A New Life

BTK69 · 2008-08-04T03:20:49+00:00

PrologueChapter 1: The Start of a New Life As Allen walked in to the Nagasaki home carrying all his luggage which basically nothing but books, clothes, video games, CDs, and DVDs. Shizuka sees him struggling and asks, "oh my, do you need a hand Allen?" To which Allen replies, "No, I got this." Miraculously Allen manages to carry all his things to his room upstairs. Shizuka was amazed that he made it, to which she said, "My my, we finally have a strong man in the house again" That made Allen remember her dead husband Yusuke Nagasaki who died in a car accident, he sometimes worked out with some equipment he bought workout, so he was kinda buff. He slow adverted his face and depressingly said, "Yeah I'm pretty stronger." Shizuka a little bit confussed by his reaction said, "oh! I'm sorry I'll get dinner started." And went to the kitchen get dinner started. As Shizuka left Ringo entered with a bag she was carrying with both hands and shut the door. Ringo said, "it's been a long time Allen." Allen in a slightly hateful voice replied, "Yeah, but not long enough. Why are you even here, trying to make me steal something again and humiliate me in front of the girl I like and half the popular kids again and whats in the bag!?" 4 year ago in the 8th grade Allen had a crush on Nami Ogawa who was a cheerleader and very popular. He asked Ringo who was one of her friends to set him up on a date with Nami. Ringo decided to set up a deal, "I'll set you up with Nami if you give me your mothers diamond earings you know the ones she never wears and do my home work for about a week." He accepts and got on a date with Nami, but when he got on the date with Nami at her friends party, she wasn't in her best mood. She was pissed at Ringo for making her go on the date and took it out on Allen. Halfway through the date her boyfriend Touma Mizue saw them and beat him up. Ringo said, "Oh, please! how was I suppose to know he was gonna show up. Bottom line I got you the date. Besides you got what was coming to you, you stole from you mother and went out with a girl who had a boyfriend" Allen replied angrily, "My fault you made me steal it and I thought she'd broken up with him!" "Well a lot can happen in a week and she ain't my mother. Now take down your pants." said Ringo. Allen was shocked. She slowly put down the bag and went up to Allen and pulled his pants and boxers. She put her hand on his cock and slowly rubbed it, as she said, "It seems big enough. I got you a new deal, do as I say and this little guy will be very happy, got it" She then started stroking it harder. Allen pulled his head back in ecstasy and asked, "What are you doing." "Giving you a hand job, what do you think?", replied Ringo. "That's not what I mean and you know it. What are you planning on doing", replied Allen with a voice full of pleasure and fear. She put on a mischiefs smile and said, " Something that will make everyone happy." "What is this little plan of your?", Allen asked still filled with fear and pleasure. Ringo replied with the same mischiefs smile, "Now where's the fun in that, if I told you it would spoil the surprise." "There is no way this can end well.", he thought. Suddenly Allen came his load all over the floor, to which Ringo commented, "My my, you came a lot you must've been holding it in for quite awhile. Oh! And you might want to clean that up before it stains." After saying he gets the tissues from the desk and cleans it up and asks her as she walking out the door, "aren't you gonna help clean it up?" "No, looks like you got it all taken care of. Oh, by the way try using what's in the bag." Allen opens up the bag and sees weights, a resistance band, and a jump rope; he realize that it's her dads, but wonders why she gave it to him. As he turns to the door he sees she's gone. So with nothing better to do he tries them out. ========== So tell me what you think

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Damienthedevil

16 years ago

BTK69 wrote...

Fuck you

Well, well. the 1st one to actually scold me after i give a comment. I knew i was way too nice on you Uzumaki... :P jk.

No need to go offensive BTK.... if you are going to be a writer, you are going to get even worse comments. I think mine is on the NICE side actually. You should hear some of those that i get from my friends lol. "Aww, man! What the hell is this piece of crap?! This story is way too cheesy!" "What is wrong with you Damien?! You call THIS a story?" "What is up with your plot development?! Seriously, you should consider recycling this waste paper,"

Those btw are comments of my friends on some of my stories.....Compare that and the one i gave you. You'll realize you have it good....

DxTRiNiTYLiMiTxD

16 years ago

Damienthedevil wrote...

BTK69 wrote...

Fuck you

just wondering, when will you be updating your own story?
i was in the middle of reading it before it ended. :[

Damienthedevil

16 years ago

ahh about my story.... see i'm really REALLY busy at school right now cause of the exams... so i think you'll have to wait around 3 weeks? sorry....

DxTRiNiTYLiMiTxD

16 years ago

its alright.
at least you are planning too.
i'll be lurking around til then. :]

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