Immediately picking up after Second Semester, Rin all hot and flustered after sex decides to take a shower and orders that Shiro come help wash her and what ensues is some wholesome AF Rin x Shiro, tsundere vanilla bathroom foreplay and sex.
You can really tell Iida Toyoyuki is a genuine Fate fan and loves these characters. They know exactly how to write the perfect situation and dialogue between Rin and Shiro down to the little details and mannerisms that feels authentic to the source material.
It's just so good! A+ vanilla!!
While this doesn’t quite do it for me in the shading/detail department, the scenario is very cute. I love the idea of a guy actually washing his partner before getting into it. I do wish Shiro was a bit smoother about the whole thing. That’d make the scenario even more hot. (More flirting less dicking please?) But other than that this is a very good one. I’d say it’s better than the first so the author has outdone himself! Very nice.
That’s a fair point. The author said as much I think with his acknowledgements about Shirou calling her “Rin” in the afterwards. But that doesn’t excuse it. It’s a tad weird.
These two take things into what Rin intended to be an innocent showering but Shiro quickly and naturally ended up having other ideas. Yeah, he'll wash your hair...down there!
You can really tell Iida Toyoyuki is a genuine Fate fan and loves these characters. They know exactly how to write the perfect situation and dialogue between Rin and Shiro down to the little details and mannerisms that feels authentic to the source material.
It's just so good! A+ vanilla!!
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