the book of nine
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the book of nine is the most powerful book ever it contains dark spells it has a mind of its own but its stupid its just smart enough to keep it self alive and its master live. the book on the front page has a 9 pointed star and this book consists of 9 elements(i had symbols drawn but very crappy one aww well) the 9 elements and also from some crappy shit i saw on tv which some one cursing people and like shunning them the 9 hells...
i you have your basic dark fire water earth air wood etcc. etcc..
i thought of blood as an element
most spells you can only use once per day dude to power limit
blood magic is the most powerful magic out of all 9 types
the book is now gone it was divided up into 9 parts and it was spread among the races
blood parts were devided into 2-3 main races the vampire, the angels and the kights
vampires had wars and there books piece were divided into even smaller peices and even smaller by the years passed they fought each other and now its so small, like the biggest piece of its like half of a page rest of the piece are so small that they are like little alphabets on there
"hey mine has a little f and part of e wait at least i thinks it an E"
its really small....
simple put
vampires wish to have the piece that angels have
they cannot go near the place were angels live due to fact holy stuff.. they get completely owned
the piece that angels have is heal magic(that may settle the thrust of vampires by enabling them to make there own blood) which vampires want and the angels are not even trying to hide there piece... its just sitting in some building near town square and they don't even care..
knights have wars and semi tournaments for the piece they give to the winner and mostly they gain power and strength but are ridiculed by most in society cuz people call them witches and what not...
other elements are still begin given by me and still coming up the story this just the basic idea
and my English not that good
so yea...... =_=
i you have your basic dark fire water earth air wood etcc. etcc..
i thought of blood as an element
most spells you can only use once per day dude to power limit
blood magic is the most powerful magic out of all 9 types
the book is now gone it was divided up into 9 parts and it was spread among the races
blood parts were devided into 2-3 main races the vampire, the angels and the kights
vampires had wars and there books piece were divided into even smaller peices and even smaller by the years passed they fought each other and now its so small, like the biggest piece of its like half of a page rest of the piece are so small that they are like little alphabets on there
"hey mine has a little f and part of e wait at least i thinks it an E"
its really small....
simple put
vampires wish to have the piece that angels have
they cannot go near the place were angels live due to fact holy stuff.. they get completely owned
the piece that angels have is heal magic(that may settle the thrust of vampires by enabling them to make there own blood) which vampires want and the angels are not even trying to hide there piece... its just sitting in some building near town square and they don't even care..
knights have wars and semi tournaments for the piece they give to the winner and mostly they gain power and strength but are ridiculed by most in society cuz people call them witches and what not...
other elements are still begin given by me and still coming up the story this just the basic idea
and my English not that good
so yea...... =_=
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Angelus Lapsus wrote...
Okay um decent plot line but way too many errors.Agreed.... Dude you got a serious language problem..... His errors make yours look like minor errors Angelus.....
Hey gourav....GO LEARN ENGLISH!!! No one in this entire planet is going to understand a word you are trying to say if you can't even SPELL properly!!!
Besides that, the idea is quite nice. Have potential.
