Triangle

"A" will not have it
"B" does not yet understand it
"C" experiences it for the first time
Anger and confusion arise

"A" cannot be trusted now
"B" is forced to choose
"C" will not give up
Tears will be shed

"A" painfully moves on
"B" will learn to love
"C" is truly happy
And the smiles appear

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Which is usually the story.
...
Unless it's a square.

so... is "A" and "C" girls and the "B" is the boy in this? i can tell this is a love triangle thing.

Agreed

In my opinion, gender doesn't matter much in love. But whichever genders you think belongs and you feel comfortable with is fine.

Well I think A and C are guys, but mostly because I think guys are usually the ones chasing girls, and C definitely shows that sort of trait by not giving up on his(assuming he's a guy) pursuit of B.

Though that's probably just resulted from the way I think as a girl, so yeah, it can go both ways really. =P

Oh and by the way, it's a really nice poem!

nice poem :D thoroughly enjoyed

ps: triangles that work are the best :D

next poem, make a pentagon. i'd like to see how that would go. xD

+rep
That was beautiful ;_;

Wowzas, you're pretty intuitive. Well, you're completely correct about the genders of all of them, 'cause I was reading a manga and the love rivalry had begun. I just decided what would happen to the characters from the manga in this poem.

Also, thanks for the compliment!




Yup, that's true.



Thanks! Maybe I'll make a pentagon next time...
Lol. Just maybe.



Senkyuu, senkyuu. *Bows*.
Lol.

Favorite part was the square part lol but on a serious note, it was cute I think

Try to make a poem for an ennacontenneagon, get a 99 way orgy going lol

that's going to take a lot of letters, o.o

Yup, and it'd be a pretty complex love enncontenneagon xD

Then it'd have to be a mix of letters and numbers.
*Brain failing*. I'm no good with numbers. Lol.