Yep, i've over done it... my problem is that i see these kind of things as time goes by, and now i'm starting to hate it, so i decided to do something else and much more simple, cause i showed myself that i have no clue about composition and stuff. Maybe in a coupleof hours i'll have something
edit: Before throwing this away i gave it another try, took out all that background and left it plain white...
now tell me about this, and if it's not ok i'm still working on something else, a cuter character... i mean more moe :)