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the practice one(fate poem)

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mbc2085
14 years ago
this is just pratice feel free to judge.


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Authoria Pendragon.
what a brave king.
always on the front line.
slaying her enemies.
from the anglo saxons to Modred.
she never lost to a single foe.
but she only found her happiness at the end.
she said she had a dream.
she came and went.
she was servent
Saber
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Izimiger
14 years ago
Sounds very... hmm "matter of fact"? like a promotional, or a grave stone.
This is her -> This is what she did -> this is what happened -> this is her now or this is really her.

I'm not very good with poetry so i might be looking at it wrong tho. other than that, i see a saber fan. go saber~
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mbc2085
14 years ago
in poems that how peopl praise hero
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Izimiger
14 years ago
Can't be all poems tho right? just saying it sounded really simple.
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mbc2085
14 years ago
well it was radom combination poem that i came up just for Fate Stay night. since servents used to a epic hero
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