 'Master Fi the Whipper'. Fi loved to beat people, to death, most times. Of course, her majesty, Amy was too fragile to beat. So he depended on the Harem. Poor Austin, getting regularly whipped on his red, hard cock. He screamed like a grown man having constipation. People could hear his crys from miles away. After tiring out his arm, he stuffed a stick lubed with cooking oil up his tight, petite ass. It went up straight into his stomach. He loved it when he saw Austins troubled face, begging for help. Then he pulled it out, and inserted his own fleshy stick. Making the loudest, lewdest noise possible, he jackhammered his large sexual organ into his asshole. Moaning at every insertion, Austin loved it. Changing positions, playing with his penis while anally raping him, he did this for 4 hours, until his glorious white liquid occupied his insides.
[spoil]King Fi of the West. That was his official title. But ask anyone who was been through his castle, and they would call him, 'Master Fi the Whipper'. Fi loved to beat people, to death, most times. Of course, her majesty, Amy was too fragile to beat. So he depended on the Harem. Poor Austin, getting regularly whipped on his red, hard cock. He screamed like a grown man having constipation. People could hear his crys from miles away. After tiring out his arm, he stuffed a stick lubed with cooking oil up his tight, petite ass. It went up straight into his stomach. He loved it when he saw Austins troubled face, begging for help. Then he pulled it out, and inserted his own fleshy stick. Making the loudest, lewdest noise possible, he jackhammered his large sexual organ into his asshole. Moaning at every insertion, Austin loved it. Changing positions, playing with his penis while anally raping him, he did this for 4 hours, until his glorious white liquid occupied his insides.
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Kiraneko wrote...
King Fi of the West. That was his official title.This probably could've been combined with a comma, rather having 2 really short sentences both on the same subject.
Apart from that, no obvious complaints.
Next chapter idea: Please have Cruz, Dylan, and I all doing a chu-chu train.
Story title idea: Amy & Fi's Funhouse of Gayness
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