K.Epiren wrote...
That in reviewing other people's work, it is alright, and in fact encouraged, to tear into it.
Ya I personally love when they do, best way to pick up mistakes is when faced with brutal honesty (for me). I often write things out that sound different in my head, so I need people to tell me exactly what it sounds like at times.
OT: "Differences in Scale vs Difference in Kind"