neorebirth wrote...
What do you think?
Nice conventional font you used there.
Oh ...
You set the font too big in the last panel, when Yukari said "
It looks like you haven't changed a bit, Reimu".
But overall, it's great.
Just need some adjusting and it will be perfect. Wish you luck !
and if you want to show the page, please do PM me from now on. Pardon me for not telling you about it. But we may not spoil any to another user who haven't read it ;p