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Cinia Pacifica wrote...
AzelleFans wrote...
Cinia Pacifica wrote...
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ANIMUS:
Fair Lady~
Can I ask you any good tips of how to write an action story? An idea is bugging me for awhile but I'm not good at writing in English so far, which is why might ask you for advices.
A little bit something for your help, if you may:
Oh, and good morning~
Why? What are you writing for?
ANIMUS:
What do you mean by why? A story about vampire, that's the plan. No, it's not for the Writing Contest, if you ask. Can't find idea relating to summer and stuff......
I don't know why you can't write an action story. On what specific part are you having problems writing it?
ANIMUS:
Oh, I'm not sure how to make a fighting scene flows fluidly and "alive", especially in English. And I just wanna hear some advices from seasoned writer like yourself, Fair Lady.
It's not something easy to write. I've done something like that an year ago and a lot of those fight scenes seemed rather ridiculous in the end. You'll have to be detailed about it, that's for certain. But you'll also have to restrict yourself from trying to write too much about it so as to make it seem long. It's all about the wording and how long you write about the action parts, I suppose.
ANIMUS:
Hmmhmm, I see. Well, not like it'll be done soon, though. I'll give a try on the Prologue later, then. Thank you~
Oh, thanks for the Bug Spray, Mills.