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Okay, I posted my character profile in your thread rise

ITS TOUHOU?! I found it when I search for princess pics~

XDD

It's not. It's because I like it. =3=

@Lucia
Were you writing it the whole time?

@ZAFT
Damn you, surprised me

Yup, it's hard to decide on what background I want to use on my character

Well, I'm off
Might not be accepted, it kinda is too powerful...but who knows? Meh

Too powerful?... I didn't even mention about how powerful she is, but I guess I don't really understand

I dont know, I'm pretty dumb
Its probably okay, I dont know what I'm talking about

Okay, there are some probs you need to fix by editing, I'm not saying you did anything wrong, everyone makes mistakes, and I'm only correcting here, dun take me negatively okay?

Here goes:

Name, okay.

Age, okay.

Time Warrior? I'm don't get why your badass character is no a Time Warrior, she went through hard training and all so yeah. YOu should consider making your character a Time Warrior.

Special trait? Its not on the profile listings, so just add it to the background. And remove the "special traits" from the profile, just say, "She had some special traits and they are" then just go on, write it at the end of the background, it'll do the trick.

Background, is also okay. BUt if you really do think that your character should be human, then you should tone down the power and awesomeness of your character, because Time Warriors are powerful, and humans are ordinary, even if they are trained. It may be unfair for the other human character using players if you're too strong as well, we need balance among the human characters on the game so yeah. Sorry if I asked for too much, I'm not gonna force you tone it down real badly either, its still your wish~

Weapon, well, the rule is first come first serve for weapons, and unfortunately, somone took katanas already.

Country, you didn't even mention it! But I assumed that your character was currently residing on Japan, and again, counties also have first come first serve rule, and somone took Japan already as well, just make something up and explain in small detail that your character moved out from Japan to [Insert Country name here] within the background. On the "country" at the end of the profile, just write the name of the country.

See ya later Manga~

Ehhh... So many to be fixed...... Do I have to be a time warrior.....?... Err.. I guess I'll just remake it to make an alchemist running a shop instead... But it's 21st century... Uhh... I wonder what should I do

You can keep it the way you want. ^^;;;

And its really your wish whether your character will be Time warrior or not, the only thing is, if you choose Time Warrior, you can keep her powerful. If not, just tone it down, we probably have strong women in our world still, but not very strong lol.

Or if you wanna go for the alchemist one, its not too hard, say that your character's family is a secret family of alchemists?

But rather than strong, I planned my character to be a graceful sword dancer (not a really strong fighter one)... Besides assassins are all about hides, stabs, and runs ;p

Okies lol. Let's just hope that you write a proper profile, although, from waht I know, assasins usually use katanas, which is taken, so maybe you should take dagger?

You can't sword dance with a dagger... But anyway about the weapon, the long sword is actually a whip sword and the short sword is a short katana (I forgot the name)

Call the short katana a dagger? I remember Anud taking the general sword btw. >>;;

You really need to think of a weapon not taken by someone else.

Also, remove the special trait from there, I think you should add it to the personality instead, because you wrote that she has dual personality, what's a more befitting place than personality.

I was about to comment on appearance's pics but realized that its two pics for two personalities lol. Maybe you should you started using a different weapon after going abroad?

Also, pick a country, and Japan is taken by someone, on a side note, England, USA, Japan, Romania and Russia and the taken countries.

Well, I'll do it later when I have the time then.... And since I can't be at Japan, I don't think the story will make sense at all... Which means I have to rewrite the whole thing

Seriously, its not too hard to say that you started to live a normal due to something (you make it up) and then you went abroad for some reason. Try to match the reality for your character a little bit, and when you think about it, the possibilities are endless~

But okay, I'll wait to see your edited post.


Also, gotta go, see ya guys later~

Back~

just dropping in to say
that short sword=wakizashi is the one you're talking about most likely, since its the most common. You might also be thinking of the tanto, thats another slightly less common one, although others exist, such as the aikuchi, kodachi, and chisa katana