Stalemate - VN

cute, did you made this?

yes he made it
and i know his art style

yup I bet 100% tkhnoman made this. :D, at least the drawings.

since that's his trademark drawing

I guess it's worth checking out, then.

Off to download.

ETA: Needs editing, badly. Doesn't seem bad so far, but it's painful to read at times...

Open source. You're allowed to edit it, and re-upload it.
You may also change the flow of the story, if you think that it is better that way(but don't change the log lines).
You may also add other element like music and such.

You didn't need to ask/contact me, as long as you didn't change my name in it.

You can add your name in the editing task, or other task.
If you really did that, please contact me and i will change all of the download site i uploaded.


Thanks.

It's finally done? Awesome, I'm excited to try it out. Congratulations on finishing!

Wicked stuff my man~

+rep (when im able)

Nice to know. Not sure how good I am myself, but even I could definitely improve the English a lot. Somewhat busy with another big translation at least until the end of next week, but I'll try to take time for this as well, unless someone better wants to help out as well.

Not like I have anything else to do in my free time since Menclave's apparently in a coma right now...

Good work, tkhnoman. I'll be checking this out.

Well, now that I have played through everything... It's quite good, but has its problems as well, aside from the language quality. In the end, it was better than I expected at first, though, so well done!

Now let's see what I can do to improve this... It'll take some time, though, and I think I will need to ask you to clarify a few places for me when I get to them.

Just played through it for a little bit, it looks very promising.

The most immediate thing you should do is find someone to quality check the dialogue. The English doesn't flow well, I recommend asking right here on the forums. I'm sure you can find a bunch of people willing to help.

Keep up the good work.

SYNOPSIS anyone?

In this game, you are a boy who already have a girlfriend.
You also decided to help a mahou shoujo (magical girl) for being
her mascot and battle the monsters. And someday, you meet a girl
that looks like your drawings.

Wahahaha, a VN not found on vndb.org! (duh, this is a doujin VN)

EDIT: Alright, how do I edit this game? Just played a few lines and sorry to say, your grammar needs improvement.

Already on the job. But you're free to try to improve it after I've finished with my editing. Doesn't hurt to have a second person look at it as well.

Amazing!
Gonna try this right now.

That was quite the mindfuck.

Seems to be pretty interesting. Why is it only 13+ though? Not that it really matters I guess, considering what kind of haven this website is...

Now that you think about it. It won't match with the story if i did something 'hentai' in it. In fact, it may only give a minus to the story.

Took me long enough, but the edited files are now sent off to tkhnoman. If he approves of my edits, you should soon see a much less Engrish version here. :) Hopefully it'll be good enough for you all, but feel free to correct any mistakes I might have missed or made myself, should there be any left.