What did you think of PuniKano!?
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We've just released our second book, PuniKano by pyon-Kti! What did you all think? What was your favorite chapter?
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W.O.C183
always fapping
One chapter got me some serious NTR feels, the other got me some forced-confusion. The rest gave me shitty kidneys, and a dead bladder.
P.S. I'm still trying to find that bastard guilermo-something, I guess we'll see when he steal our stuff without giving credits again.
P.S. I'm still trying to find that bastard guilermo-something, I guess we'll see when he steal our stuff without giving credits again.
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I found this enjoyable. Some of the chapters rubbed me the wrong way though; not enough vanilla for me, I guess. (read: Extremely difficult to please.) That's not the issue here.
My real point is to point out a few grammatical problems I found, probably will update the post down the line if I find anything else.
pg 81: "I' am a customer!" --> "I am a customer!" or "I'm a customer!"
pg 84: "Remind me..." --> "That reminds me..."
Anyways, good work on the novel. Can't wait to get the physical copy.
My real point is to point out a few grammatical problems I found, probably will update the post down the line if I find anything else.
pg 81: "I' am a customer!" --> "I am a customer!" or "I'm a customer!"
pg 84: "Remind me..." --> "That reminds me..."
Anyways, good work on the novel. Can't wait to get the physical copy.
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Overall awesome book! I had some trouble getting through 3 and 4 wasn't quite my taste either. Really enjoyed everything else, especially the last two. Thanks for bringing this to us!
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El ORLY
*PokerFace*
I will buy this by the end of this year seeing as it will start shipping in January 2015.
Hopefully I still get the achievement that comes with the purchase of this book.
I'm a bit OCD with trophies :(
Hopefully I still get the achievement that comes with the purchase of this book.
I'm a bit OCD with trophies :(
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CkretAznMan wrote...
I found this enjoyable. Some of the chapters rubbed me the wrong way though; not enough vanilla for me, I guess. (read: Extremely difficult to please.) That's not the issue here.My real point is to point out a few grammatical problems I found, probably will update the post down the line if I find anything else.
pg 81: "I' am a customer!" --> "I am a customer!" or "I'm a customer!"
pg 84: "Remind me..." --> "That reminds me..."
Anyways, good work on the novel. Can't wait to get the physical copy.
Good catch! We'll get those fixed up ASAP.
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I quickly brushed through some of the books content and I really love the art style. I'm not someone who purchases these kind of things; me being a closet otaku. However, the quality of work you guys are putting into the Renai Sample so far definitely persuaded me. Now here I am excitingly awaiting for my physical copy to arrive. Awesome!
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karambula
18K Baby!
Ok, the 3rd and 4th story isn't my cup of tea. But, that doesn't mean that I hate the whole book. The last 2 chapters more than makes up for it.
Those 2 chapters gave the us, readers hope. With all the things that happened to the MC, being depressed and all, there's another who loves him fully and willing to wait for him. This shows us that there's light after the darkness.
Those 2 are a great read after reading NTR stories. It's like giving us a pat on the back that things will be all better.
Still, I love Renai Sample more. The stories there are full of love.
Those 2 chapters gave the us, readers hope. With all the things that happened to the MC, being depressed and all, there's another who loves him fully and willing to wait for him. This shows us that there's light after the darkness.
Those 2 are a great read after reading NTR stories. It's like giving us a pat on the back that things will be all better.
Still, I love Renai Sample more. The stories there are full of love.
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CkretAznMan wrote...
I found this enjoyable. Some of the chapters rubbed me the wrong way though; not enough vanilla for me, I guess. (read: Extremely difficult to please.) That's not the issue here.My real point is to point out a few grammatical problems I found, probably will update the post down the line if I find anything else.
pg 81: "I' am a customer!" --> "I am a customer!" or "I'm a customer!"
pg 84: "Remind me..." --> "That reminds me..."
Anyways, good work on the novel. Can't wait to get the physical copy.
Quick followup, we've updated the online reader and included these fixes. Thanks for pointing them out!
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Jacob wrote...
Quick followup, we've updated the online reader and included these fixes. Thanks for pointing them out!By the way, there appears to be a minor error on page 151: "you're so wet it easily went it".
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sadmir
Moe Connoisseur
Please let us know when you update the download links with the fixes so we can download it again.
Also when will the new pre-orders start?
Also when will the new pre-orders start?
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I've only read the first two chapters, but they were really good. Since others seem to be not fans of chapters three and four I will update my response once I've read them.
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The release quality was amazing!!! I like the attention to details and everything. And great artwork by pyon-kti!!!
But somehow i'm quite dissapointed in the overall plot of each work. I still think renai sample has the best.
Punikano seems to be quite light on every aspect. The netorare is far from satisfactory(probably that's why there is no ntr tags), nor the tsundere seems to be so less tsun until it looks like osananajimi-vanilla.
All in all most of them is only about plot that i'm not really satisfied with... Great release though!!!
Fav ch Cross sister
But somehow i'm quite dissapointed in the overall plot of each work. I still think renai sample has the best.
Punikano seems to be quite light on every aspect. The netorare is far from satisfactory(probably that's why there is no ntr tags), nor the tsundere seems to be so less tsun until it looks like osananajimi-vanilla.
All in all most of them is only about plot that i'm not really satisfied with... Great release though!!!
Fav ch Cross sister
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Tons of love,My body was most happy <3 Cant wait to hold this book in my hand~! The Imperfect/ImPerfect family were the best mostly because of the story.But this art is unbeatable,Truly amazing style <3
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Mongoloid294
Cheeki Breekian
Love it. I think that this is an equal release to Renai Sample. I liked the content way more, but i wish it had the amount of color illustration that Renai has. Overall i would say i enjoyed it more, i cannot wait to get the book. The Succubus Girl and the back of the book are amazing. These two books are the first h-manga i have ever bought so i cant wait to get my hands on them! Thank you Fakku