'His timing is always perfect'? Ah yes, I wonder why...Maybe it's because a certain someone usually gets home the same time you do?
Still, he probably could have revealed himself earlier, but I suppose a good time never really came up, until this one where she mentioned he doesn't even know her.
Great ending though. Heh, when even guys think he's cute...
The artwork is average, but the story is excellent---sexy, funny,
and heartwarming, with many cute touches. Highlights include:
Page 4, panel 4: "...a giant 20 centimeter dick that measures up to any foreigner."
Who needs an American, with his so big, humongous penis?
Page 8, panel 2:
Usami is too polite to point out that he easily recognized Iroka
by the double mole below her left eye.
Page 8, panel 5:
Iroka's smile lights up the page. She's positively aglow with lust
and love and sublime happiness.
Page 9, panels 1-2:
In his horny haste, Usami rushes over, naked from the waist
down, with a big dripping stiffy, to be greeted by Iroka, who's
also dripping and naked from the waist down. It's a hilarious
depiction of sheer unbridled lust.
Page 9, panel 4:
Like a snake searching for a warm, hairy nest, Usami's cock
prods Iroka's lower belly, which is a nice erotic touch.
Page 15, panel 2: "Usami-kun's so girly I doubt he could have knocked me up."
Is that the way it works?
Average art? You'd be hard-pressed to find many chapters and artists that have such a consistent variety of poses and perspectives and have so much detail. Look at her pussy on pages 4 and 5. That's a lot of detail for something that's going to be censored in the Japanese release.
Practically EVERY eromanga artist draws the female genitalia with obsessive, anatomical accuracy. When you assess hentai artwork, you must look at the way the artist draws NON-EROTIC details like hands, feet, hair, and backgrounds (although I confess to having a soft spot for shapely breasts and perky nipples). For an example of well-drawn hands and feet, check out Konchiki's "Juicy, Beastly Guardian Foxes."
I give Imonet high marks for his writing, but his artwork doesn't quite rise to the same level. His storyboarding is good, but overall his work lacks polish.
If your opinion of Imonet's art is higher than mine, that is great. I'm glad you enjoy his stuff. There's always a subjective element involved in every review.
Your Destined Lover will recognize you immediately, even over a chat where you usually disguise yourself. No doubt, now that they've done it "for real", they probably won't go back to their previous sessions of virtual sex. And That's The Bottom Line, 'cause one or more Vanilla Gods said so!