(Summer Contest 2015) Summer days
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The mellow sun marrys the jagged breeze.
Birthing nausea and ease.
Doleful clouds divorce the sky.
Leaving the land buoyant yet dry.
Cheating breeze and the sinful heat.
Create the humid treat.
Doleful clouds rape the sky.
Leaving the land somber yet ready to die.
A sick sun leaves the breeze.
Reclusive he goes into the shallow leaves.
A doleful cloud meets the sun.
Leaving the land cold and grieving for summer fun.
Birthing nausea and ease.
Doleful clouds divorce the sky.
Leaving the land buoyant yet dry.
Cheating breeze and the sinful heat.
Create the humid treat.
Doleful clouds rape the sky.
Leaving the land somber yet ready to die.
A sick sun leaves the breeze.
Reclusive he goes into the shallow leaves.
A doleful cloud meets the sun.
Leaving the land cold and grieving for summer fun.
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
Always nice to see poems show up. The presence of prose does tend to overshadow the more poetically rare entries.
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He's saying something symbolically poetic.
Also, the poem was pretty good. It's a great break from the short stories that are up.
Also, the poem was pretty good. It's a great break from the short stories that are up.
