Topsy Kreets wrote...
Renovartio wrote...
Topsy Kreets wrote...
Renovartio wrote...
TLDR
short version plox
Guy turns homeless. Steals and shit. He finds a job and a girl short after. They fuck. She dies. The end.
great
did the guy also dies a horrible death?
would be perfect ending
He drowned in a puddle at a kindergarten while masturbating to 5 year old boys. The puddle was 2 inches deep. It was a sad day.
That ending isn't that good
was hoping more for him going to a ketchup factory and getting torn to pieces slowly by the machines and his bodily fluids get shipped out and then eaten by people around the world
which would all die from food poisoning