! Fakku You ! Character designs

This is where I'm going to put my art for "! Fakku You !" the story that I'm writing. The first character is York who is of course me. I want some comments on the design.

bad hair. also why does he have a mini bandoleer that cant reach his shoulder, ot looks like a condom belt.

Well it's better than I could manage...I'll care more when I get a picture though.

What's wrong with a condom belt?

It's not a condom belt.

It should be a condom belt. You can never have to much protection.

not enough details on the clothes wrinkles....

Keep in mind that if the wind were blowing hard enough to billow the coat like that, the coat's left shoulder (which is loose) won't keep on like that.

Consequently, it looks like a three armed man.

wtf is that?

E= for effort though?

Increase the volume of the hair, because from the look of the hair seems the character's skull seems out of shape. The belt that goes around the stomach would not be able to stay in its position unless there is something to support it. For example another belt that goes around the shoulder and connected to it. I hope you get what I'm writing here...

Thanks for all the good criticism guys. Yeah after posting it an seeing all you put out I felt a little down but I'm back up. I can take criticism unlike a lot of people. I'll use it to become better. I'm very inexperienced so I have much to learn. Good thing Fakku has a lot of good artist I can learn from.

lol its good the drawing could use more work .

by the way was it done by comp or did u use traditional ?

On my computer. I don't have any other program than this one that came with my tablet so that's why it looks all sketchy and messy.