A LoL+Dota2 crossover: Dragons
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So, yeah, I'm awfully ashamed for abandoning my "A High School fic" for almost half a decade now, even though I had tons of ideas for it already... too much Real-life stuff going on, even till now, so I never really got to put it all into paper.
Anyway, i'm thinking of making a fanfiction with a League of Legends and Dota2 crossover with Davion the Dragon Knight and Shyvana the Half-Dragon.
Will post 1st chapter later
Anyway, i'm thinking of making a fanfiction with a League of Legends and Dota2 crossover with Davion the Dragon Knight and Shyvana the Half-Dragon.
Will post 1st chapter later
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
Uzumaki101 wrote...
So, yeah, I'm awfully ashamed for abandoning my "A High School fic" for almost half a decade now, even though I had tons of ideas for it already... too much Real-life stuff going on, even till now, so I never really got to put it all into paper. Anyway, i'm thinking of making a fanfiction with a League of Legends and Dota2 crossover with Davion the Dragon Knight and Shyvana the Half-Dragon.
Will post 1st chapter later
That's fine, it happens to the best of us. Don't consider it a failure, merely a necessary growing experience.
Well, I'm a big fan of LoL and DotA, so I'll be looking forward to it. Not too half bad of an idea.
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
Looking forward to it as well. Do you have a link to your abandoned fan-fic?
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leonard267 wrote...
Looking forward to it as well. Do you have a link to your abandoned fan-fic?https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=6098
I should really work more on my writing skills
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
It is what I like simple, easy to understand, with a good introduction. The complete opposite of how I write. What do you have in mind for the story as in how would it begin, develop and end? If there was something I wanted from that story, it would be a plot twist, perhaps the supporting characters having some kind of hidden agenda.
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xninebreaker
FAKKU Writer
I, too, and a fan of both LoL and DoTA. I'll be looking forward to your future post!
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Well, here it is, enjoy!
Davion rushed through the forest, panting lightly. It has been only a few hours, but he could tell.
Barathrum, the Spirit Breaker, was approaching fast.
'This plan better work' He thought, as he swiftly avoided the high trees, delving deeper into the forest.
Davion and his allies, The Earth Shaker and The Windrunner, has formulated a plan to finally kill the mighty boar. It was a simple, yet effective plan. Davion lures Barathrum into an open plane. And once lured, the three shall attack all at once in a pincer formation.
Simple, right?
WRONG.
What Davion didn't count on was that while he was luring the boar into the jungle, both of his allies were being decimated by Ostarion, the Skeleton King, leaving the Dragon Knight unknowingly alone with the Spirit Breaker
As soon as Davion finally stepped into an open field, he saw it. The Spirit Breaker charging on all fours, his deftly cry ringing through the forest. Red eyes locked with Yellow ones. Davion prepared for the plan to come to fruition.
A few more feet from him Davion screamed "NOW!"...
... And he was rammed by the boar, sending Davion across the plains and slamming him to a tree. The impact was enough to send his shield flying through the air and land a few feet away from him.
"...ow" Was all Davion could manage to say as he sticked his sword into the ground and used it as a foothold, and he looked at Barathrum, just before he disappeared...
"Boo"
...And reappeared behind him. The boar ferociously swung his lantern downwards, slamming Davion's back to the ground.
"Argh!" Even with his armor and his Dragon Blood working full-time, he could still feel his ribs crack. As he tried to get up, another swing by Barathrum sent the Knight skidding across the floor before being sprawled out. His vision was starting to get blurry. He looked around and saw his Shield. He stretched out his right hand. If he could only reach for his Shield...
"Ahh Dragon Knight" Barathrum dryly said "what pleasant surprise it is to see you... to your death". He stomped the Dragon Knight's outstretched arm, letting Davion scream in agony as he felt his bone snap into two.
"Broke your arm, I see?" the boar chuckled
Davion, although his body broken, furiously looked straight into the boar's glowing red eyes.
"This is not over, Barathrum"
A hearty laugh ringed across the empty forest.
"Oh… but it is" Barathrum said as he raised his giant lantern, ready to deal the final blow when suddenly, a light engulfed Davion's eyes.
He quickly shut his eyes for a few minutes, and reopened them again...
...to see a forest, vastly different from where he was. Everything seems more colorful, bright. It almost hurts his eyes to look.
Lying on the ground, he struggled to sit upright, only to fail to do so. He couldn't even move a finger... okay, maybe the broken arm part had something to do with that.
'…Where am I?' He asked himself, as he looked straight up at the blue sky. While it seems he was miraculously saved for some reason, his injuries are still as grave as when Barathrum first hit him.
He was starting to lose consciousness, when he heard a rustle by a bush. And as he saw a figure carefully approach him, he finally gave in to exhaustion just after he heard a Woman's Voice say:
"Who are you?"
Dragons
Chapter 1
Chapter 1
Davion rushed through the forest, panting lightly. It has been only a few hours, but he could tell.
Barathrum, the Spirit Breaker, was approaching fast.
'This plan better work' He thought, as he swiftly avoided the high trees, delving deeper into the forest.
Davion and his allies, The Earth Shaker and The Windrunner, has formulated a plan to finally kill the mighty boar. It was a simple, yet effective plan. Davion lures Barathrum into an open plane. And once lured, the three shall attack all at once in a pincer formation.
Simple, right?
WRONG.
What Davion didn't count on was that while he was luring the boar into the jungle, both of his allies were being decimated by Ostarion, the Skeleton King, leaving the Dragon Knight unknowingly alone with the Spirit Breaker
As soon as Davion finally stepped into an open field, he saw it. The Spirit Breaker charging on all fours, his deftly cry ringing through the forest. Red eyes locked with Yellow ones. Davion prepared for the plan to come to fruition.
A few more feet from him Davion screamed "NOW!"...
... And he was rammed by the boar, sending Davion across the plains and slamming him to a tree. The impact was enough to send his shield flying through the air and land a few feet away from him.
"...ow" Was all Davion could manage to say as he sticked his sword into the ground and used it as a foothold, and he looked at Barathrum, just before he disappeared...
"Boo"
...And reappeared behind him. The boar ferociously swung his lantern downwards, slamming Davion's back to the ground.
"Argh!" Even with his armor and his Dragon Blood working full-time, he could still feel his ribs crack. As he tried to get up, another swing by Barathrum sent the Knight skidding across the floor before being sprawled out. His vision was starting to get blurry. He looked around and saw his Shield. He stretched out his right hand. If he could only reach for his Shield...
"Ahh Dragon Knight" Barathrum dryly said "what pleasant surprise it is to see you... to your death". He stomped the Dragon Knight's outstretched arm, letting Davion scream in agony as he felt his bone snap into two.
"Broke your arm, I see?" the boar chuckled
Davion, although his body broken, furiously looked straight into the boar's glowing red eyes.
"This is not over, Barathrum"
A hearty laugh ringed across the empty forest.
"Oh… but it is" Barathrum said as he raised his giant lantern, ready to deal the final blow when suddenly, a light engulfed Davion's eyes.
He quickly shut his eyes for a few minutes, and reopened them again...
...to see a forest, vastly different from where he was. Everything seems more colorful, bright. It almost hurts his eyes to look.
Lying on the ground, he struggled to sit upright, only to fail to do so. He couldn't even move a finger... okay, maybe the broken arm part had something to do with that.
'…Where am I?' He asked himself, as he looked straight up at the blue sky. While it seems he was miraculously saved for some reason, his injuries are still as grave as when Barathrum first hit him.
He was starting to lose consciousness, when he heard a rustle by a bush. And as he saw a figure carefully approach him, he finally gave in to exhaustion just after he heard a Woman's Voice say:
"Who are you?"
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
Very nice so far with that sample, but be careful with your forms of speech whether past or present.
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
I have a question after reading that. Do you usually write fan-fiction for those who are familiar with that universe or for the general audience?
I wish I could write like you, straight to the action, but I can't help having to flesh out the setting of the story first. If I were writing that story, I would spend too much words on explaining what is a Earth Shaker and a Windrunner for example, or why are they in the forest in the first place.
Even though over-exposition does appear to turn off some readers but I do enjoy reading it.
From the story, I gather that they are hunting the talking boar called Barathrum? (ED: Googled it, Barathrum is a boar) The party was pretty much overwhelmed, leaving our hero rather battered, only to be saved by a woman in the nick of time?
I wish I could write like you, straight to the action, but I can't help having to flesh out the setting of the story first. If I were writing that story, I would spend too much words on explaining what is a Earth Shaker and a Windrunner for example, or why are they in the forest in the first place.
Even though over-exposition does appear to turn off some readers but I do enjoy reading it.
From the story, I gather that they are hunting the talking boar called Barathrum? (ED: Googled it, Barathrum is a boar) The party was pretty much overwhelmed, leaving our hero rather battered, only to be saved by a woman in the nick of time?
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Xenon wrote...
Very nice so far with that sample, but be careful with your forms of speech whether past or present.Will do
leonard267 wrote...
I have a question after reading that. Do you usually write fan-fiction for those who are familiar with that universe or for the general audience? I wish I could write like you, straight to the action, but I can't help having to flesh out the setting of the story first. If I were writing that story, I would spend too much words on explaining what is a Earth Shaker and a Windrunner for example, or why are they in the forest in the first place.
Even though over-exposition does appear to turn off some readers but I do enjoy reading it.
From the story, I gather that they are hunting the talking boar called Barathrum? (ED: Googled it, Barathrum is a boar) The party was pretty much overwhelmed, leaving our hero rather battered, only to be saved by a woman in the nick of time?
Usually I write for those who are in the know of the universe, but it wouldn't be bad to try to write it for the general audience.... hmm....
I'll try to explain it more thoroughly, but not too much. Also, I have an Idea that is only applicable to the internet that would rather help those who don't know much of the characters.
editing story