[Summer Contest Entry 2012] Summer 'Heat'
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My breath is ragged and awkward, my left hand is held on my mouse, my grip nearly crushing it, my right hand is on my man-hood, my grip tight and firm.
As i flick through Fakku's Mangas my grip tightens and often changes position, my stamina astounds me i normally don't last this long, a small bead of sweat rolls of the end of my nose and i feel it explode as it collides with my purple-headed-warrior, the small satifaction of cold water on a inceribly heated surface is blissful yet short lived, i wipe my hand across my forehead grasping at the cold salty angelic water upon it, i then re-grip my pet snake and furiously continue to pet it.
I can feel it ... its rising throughout me .. I'm about to blow... !!!
"BROTHER!" My door slams open and my younger sister barges in through the shattered remains of my door, i can't contain the surprise, i can't reach my pants in time, i can't even hide it from her.
I burst all over my computer screen to an elegantly drawn women of some random manga with some name i cant even pronounce, i sit there in my chair frozen with shock and embarrassment. My sister stands in the doorway in a shocked silence, after a moment or painful silence she breaks in with a slightly cracked voice "Really?? Again?!", i hang my head, this wasn't the first time she had caught me nor the first time i blew thr roof when she busted in, in fact the mortifying thing was it was practically a common occurring, i turned around in my chair slowly to look at my sisters dissapointed gaze, i'm horrified to see shes wearing a tight blue bikini, i can feel my sausage twitch, my eyes scan her body staring at her ample bust barely covered by a incredibly thin piece of azure cloth, her areola's are visible and her nipples protrude rebelliously through her clothing, i look down to her gorgeous hips with her perfect figure, my sword is now slowly getting unsheathed, my eyes lock at i stare at her groin a dark blue piece of clothing is hiding her most heavenly spot, i stare for a few moments before she coughs loudly "You really need to control your urges, i was going to ask you if you wanted to massage my back for me, but i don't think i will now". I curse myself slightly and i can feel tears welling up, she knows what i think of her and she uses it against me, i look up into her mischievous sparkling blue eyes and notice that she's gazing at my rapidly growing candlestick. She picks the door up and closes it slowly, before walking up to me seductively and bringing her face a hairs width away from mine, her full pouting lips just out of range of my dry desperate ones.
"It's Lucky you were adopted brother, now lets cool down together" she winks slowly before embracing me in a slow deep wet kiss.
I love my sister <3
(NOTES)
I apologise for any typos and Grammar mistakes, i hope you enjoyed my little storys much as i enjoyed it, This is PURE Fiction i did not base this on anything real nor do i ever want anything like this to happen with any family member of mine (urgh)
Thanks again for reading
As i flick through Fakku's Mangas my grip tightens and often changes position, my stamina astounds me i normally don't last this long, a small bead of sweat rolls of the end of my nose and i feel it explode as it collides with my purple-headed-warrior, the small satifaction of cold water on a inceribly heated surface is blissful yet short lived, i wipe my hand across my forehead grasping at the cold salty angelic water upon it, i then re-grip my pet snake and furiously continue to pet it.
I can feel it ... its rising throughout me .. I'm about to blow... !!!
"BROTHER!" My door slams open and my younger sister barges in through the shattered remains of my door, i can't contain the surprise, i can't reach my pants in time, i can't even hide it from her.
I burst all over my computer screen to an elegantly drawn women of some random manga with some name i cant even pronounce, i sit there in my chair frozen with shock and embarrassment. My sister stands in the doorway in a shocked silence, after a moment or painful silence she breaks in with a slightly cracked voice "Really?? Again?!", i hang my head, this wasn't the first time she had caught me nor the first time i blew thr roof when she busted in, in fact the mortifying thing was it was practically a common occurring, i turned around in my chair slowly to look at my sisters dissapointed gaze, i'm horrified to see shes wearing a tight blue bikini, i can feel my sausage twitch, my eyes scan her body staring at her ample bust barely covered by a incredibly thin piece of azure cloth, her areola's are visible and her nipples protrude rebelliously through her clothing, i look down to her gorgeous hips with her perfect figure, my sword is now slowly getting unsheathed, my eyes lock at i stare at her groin a dark blue piece of clothing is hiding her most heavenly spot, i stare for a few moments before she coughs loudly "You really need to control your urges, i was going to ask you if you wanted to massage my back for me, but i don't think i will now". I curse myself slightly and i can feel tears welling up, she knows what i think of her and she uses it against me, i look up into her mischievous sparkling blue eyes and notice that she's gazing at my rapidly growing candlestick. She picks the door up and closes it slowly, before walking up to me seductively and bringing her face a hairs width away from mine, her full pouting lips just out of range of my dry desperate ones.
"It's Lucky you were adopted brother, now lets cool down together" she winks slowly before embracing me in a slow deep wet kiss.
I love my sister <3
(NOTES)
I apologise for any typos and Grammar mistakes, i hope you enjoyed my little storys much as i enjoyed it, This is PURE Fiction i did not base this on anything real nor do i ever want anything like this to happen with any family member of mine (urgh)
Thanks again for reading
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Roflmao. seriously. I guess that's the kind of situation you're used to when you've read as many mangas as I did but still, reading it like that made me burst in laughter. I really enjoyed it.
Yes, there are a few grammar mistakes and yes, you probably could have found them by re-reading your work again and again, but it didn't bother me that much(it's just that I automatically noticed them out of habit). Your work is short, but I like how it's written.
Yes, there are a few grammar mistakes and yes, you probably could have found them by re-reading your work again and again, but it didn't bother me that much(it's just that I automatically noticed them out of habit). Your work is short, but I like how it's written.