Nate River wrote...
Criticism, you ask for? IT SHALL BE DONE
>Her left shoulder blade's either too small or too high up. Maybe both.
>Like the others said, her hips (this is Hitomi right?) are overly rounded, and with her tight pants, the back pockets shouldn't looks flat like that. Also there's no definition of her buttocks, but it cuts off right around there, so maybe that was intentional...
>Her ear's a bit misaligned, and you have the back of her neck too far out--judging from where her face is, the line line that defines the back of her neck should be touching just above her left earlobe, rather than near the top of that same ear.
Anything else would just be splitting hairs. You did a really good job with this.
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So as not to take without giving, here's 1/2 of a spread piece I did in honor of FINALLY beating Ninja Gaiden II (the NES one, not the 360 NG2). I apologize for the quality, and the curve, but I don't own a scanner and it's still in a sketchbook, so there's not much I can do about that.
So...thoughts?