Cinia Pacifica's Estate

Cinia Pacifica · 2011-05-23T18:51:27+00:00

Cinia Pacifica's Estate, my only, true home. After moving out and severing my ties with the House of Hambalos and it's owner, I've left for a path where I could have my own home, hence the creation of this thread. I'll be here whenever I'm online, if you wanna talk to me, or anything, please feel free to pay me a visit. So its been mentioned that a lot of the current staff is usually absent, so, I want more: - Maids (maid-job-list soon to be updated with more available positions) If you do join the staff, visit this place whenever you get the chance, and for details about each of the positions and more available positions, please look at the list of positions below the staff list in a spoiler. Remember that after you join, you'll be rightly looked down upon when the time comes. The Mistress only holds back and maintains manners with her guests and outsiders, not her servants. Expect to get punished if you mess up on your work or fail at something, somehow. The Mistress expects the best out of you. Please think before you join, if you have any pride; toss it aside before you join. Rules: 1.) You are to call me "Ojou-sama" when you're posting in here, or at least, "Cinia-sama", or well, the honorifics, "sama", must be used, OR "Mistress Cinia" would work fine, but this rule is only if you're a staff in here though. 2.) No white knighting. I won't tolerate your presence any longer if you're here to ass-lick woman. 3.) I'll be reading every single posts in the thread, obviously, if I don't reply to a certain post in which I was asked something, then; I may have either forgotten to reply, or I may not have anything to say to it, or I missed that post, or I ignored you. [size=15]Staff:[/h] Chef: - No one. Maids: - New Maid ~ PT_Adrock - Guard Maid ~ AzelleFans - Senpai Maid ~ Shad0w0faheart - Mop Maid ~ Hanasaku - Silent Maid ~ AkiHaru Others: - Undertaker ~ StandardCorpse - Gardener ~ Applesauce - Assistant ~ HentaiMukai - Servant ~ HurrDurrpingson - Servant ~ Showa Kitashirakawa - Slave ~ Darkhilt [size=15]Available positions for joining the staff:[/h] Spoiler: New Maid: No matter which "maid" position one picks to join, they get this position before that one. This is the maid who is tasked to do whatever they *can* do. Such as cleaning, helping with cooking, arranging the dishes, etc. Apparently they're usually very clumsy and hence gets punished often. Gardener Maid: The one who tends to the gardens. While the gardener has a taste for horrible and disgusting plants. It is expected that the Gardener maid will plant good, and ONLY good plants. Beautiful ones at the same time, of course. Skills must be top-notch as the Mistress only prefers the best of the best. Guard Maid: One who is supposed to guard me at all times, unlike the Security Guard, Keirova; the maid guards the Mistress, not the estate AND the Mistress. The one applying for this must be skilled in combat up to some extent. Porter Maid: One signing up for this position needs some real physical strength. Not for combat, but for carrying heavy luggage easily. The Mistress tends to travel a lot. She best be prepared with her muscles! Such a maid can rarely be tasked with cleaning. Mop Maid: They do the cleaning, I only clean with magic when I'm sick of all the mess, but that doesn't mean that I'll wait to be pissed off by a mess. It is the Mop maid's duty to keep the estate spotless of dust. Agent Maid: A maid who works for the Mistress behind the scenes from the shadows in the world outside the heavens. She collects informations for her Mistress and carries out many tasks of hiring Mercenaries indirectly. And lastly, she may be used to delivering orders to other angels. Chef Maid: A maid who does the normal jobs of a maid, but has the more tedious task of helping the chef in the kitchen prepare meals. A ploy by the Mistress herself - not known by many - to have countless dishes in her dining table. Personal Maid: One who shall serve me directly all day long, whether the butler is present or not. And she'll be my personal plaything and slave (be masochistic~)! And the applicant must be shy and cute female (or at least RP as a female to be one). (Unlike Room, I'm direct about this!). Senpai Maid: The wise and elder maid, almost as old as the Head Maid is supposed to be. She is always kind, modest and considerate. Very skilled but usually helps around the other maids. Unless her skills are required either out of lack of hands needed or absence of others. Head Maid: The intelligent and experienced one who directs all the maids and does the jobs herself when no other maid is present (lol). Must write English very properly. The applicant must also be a female or at least act like one. Servant: You know, the usual, servants, or should I called them labors?, their job is the same as the personal maid (almost) when the personal maid is not around, other than that, they work under the head maid. Applicant must be male. Notes: - I'll be adding more different types of maids and other positions on the list soon. - A maid joining this place at first will be titled as the "New maid". No exceptions. They'll have to work for a certain period of time until they are approved of the certain maid position they wish or will simply be granted one of them that befits them from the Mistress' opinion. - I'll accept more than one maids and they'll get certain titles that explains the jobs entrusted to them. - You can make up your own position if you want to, it all depends on my approval. [size=15]Residents of the Estate:[/h] - Ojou-sama (Mistress) of the Estate ~ Rise-chan - Winter-kun ~ Groom of the Mistress - Ridiculous Imouto ~ Sana

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Hanasaku i should just die

12 years ago

just asking, how'd you like my story?

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

12 years ago

Not bad. But it's not tight with what you put together.

Hanasaku i should just die

12 years ago

tight?

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

12 years ago

It doesn't seem to flow well, in some ways, including you using the word "serene" too much.

Hanasaku i should just die

12 years ago

i had to cut alot because of the word limit :/
also i like the word serene, it reflects the title too.

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

12 years ago

But you can't overuse it. That kinda ruins it.

Some of the problems surrounds your word choices and sentences themselves, but those are minor issues. My issues is with the story itself. Unfortunately, we can see that it is very unoriginal, at least with using common senses. And after looking at the plot... well, there are better entries out there with good use of deception and such.

Try to always write something unique. Something that can catch one's attention and make them read until the end. Some readers have closes the tab and reads something else sometimes when they don't like what they're reading. And write as well as possible. You might wanna get more creative with the wording when writing metaphors, too.

The word limit is there to pose a challenge. If you can't write something solid within the given limit... well, you know the rest. I hope this ride given by the contest allowed you to gain experiences and more knowledge. I hope you improve well in the future.

FreeOtakuGhost36

12 years ago

*surpise hug rice while still being covered with man & women's bodily fluids*

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

12 years ago

GAH! TAKE A SHOWER OR SOMETHING FOG. DX

winter55

12 years ago

>tight

so kinky...

FreeOtakuGhost36

12 years ago

Cinia Pacifica wrote...

GAH! TAKE A SHOWER OR SOMETHING FOG. DX

gonna take it soon....AFTER I'M DONE COVERING YOU WITH THE SWEATS THAT I GOT BUKKAKE'D WITH!
*continue doing *beep*,*beep* and *BEEP* to rice's entire body*

winter55

12 years ago

and bugged...

Hanasaku i should just die

12 years ago

>bodily fluids

sounds like blood...

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

12 years ago

FUK U.

HANA, or WINTER, HALP CLEAN ME OF ALL THIS DESPICABLE MUCUS.

Hanasaku i should just die

12 years ago

>halp

YAS SAR

Fallan Kamen Rider Cheeki

12 years ago

Still alive, hue.

winter55

12 years ago

Dun worry dear, I'll clean that off. EVERY NOOK AND CRANNY OF YOUR MAJESTIC BODY, I'LL CLEAN IT.

Gahald_Mills

12 years ago

I know you like this song, Cinia..

AzelleFans

12 years ago

ANIMUS:

Glad to see that FOG is still as kinky (pervert) as ever...

winter55

12 years ago

I got me a boss card out of sheer luck. Too bad I don't need 30% reuse delay reduction that much...

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

12 years ago