Yaoi Story for the Users
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Aura-Desu
Beautiful and Twisted~
Here is a random Yaoi I wrote on skype earlier, it features a couple of users from the forums. It was mentioned that I should write another erotic story so I did... about those users. Please enjoy. (Also there will probably be typo's as I wrote this up on the spot. So do you think I should write more?
includes Viceroy Desfel, Ghost Waffles, and Limegreen
Added an ending for fun today lol
includes Viceroy Desfel, Ghost Waffles, and Limegreen
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Added an ending for fun today lol
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[font=comic sans ms]Des this just too funny.
I can't imagine Waffles approving of this much though.
I can't imagine Waffles approving of this much though.
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
Man, I'd love to see the three's expressions after they read this. XD
Fun aside, this wasn't a bad piece, for something that was written on the spot and (probably) meant as a joke. Not as many typos as expected. The only glaring problem was that you capitalized certain words in the middle of a sentence, like "Yells" and "Lifts". Overall, I give it an unbiased B.
Also, poor Limey...
Fun aside, this wasn't a bad piece, for something that was written on the spot and (probably) meant as a joke. Not as many typos as expected. The only glaring problem was that you capitalized certain words in the middle of a sentence, like "Yells" and "Lifts". Overall, I give it an unbiased B.
Also, poor Limey...
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Aura-Desu
Beautiful and Twisted~
azylsagara wrote...
[font=comic sans ms]Des this just too funny. I can't imagine Waffles approving of this much though.
Lol they laughed so hard, I think even waffles fell out of his chair. but on posting it Waffles was all about a world of "no" lol but it was too good :D
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
Also forgot to mention, yes, please keep writing more stories, especially if future ones are better than this.
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
Not as well written as the actual bulk, but better for teh lulz anyway. :P
So, can we expect more and better stories from you in the future? You seem to have a knack for writing.
So, can we expect more and better stories from you in the future? You seem to have a knack for writing.
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Aura-Desu
Beautiful and Twisted~
I want to make more but I need to think of who to make it with, so far the ideas are
Seppy and Des
Lastmousestanding and Melfice
Saatsugai and Girutia
unless others have a better suggestion or one of those?
Seppy and Des
Lastmousestanding and Melfice
Saatsugai and Girutia
unless others have a better suggestion or one of those?
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Aura-Desu wrote...
I want to make more but I need to think of who to make it with, so far the ideas areSeppy and Des
Lastmousestanding and Melfice
Saatsugai and Girutia
unless others have a better suggestion or one of those?
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