well that was a really funny story and it made me laugh a lot of times, reminds me of my usual style of macabre comedy I often use while writing my own stuff =D
“Judas Priest Veronica, would it be too much to ask for you to cover yourself for a meal at least?”
that was an epic dialogue lololololo.... Judas Priest ftw
anyway it's a really well written story, a comedic one on top of that, it also fits perfectly with my tastes too.
Though I haven't seen a reference to Fakku so far, only a subtle reference that she's into reading hentai, maybe my eyes were failing me but well I think you might want to PM one of the judges in order to clarify things~
Oh well, that aside since it's already included in the list I think it's already approved by the judges so nevermind what I said before~