The story of 666monster
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Just want to share my idea that I have created. It is about the human that becomes a demon called 666monster (I usually use this as my username, If u see this same script its mine). It is only a beginner writing and I use some source from Type moon creation. Tell me your impression. Wew two people have already told me about my grammar. Sigh, one more and .......
I was once a Paladin said to be one of the best. I`ve learned magic and slaying demon was my job.
But one time there was a mistake. I was given a mission to fend off a horde of monsters that has come out from a World of Darkness through a gate that was opened by a wizard. I slain them all bathing in their blood as I fought. Without even realizing I have become a demon.
Then when I gotten back to the temple I was chased and nearly killed by my own comrade. But I managed to run to the gate that was still opened. There I honed my skill and gained the true understanding of Ice power.
With that I managed to crack the gate and come to this world. I was quite fond of blades so I sought, stole, and excavacate it until I found about 666 finest of blades that makes me named the 666monster. After encountering a Sorcerer I learned to use ancient rune magic and able to use strange magic called master of blade. Having sought to find a greater opponent that wielded sword I stumbled at the land of God. There I fought against The God of Blades to prove who is the strongest. After a long battle and nearly killed, I succeeded to slay the God of Blade by using my one and the first blade Barbalica (the blade I created from my own bone mix with powerful rune) and unleashing its true power the soul buster which could destroy all with soul. Upon defeating him, just before The God of Blade disappeared he granted 666monster(me) a blade named World Eater and the piece of his land in the land of God made me able to summon a piece of land where every swords that I put there automatically bestowed with that magic. Without using land`s power. My rune could only enable me to master 4 blades.
I was once a Paladin said to be one of the best. I`ve learned magic and slaying demon was my job.
But one time there was a mistake. I was given a mission to fend off a horde of monsters that has come out from a World of Darkness through a gate that was opened by a wizard. I slain them all bathing in their blood as I fought. Without even realizing I have become a demon.
Then when I gotten back to the temple I was chased and nearly killed by my own comrade. But I managed to run to the gate that was still opened. There I honed my skill and gained the true understanding of Ice power.
With that I managed to crack the gate and come to this world. I was quite fond of blades so I sought, stole, and excavacate it until I found about 666 finest of blades that makes me named the 666monster. After encountering a Sorcerer I learned to use ancient rune magic and able to use strange magic called master of blade. Having sought to find a greater opponent that wielded sword I stumbled at the land of God. There I fought against The God of Blades to prove who is the strongest. After a long battle and nearly killed, I succeeded to slay the God of Blade by using my one and the first blade Barbalica (the blade I created from my own bone mix with powerful rune) and unleashing its true power the soul buster which could destroy all with soul. Upon defeating him, just before The God of Blade disappeared he granted 666monster(me) a blade named World Eater and the piece of his land in the land of God made me able to summon a piece of land where every swords that I put there automatically bestowed with that magic. Without using land`s power. My rune could only enable me to master 4 blades.
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tsuyoshiro
FAKKU Writer
I'm going to be brutally honest. I apologize in advance.
1.) 666monster should stay a username only, it isn't what I would call a character in a story.
2.) Why did he become a demon? Because he was bathed in their blood? That's a bit of a stretch. And how do you not realize you are a demon, but your so called friends immediately persecute you for it?
3.) The rest is pretty much just a rip off of Fate/Stay Night. He's waaay too much like Archer.
4.) I won't touch on the bad grammar.
1.) 666monster should stay a username only, it isn't what I would call a character in a story.
2.) Why did he become a demon? Because he was bathed in their blood? That's a bit of a stretch. And how do you not realize you are a demon, but your so called friends immediately persecute you for it?
3.) The rest is pretty much just a rip off of Fate/Stay Night. He's waaay too much like Archer.
4.) I won't touch on the bad grammar.
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tsuyoshiro wrote...
I'm going to be brutally honest. I apologize in advance.1.) 666monster should stay a username only, it isn't what I would call a character in a story.
2.) Why did he become a demon? Because he was bathed in their blood? That's a bit of a stretch. And how do you not realize you are a demon, but your so called friends immediately persecute you for it?
3.) The rest is pretty much just a rip off of Fate/Stay Night. He's waaay too much like Archer.
4.) I won't touch on the bad grammar.
Answer:
1.) It is actually a title cause he lose his name by becoming a demon
2.) Well actually there is a continue that will explain this, but actually the blood and curses of all demon that he kills
3.) I don`t know about if he is like archer??? Cause I never intend to use archer as the base and I already said I use the material of power from Type moon. Well, Archer means Emiya Shiro future right??? What the hell is the same as him??? Cause using many blades??? Man, don`t just lump it together? Cause he is from the start is a sword collector. If it is about using reality marble it is more of an expansion of rune of gandalfr used by Saito in ZNT
4) Well, this I don`t have anything to answer back. Face it, I`m suck at english
About not realizing: I thought it is obvious cause he is already half dead fighting against that whole demon. He even needs all of his concentration just to keep him walking.
No need to apologize. This is just a story made out of a whim.
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tsuyoshiro
FAKKU Writer
MemphistoKetemuLucifer wrote...
tsuyoshiro wrote...
I'm going to be brutally honest. I apologize in advance.1.) 666monster should stay a username only, it isn't what I would call a character in a story.
2.) Why did he become a demon? Because he was bathed in their blood? That's a bit of a stretch. And how do you not realize you are a demon, but your so called friends immediately persecute you for it?
3.) The rest is pretty much just a rip off of Fate/Stay Night. He's waaay too much like Archer.
4.) I won't touch on the bad grammar.
Answer:
1.) It is actually a title cause he lose his name by becoming a demon
2.) Well actually there is a continue that will explain this, but actually the blood and curses of all demon that he kills
3.) I don`t know about if he is like archer??? Cause I never intend to use archer as the base and I already said I use the material of power from Type moon. Well, Archer means Emiya Shiro future right??? What the hell is the same as him??? Cause using many blades??? Man, don`t just lump it together? Cause he is from the start is a sword collector. If it is about using reality marble it is more of an expansion of rune of gandalfr used by Saito in ZNT
4) Well, this I don`t have anything to answer back. Face it, I`m suck at english
1.) Although more acceptable as a title than a name, it still doesn't sound right to me. Mind you, this is only my own preference.
2.) Ok, I'll wait for a proper explanation.
3.) He uses alot of blades; he has a magic circuit; he has a reality marble where those blades are. Even if you don't call it a reality marble, this will pretty much be what people will think of. It's one thing to simply use material from Typemoon, but this still sounds a little bit too familiar to me. If you changed the wording around a bit and tweaked it here and there you could probably come up with something more awesome.
4.) :wink: gotcha.
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tsuyoshiro wrote...
MemphistoKetemuLucifer wrote...
tsuyoshiro wrote...
I'm going to be brutally honest. I apologize in advance.1.) 666monster should stay a username only, it isn't what I would call a character in a story.
2.) Why did he become a demon? Because he was bathed in their blood? That's a bit of a stretch. And how do you not realize you are a demon, but your so called friends immediately persecute you for it?
3.) The rest is pretty much just a rip off of Fate/Stay Night. He's waaay too much like Archer.
4.) I won't touch on the bad grammar.
Answer:
1.) It is actually a title cause he lose his name by becoming a demon
2.) Well actually there is a continue that will explain this, but actually the blood and curses of all demon that he kills
3.) I don`t know about if he is like archer??? Cause I never intend to use archer as the base and I already said I use the material of power from Type moon. Well, Archer means Emiya Shiro future right??? What the hell is the same as him??? Cause using many blades??? Man, don`t just lump it together? Cause he is from the start is a sword collector. If it is about using reality marble it is more of an expansion of rune of gandalfr used by Saito in ZNT
4) Well, this I don`t have anything to answer back. Face it, I`m suck at english
1.) Although more acceptable as a title than a name, it still doesn't sound right to me. Mind you, this is only my own preference.
2.) Ok, I'll wait for a proper explanation.
3.) He uses alot of blades; he has a magic circuit; he has a reality marble where those blades are. Even if you don't call it a reality marble, this will pretty much be what people will think of. It's one thing to simply use material from Typemoon, but this still sounds a little bit too familiar to me. If you changed the wording around a bit and tweaked it here and there you could probably come up with something more awesome.
4.) :wink: gotcha.
Your wish is my command
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Maybe you should write in your first language.
And if English is your first language and you suck that much at it... no one can help you now.
And if English is your first language and you suck that much at it... no one can help you now.
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So I went through the Gate, to the world of demon. There I found myself amazed at that place. It wasn`t like the one said by the Priest in the daily sermon. The gate of demon was like a medieval age of my world. There I found that they made a city like places where the citizen determined by their strength. It seemed I arrived at the lowest level city. There no one even realized I were a human, it seemed it was true that I became a demon. Why? I asked myself.
When I lost in thought, suddenly there were commotions. I overheard what they said. They said there was a God of Death coming to this city. Then I realized the God of Death was sent to bring me judgment, yes to me one who has strayed from the path that God created for human. So I decided to run, just when I was about to escape. The God of Death came, I was captivated, the God of Death that after me was so beautiful that I couldn`t help but appreciate her beauty. Then I came back to senses when The God of Death suddenly swings her Scythe. I managed to dodge, then I ran for my life till I arrived at a weird place, the place was different from that human world like city.
It was more eerie than that place, but when I tried to find places to hide. She has appeared in front of me. I tried to use my flame magic but it didn`t work. Then I remembered my former comrade The Lightning Maiden one of the four greatest paladins that wielded the power of thunder has an element characteristic of delete. It seemed from the attack she inflicted to me has erased my magic power. So without any kind of weapon, I could only run while dodging her attack. After a few hours running, I have run out of places to hide and stamina to run.
When she was about to finish me, suddenly a magic force in a shape of ice came raining down to the God of Death, freezing her. Then a gentleman appeared. His form was like that of a human male at his thirties. He walked casually like walking in the park, just then the ice was broken by the God of Death, she then charged to me but then she stopped after noticing that man. She then with unknown reason fled like being pressurized by something frightening. Then the man turned to me, he said to me that he knew me and he wanted to help me. He introduced himself as Kuroyami. He offered his help to taught me the way to use ice magic, no not magic but the true essence of ice (freezing) power. I took his offer because I have no other choice. There I trained under him till I gained power to beat the God of Death.
When I lost in thought, suddenly there were commotions. I overheard what they said. They said there was a God of Death coming to this city. Then I realized the God of Death was sent to bring me judgment, yes to me one who has strayed from the path that God created for human. So I decided to run, just when I was about to escape. The God of Death came, I was captivated, the God of Death that after me was so beautiful that I couldn`t help but appreciate her beauty. Then I came back to senses when The God of Death suddenly swings her Scythe. I managed to dodge, then I ran for my life till I arrived at a weird place, the place was different from that human world like city.
It was more eerie than that place, but when I tried to find places to hide. She has appeared in front of me. I tried to use my flame magic but it didn`t work. Then I remembered my former comrade The Lightning Maiden one of the four greatest paladins that wielded the power of thunder has an element characteristic of delete. It seemed from the attack she inflicted to me has erased my magic power. So without any kind of weapon, I could only run while dodging her attack. After a few hours running, I have run out of places to hide and stamina to run.
When she was about to finish me, suddenly a magic force in a shape of ice came raining down to the God of Death, freezing her. Then a gentleman appeared. His form was like that of a human male at his thirties. He walked casually like walking in the park, just then the ice was broken by the God of Death, she then charged to me but then she stopped after noticing that man. She then with unknown reason fled like being pressurized by something frightening. Then the man turned to me, he said to me that he knew me and he wanted to help me. He introduced himself as Kuroyami. He offered his help to taught me the way to use ice magic, no not magic but the true essence of ice (freezing) power. I took his offer because I have no other choice. There I trained under him till I gained power to beat the God of Death.
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Remember, bud - it's usually never a bad idea to split a big body of work, such as that beast, into a bunch of orderly paragraphs. Makes it much more fluent, allowing your audience to have an easier time reading. Probably should help your writing, too, but there doesn't seem to be that much revision in your work. May be a good idea to up your revision, now that that's come up.
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Had been completed my training I cracked the gate of the underworld.
I defeated the God of Blades, after that I decided to go to the temple where I was once become a paladin. I made my way through, and then there I met the elder. The immortal counsel who served as the God`s mouth. I threatened them to tell me the truth why I became a demon. Suddenly, we were taken to other dimension. There the angels came to attack me, after killing off thousands of the angel, which turned out the Guardian Angel of the Counsel. One of the elder couldn`t stand it anymore and decided to tell me. It was a trap which set by one of the great deity and they were forced to obey. It seems Sky dragon, The Dragon which second only to God in terms of power, having her former husband Cursed Dragon killed with her own hand by the order of the God, planned to have revenge. She planned to resurrect the Cursed Dragon by putting the fragment of him to a human.
After eon had passed, I was the one which contained the fragment inside. It appeared only by being stained my soul with demon`s curses and blood, the Cursed Dragon could revive, but it was a failure, the reason was because my will turned out greater than she had imagined which resulted in me overcoming the cursed Dragon.
So fueled with anger I went to the Land of God once more. There I was stopped by the army of angel. I fought against them which were no match to me. After taking care of them, the Sky Dragon came to me herself. I overcome by anger and immediately charged her with my Lance of True Ice which I got by completing my training and killed the Divine Deity of Ice.
the Battle was difficult. I never thought her power was this great. Had not any choice I transformed into the Cursed Dragon, which made me being attacked by massive pain. It was the pain of the curse which has earned him the Title Cursed Dragon. Once there were two powerful being, They were The Silver Dragon (cursed dragon) and the God. The Silver dragon decided to show his power by ordering all being to curse him. Resulted in his scale darken.
Had withstood the massive pain, I attacked her with The Cursed Dragon`s power. I had the upper hand, after been making her stagger with my attack. I used the dragon`s breath. The Sky Dragon, having received Dragon`s Breath, can`t move anymore. I then reverted to my human form and summoned my Lance. Suddenly, a sword emerged from my chest. I was careless, I forgot that I hadn`t defeated the God of Death.
It was a mortal wound, I couldn`t detect her attack. It seemed, I couldn`t survived this situation. So, with the last ounce of my strength I broke the dimension with my ice power, and brought the Sky Dragon with me to hell. After crushed her to the lowest level of hell, I used my secret technique. To attain the true death, I converted all my soul to the Lance of True Ice.
at that moment, I thought, Ah, it was a fool of me to even think I could defeat destiny. I laughed while thinking this was the best result I could have, given though I was once the wielder of Red Flame. I was neither noticed nor contributed anything to the temple. I back then thought that maybe by defeating hordes of demon; I could prove my power, sigh thinking back. I was no one, Hahhaahahahaha. I laughed while crying.
The Sky Dragon thought she had a chance to flee, and tried to fly through the rift of dimension.
"Sigh" I said “It seems this will be the end". "I wanted to be a monster" I said while unleashing Lance power. In a split second the lowest level of Hell became frozen. The ice couldn`t be melted even by the sacred flame. The mark of my foolishness.........
I defeated the God of Blades, after that I decided to go to the temple where I was once become a paladin. I made my way through, and then there I met the elder. The immortal counsel who served as the God`s mouth. I threatened them to tell me the truth why I became a demon. Suddenly, we were taken to other dimension. There the angels came to attack me, after killing off thousands of the angel, which turned out the Guardian Angel of the Counsel. One of the elder couldn`t stand it anymore and decided to tell me. It was a trap which set by one of the great deity and they were forced to obey. It seems Sky dragon, The Dragon which second only to God in terms of power, having her former husband Cursed Dragon killed with her own hand by the order of the God, planned to have revenge. She planned to resurrect the Cursed Dragon by putting the fragment of him to a human.
After eon had passed, I was the one which contained the fragment inside. It appeared only by being stained my soul with demon`s curses and blood, the Cursed Dragon could revive, but it was a failure, the reason was because my will turned out greater than she had imagined which resulted in me overcoming the cursed Dragon.
So fueled with anger I went to the Land of God once more. There I was stopped by the army of angel. I fought against them which were no match to me. After taking care of them, the Sky Dragon came to me herself. I overcome by anger and immediately charged her with my Lance of True Ice which I got by completing my training and killed the Divine Deity of Ice.
the Battle was difficult. I never thought her power was this great. Had not any choice I transformed into the Cursed Dragon, which made me being attacked by massive pain. It was the pain of the curse which has earned him the Title Cursed Dragon. Once there were two powerful being, They were The Silver Dragon (cursed dragon) and the God. The Silver dragon decided to show his power by ordering all being to curse him. Resulted in his scale darken.
Had withstood the massive pain, I attacked her with The Cursed Dragon`s power. I had the upper hand, after been making her stagger with my attack. I used the dragon`s breath. The Sky Dragon, having received Dragon`s Breath, can`t move anymore. I then reverted to my human form and summoned my Lance. Suddenly, a sword emerged from my chest. I was careless, I forgot that I hadn`t defeated the God of Death.
It was a mortal wound, I couldn`t detect her attack. It seemed, I couldn`t survived this situation. So, with the last ounce of my strength I broke the dimension with my ice power, and brought the Sky Dragon with me to hell. After crushed her to the lowest level of hell, I used my secret technique. To attain the true death, I converted all my soul to the Lance of True Ice.
at that moment, I thought, Ah, it was a fool of me to even think I could defeat destiny. I laughed while thinking this was the best result I could have, given though I was once the wielder of Red Flame. I was neither noticed nor contributed anything to the temple. I back then thought that maybe by defeating hordes of demon; I could prove my power, sigh thinking back. I was no one, Hahhaahahahaha. I laughed while crying.
The Sky Dragon thought she had a chance to flee, and tried to fly through the rift of dimension.
"Sigh" I said “It seems this will be the end". "I wanted to be a monster" I said while unleashing Lance power. In a split second the lowest level of Hell became frozen. The ice couldn`t be melted even by the sacred flame. The mark of my foolishness.........
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I was once a Paladin said to be one of the best. I`ve learned magic and slaying demon was my job.
But one time there I made a mistake. I was given a mission to fend off a horde of monsters that came out from the World of Darkness through a gate that was opened by a wizard. I slain them all bathing in their blood as I fought. Without even realizing that I have became a demon myself.
So I went through the Gate, to the world of demon. There I found myself amazed at that place. It wasn`t like the one mentioned by the Priest during the daily sermons. The gate of demon was like a medieval place. There I found that they had made a city with places where the citizens were determined by their strength. It seemed that I arrived at the lowest level city. No one at that place even realized that I were human, it seemed it was true that I became a demon. Why? I asked myself.
When I was lost in thoughts, suddenly there were commotions. I overheard what they said. They said there was a God of Death coming to this city. Then I realized the God of Death was sent to bring me judgment, yes, to me one who has strayed from the path that God created for human. So I decided to run, just when I was about to escape,the God of Death came. I was captivated, the God of Death that was after me was so beautiful that I couldn`t help but appreciate her beauty. Then I came back to my senses when The God of Death suddenly swung her Scythe. I managed to dodge, then I ran for my life till I arrived at a weird place, the place was different from that of the human world.
It was more eerie than that other place, but when I tried to find places to hide, she suddenly appeared in front of me. I tried to use my magic flame but it didn`t work. Then I remembered my former comrade The Lightning Maiden one of the four greatest paladins that wielded the power of thunder which has an element characteristic of delete. It seemed from the attack she inflicted to me has erased my magic power. So without any kind of weapon, I could only run while dodging her attacks. After a few hours of running, I have run out of places to hide and stamina to run.
When she was about to destroy me, suddenly a magic force in a shape of ice came raining down towards the God of Death, freezing her. Then a gentleman appeared. His form was like that of a human male in his thirties. He walked casually like walking in the park. Just then the ice was able to be broken by the God of Death, she then charged towards me but then she stopped dead after noticing that man. She then with unknown reason fled like being pressurized by something frightening. Then the man turned to me, he said to me that he knew me and he wanted to help me. He introduced himself as Kuroyami. He offered his help to teacg me to use ice magic, no not magic but the true essence of ice (freezing) power. I took his offer because I have no other choice. There I was trained under him till I gained power to beat the God of Death.
Then when I got back to the temple I was chased and was nearly killed by my own comrade. But I managed to run to the gate that was still opened. There I honed my skill and gained the true understanding of Ice power.
With that I managed to crack the gate and came back to this world. I was quite fond of blades so I sought, stole, and excavacate blades until I found about 666 kinds of the finest blades that makes me named as the 666monster. After encountering a Sorcerer I learned to use ancient rune magic and was able to use the strange magic called master of blade. Having sought to find a greater opponent that wielded the sword I stumbled to the land of God. There I fought against The God of Blades to prove who is the strongest. After a long battle and nearly killed, I succeeded to slay the God of Blade by using my first blade Barbalica (the blade I created from my own bone mix with powerful rune) and unleashing its true power it has the property of a soul buster which could destroy anybody with soul. Upon defeating him, just before The God of Blade disappeared , he granted 666monster(me) a blade named World Eater and the piece of his land in the land of God made me able to summon a piece of land where every swords that I put there was automatically bestowed with that magic. Without using land`s power, my rune could only enable me to master 4 blades.
Having completed my training ,I cracked the gate of the underworld.
I defeated the God of Blades, after that I decided to go to the temple where I was once become a paladin. I made my way through, and then there I met the elder. The immortal counsel who served as the God`s mouth. I threatened them to tell me the truth why I became a demon. Suddenly, we were taken to another dimension. There the angels came to attack me. After killing off thousands of the angel, which turned out the Guardian Angel of the Counsel, one of the elder couldn`t stand it anymore and decided to tell me. It was a trap which was set by one of the great deity and they were forced to obey. It seems that the Sky dragon, The Dragon which came second only to God in terms of power, had her former husband Cursed Dragon killed with her own hands by the order of the God. She planned to take revenge. She planned to resurrect the Cursed Dragon by putting the fragment of him to a human form.
After eon had passed, I was the one which contained the fragment inside. It appeared that only by being stained by my demon`s soul, curses and blood, the Cursed Dragon could revive. However, her revenge failed. The reason was because my will turned out to be greater than she had imagined and which resulted me overcoming the cursed Dragon.
So fueled with anger, I went to the Land of God once more. There I was stopped by the army of angels. I fought against them which was no match for me. After taking care of them, the Sky Dragon came to me herself. I overcame wuth anger and immediately charged her with my Lance of True Ice which I got by completing my training and killed the Divine Deity of Ice.
The Battle was difficult. I never thought her power was this great. I had no choice but being transformed into the Cursed Dragon. I was attacked by massive pain. It was the pain of the curse which has earned him the Title Cursed Dragon. Once there were two powerful beings, they were The Silver Dragon (cursed dragon) and the God. The Silver dragon decided to show his power by ordering all being to curse him. Resulting in his scale to darken.
To withstand the massive pain, I attacked her with The Cursed Dragon`s power. I had the upper hand, after making her staggered with my attacks. I used the dragon`s breath. The Sky Dragon, having received Dragon`s Breath, couldnt move anymore. I then reverted to my human form and summoned my Lance. Suddenly, a sword emerged from my chest. I was careless, I forgot that I hadn`t defeated the God of Death.
It was a mortal wound, I couldn`t detect her attack. It seemed, I couldn`t survive this situation. So, with the last ounce of my strength, I broke the dimension with my ice power, and brought the Sky Dragon with me to hell. After crushing her to the lowest level of hell, I used my secret technique to attain the true death, I converted my soul to the Lance of True Ice.
At that moment, I thought, Ah, it was a fool of me to even think I could defeat destiny. I laughed while thinking this was the best result I could have, eventhough I was once the wielder of Red Flame. I had neither noticed nor contributed anything to the temple. Back then I thought that maybe by defeating hordes of demon; I could prove my power, sighing and thinking back. I was a nobody, Hahhaahahahaha. I laughed while crying.
The Sky Dragon thought she had a chance to flee, and tried to fly through the rift of dimension.
Singhing I said “It seems this will be the end". "I wanted to be a monster" I said while unleashing Lance power. In a split second the lowest level of Hell became frozen. The ice couldn`melt even by the sacred flame. The mark of my foolishness.........
I was once a Paladin said to be one of the best. I`ve learned magic and slaying demon was my job.
But one time there I made a mistake. I was given a mission to fend off a horde of monsters that came out from the World of Darkness through a gate that was opened by a wizard. I slain them all bathing in their blood as I fought. Without even realizing that I have became a demon myself.
So I went through the Gate, to the world of demon. There I found myself amazed at that place. It wasn`t like the one mentioned by the Priest during the daily sermons. The gate of demon was like a medieval place. There I found that they had made a city with places where the citizens were determined by their strength. It seemed that I arrived at the lowest level city. No one at that place even realized that I were human, it seemed it was true that I became a demon. Why? I asked myself.
When I was lost in thoughts, suddenly there were commotions. I overheard what they said. They said there was a God of Death coming to this city. Then I realized the God of Death was sent to bring me judgment, yes, to me one who has strayed from the path that God created for human. So I decided to run, just when I was about to escape,the God of Death came. I was captivated, the God of Death that was after me was so beautiful that I couldn`t help but appreciate her beauty. Then I came back to my senses when The God of Death suddenly swung her Scythe. I managed to dodge, then I ran for my life till I arrived at a weird place, the place was different from that of the human world.
It was more eerie than that other place, but when I tried to find places to hide, she suddenly appeared in front of me. I tried to use my magic flame but it didn`t work. Then I remembered my former comrade The Lightning Maiden one of the four greatest paladins that wielded the power of thunder which has an element characteristic of delete. It seemed from the attack she inflicted to me has erased my magic power. So without any kind of weapon, I could only run while dodging her attacks. After a few hours of running, I have run out of places to hide and stamina to run.
When she was about to destroy me, suddenly a magic force in a shape of ice came raining down towards the God of Death, freezing her. Then a gentleman appeared. His form was like that of a human male in his thirties. He walked casually like walking in the park. Just then the ice was able to be broken by the God of Death, she then charged towards me but then she stopped dead after noticing that man. She then with unknown reason fled like being pressurized by something frightening. Then the man turned to me, he said to me that he knew me and he wanted to help me. He introduced himself as Kuroyami. He offered his help to teacg me to use ice magic, no not magic but the true essence of ice (freezing) power. I took his offer because I have no other choice. There I was trained under him till I gained power to beat the God of Death.
Then when I got back to the temple I was chased and was nearly killed by my own comrade. But I managed to run to the gate that was still opened. There I honed my skill and gained the true understanding of Ice power.
With that I managed to crack the gate and came back to this world. I was quite fond of blades so I sought, stole, and excavacate blades until I found about 666 kinds of the finest blades that makes me named as the 666monster. After encountering a Sorcerer I learned to use ancient rune magic and was able to use the strange magic called master of blade. Having sought to find a greater opponent that wielded the sword I stumbled to the land of God. There I fought against The God of Blades to prove who is the strongest. After a long battle and nearly killed, I succeeded to slay the God of Blade by using my first blade Barbalica (the blade I created from my own bone mix with powerful rune) and unleashing its true power it has the property of a soul buster which could destroy anybody with soul. Upon defeating him, just before The God of Blade disappeared , he granted 666monster(me) a blade named World Eater and the piece of his land in the land of God made me able to summon a piece of land where every swords that I put there was automatically bestowed with that magic. Without using land`s power, my rune could only enable me to master 4 blades.
Having completed my training ,I cracked the gate of the underworld.
I defeated the God of Blades, after that I decided to go to the temple where I was once become a paladin. I made my way through, and then there I met the elder. The immortal counsel who served as the God`s mouth. I threatened them to tell me the truth why I became a demon. Suddenly, we were taken to another dimension. There the angels came to attack me. After killing off thousands of the angel, which turned out the Guardian Angel of the Counsel, one of the elder couldn`t stand it anymore and decided to tell me. It was a trap which was set by one of the great deity and they were forced to obey. It seems that the Sky dragon, The Dragon which came second only to God in terms of power, had her former husband Cursed Dragon killed with her own hands by the order of the God. She planned to take revenge. She planned to resurrect the Cursed Dragon by putting the fragment of him to a human form.
After eon had passed, I was the one which contained the fragment inside. It appeared that only by being stained by my demon`s soul, curses and blood, the Cursed Dragon could revive. However, her revenge failed. The reason was because my will turned out to be greater than she had imagined and which resulted me overcoming the cursed Dragon.
So fueled with anger, I went to the Land of God once more. There I was stopped by the army of angels. I fought against them which was no match for me. After taking care of them, the Sky Dragon came to me herself. I overcame wuth anger and immediately charged her with my Lance of True Ice which I got by completing my training and killed the Divine Deity of Ice.
The Battle was difficult. I never thought her power was this great. I had no choice but being transformed into the Cursed Dragon. I was attacked by massive pain. It was the pain of the curse which has earned him the Title Cursed Dragon. Once there were two powerful beings, they were The Silver Dragon (cursed dragon) and the God. The Silver dragon decided to show his power by ordering all being to curse him. Resulting in his scale to darken.
To withstand the massive pain, I attacked her with The Cursed Dragon`s power. I had the upper hand, after making her staggered with my attacks. I used the dragon`s breath. The Sky Dragon, having received Dragon`s Breath, couldnt move anymore. I then reverted to my human form and summoned my Lance. Suddenly, a sword emerged from my chest. I was careless, I forgot that I hadn`t defeated the God of Death.
It was a mortal wound, I couldn`t detect her attack. It seemed, I couldn`t survive this situation. So, with the last ounce of my strength, I broke the dimension with my ice power, and brought the Sky Dragon with me to hell. After crushing her to the lowest level of hell, I used my secret technique to attain the true death, I converted my soul to the Lance of True Ice.
At that moment, I thought, Ah, it was a fool of me to even think I could defeat destiny. I laughed while thinking this was the best result I could have, eventhough I was once the wielder of Red Flame. I had neither noticed nor contributed anything to the temple. Back then I thought that maybe by defeating hordes of demon; I could prove my power, sighing and thinking back. I was a nobody, Hahhaahahahaha. I laughed while crying.
The Sky Dragon thought she had a chance to flee, and tried to fly through the rift of dimension.
Singhing I said “It seems this will be the end". "I wanted to be a monster" I said while unleashing Lance power. In a split second the lowest level of Hell became frozen. The ice couldn`melt even by the sacred flame. The mark of my foolishness.........
