n00blet translations: graphic editors/grammar nazis needed~!
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Newbie lurker/translator wannabe here, requesting help from the collective mass of perverts from Fakku to help me with a little something here.
Yesterday, I finished scripting Charming, and provided my ongoing vice with SMT Online doesn't eat me up, I plan on translating it in the following days. So you guys have something to look forward from this newbie pervert here. =p
Thing is, I happen to be absolutely HORRID at graphic editing, and because of lack of practice, sometimes my translations come out a bit wonky or too literal (thankfully, it's not a common occurrence). Therefore, I resort to the countless perverts inside us: can some of you amazing Photoshop people out there help me with this? I'd provide you the translation, you do the editing, if someone wants to correct my translations they're free to, credit goes to all of us, and everyone's happy fapping away. Deal? =p
Yesterday, I finished scripting Charming, and provided my ongoing vice with SMT Online doesn't eat me up, I plan on translating it in the following days. So you guys have something to look forward from this newbie pervert here. =p
Thing is, I happen to be absolutely HORRID at graphic editing, and because of lack of practice, sometimes my translations come out a bit wonky or too literal (thankfully, it's not a common occurrence). Therefore, I resort to the countless perverts inside us: can some of you amazing Photoshop people out there help me with this? I'd provide you the translation, you do the editing, if someone wants to correct my translations they're free to, credit goes to all of us, and everyone's happy fapping away. Deal? =p
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Xil
Norse God of Sawdust
Hmm... Well, I have never done this before, but would be lying to say I've never wanted to.
I'm not overly familiar in this area, however when it comes to Photoshop I'm not bad. I have cleaned pages before just for the hell of it without much problem, this one does not seem like anything too difficult.
lol so, if your interested in joining up with a fellow newb(long time pervert), check your PM. I've sent you a few ways to contact me.
I'm not overly familiar in this area, however when it comes to Photoshop I'm not bad. I have cleaned pages before just for the hell of it without much problem, this one does not seem like anything too difficult.
lol so, if your interested in joining up with a fellow newb(long time pervert), check your PM. I've sent you a few ways to contact me.
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Alright, so here's the preliminary translation. If anyone would like to correct/fix anything they're welcome to. :P My problem with translating is that I understand stuff in moonspeak, but sometimes can't properly take the meaning of that stuff into a logical english phrase. So sue me. :P
Spoiler:
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Morning Star
Soba-Scans Staff
I'm a bit familiar with PS, and I always wanted to do something like this lol. Although no guarantees that it will be the best...
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sh1k1 wrote...
Alright, so here's the preliminary translation. If anyone would like to correct/fix anything they're welcome to. :P My problem with translating is that I understand stuff in moonspeak, but sometimes can't properly take the meaning of that stuff into a logical english phrase. So sue me. :PSpoiler:
Pretty good translation. Since it seems others are doing the editing I'll just leave it to them, but if you do another project I could help out with it...well as long as it's something that interests me.
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Yay, so my translation wasn't as half-assed as I thought it was. :D Xil, use this translation and go nuts with Photoshop. XD
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Xil
Norse God of Sawdust
sh1k1 wrote...
Xil, use this translation and go nuts with Photoshop. XD*starts to froth at the mouth and shake violently as he types away*
Heh, I should have it done soon. Assisting my brother with an interview atm, but afterwords I'll happily add the translation.
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Morning Star
Soba-Scans Staff
Alright I finished editing in the translation, exactly how do you want me give it to you?
(Lol after doing this it really makes you appreciate all the people that edit doujinshis.)
(Lol after doing this it really makes you appreciate all the people that edit doujinshis.)
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Let's wait for Xil's version, whichever I end up liking the most I'll submit to the main site with credits to everyone for input. But in the meantime, Morning, you can upload it to Mediafire or something and send me the DL link in a PM. :P
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Morning Star
Soba-Scans Staff
sh1k1 wrote...
Let's wait for Xil's version, whichever I end up liking the most I'll submit to the main site with credits to everyone for input. But in the meantime, Morning, you can upload it to Mediafire or something and send me the DL link in a PM. :PDo I need to add like a who translated page?
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Morning Star wrote...
Alright I finished editing in the translation, exactly how do you want me give it to you?(Lol after doing this it really makes you appreciate all the people that edit doujinshis.)
You've only scratched the surface my friend. Once you've edited an entire volume, including redraws/colour pages/cover pages then you'll appreciate how hard we work, but a short colour doujin is a good start.
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Morning Star
Soba-Scans Staff
ThorW wrote...
Morning Star wrote...
Alright I finished editing in the translation, exactly how do you want me give it to you?(Lol after doing this it really makes you appreciate all the people that edit doujinshis.)
You've only scratched the surface my friend. Once you've edited an entire volume, including redraws/colour pages/cover pages then you'll appreciate how hard we work, but a short colour doujin is a good start.
Exactly! I can only imagine how tedious it is to edit a full volume...
Lol hopefully I might be able to in the future!
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Xil
Norse God of Sawdust
Right-o.
sk1k1, I noticed the upper right of page 4 had a few untranslated chat bubbles, though I think they were just random moaning/panting.
Easy enough to fix if need be.
Ahh, Morning Star. Cool to see you did your own as well. I would like to see how you went about yours.
If interested, I've sent to a PM about it.
sk1k1, I noticed the upper right of page 4 had a few untranslated chat bubbles, though I think they were just random moaning/panting.
Easy enough to fix if need be.
Ahh, Morning Star. Cool to see you did your own as well. I would like to see how you went about yours.
If interested, I've sent to a PM about it.
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It's really great to see that you guys are taking initiative and putting in all this hard work~
Keep it up!!
Keep it up!!
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Yeah, anything I didn't touch was mostly kissing onomatopoeia, gargling sounds, random "aah"s or "haah"s, or moaning/panting sounds, so don't worry too much about it. I'm downloading both versions now; as soon as I make up my mind over which one to submit, I'll take the last page of the one I pick and add credits for all three of us -- no effort shall go uncredited. :)
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And I think I'll go with Xil's job. :D Don't worry, Morning, you get credited as well in the last page~! :D
I'm uploading the zip file with the credited last page now to MF, and then will be making a thread in the User Uploads forum. Hopefully this'll get put on the Fakku front page too -- it'd be like, the height of honor to me. XD
I'm uploading the zip file with the credited last page now to MF, and then will be making a thread in the User Uploads forum. Hopefully this'll get put on the Fakku front page too -- it'd be like, the height of honor to me. XD
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Xil
Norse God of Sawdust
sh1k1 wrote...
Hopefully this'll get put on the Fakku front page too -- it'd be like, the height of honor to me. XDlol I can agree with that statement.
Also I really like the idea of adding all 3 of our names. All 3 of us worked on it, so might as well be known as such.
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Just checked it out and not bad work. The editing was good in regards to redraws and typesetting, and the translations were understandable (most important part) and mostly grammatically correct.
Good work to everyone involved in this and @Sh1k1: for your next project let me know what you're doing and if it catches my interest I'll throw my hat in the ring as an editor, or at least I can be a proofreader for grammar.
Now I'm off to do my own editing! I got another volume to finish @.@
Good work to everyone involved in this and @Sh1k1: for your next project let me know what you're doing and if it catches my interest I'll throw my hat in the ring as an editor, or at least I can be a proofreader for grammar.
Now I'm off to do my own editing! I got another volume to finish @.@