I think this looks kind of like a cross between dbz art and battle royale art. I like it :D some of the noses look wierd, but others look normal. i didnt get to see youre first art pages, but it looks good now if they didnt then.
Finally the body! :'D Nice practicing, though it seems like the neck on the more finished heads isn't as sturdy (I guess I just mean wide) as with the practice heads =o was that on purpouse? (I really like that profile one with Cloud-ish hair)
I swear I keep thinking Grappler Baki and Jojo when I look at your stuff.
Its a treat though.
I need to figure out your inking process, I always get hesitant when I get to that point, but you seem to lay it out like no ones business.
I do want to see how you'll tackle dynamic poses in a finished work.