Making My Own Visual Novel
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Sounds neat. I'll download these and look over them and I'll let you know what I think.
Alright. I read the first 7 pages of the first document and I thought it was really good. Definitely made me chuckle at parts (one of the things I love about visual novels). I did find a recurring punctuation error that I think I should let you know about. I understand that this is just a first-ish draft, but I figured I'd point it out; all of the "don't"'s I saw were "dont". One other thing:
On line 13, Page 5: professora should be professor
On line 12, Page 6: its should be it's
That's it. It's really good and I won't read any more of it just so I don't spoil myself. However, if you are interested in an editor to look over your final draft feel free to grab me.
PS: Fred is awesome. Bacon is awesome.
Alright. I read the first 7 pages of the first document and I thought it was really good. Definitely made me chuckle at parts (one of the things I love about visual novels). I did find a recurring punctuation error that I think I should let you know about. I understand that this is just a first-ish draft, but I figured I'd point it out; all of the "don't"'s I saw were "dont". One other thing:
On line 13, Page 5: professora should be professor
On line 12, Page 6: its should be it's
That's it. It's really good and I won't read any more of it just so I don't spoil myself. However, if you are interested in an editor to look over your final draft feel free to grab me.
PS: Fred is awesome. Bacon is awesome.