A Simple Promise Before We Go

It's a Final Fantasy Tactics fanfiction. It's not complete yet. It's a little more the 3300 words. Anyway, feedback is always loved.

I'm writing this for Valentine's Day. Eh heh...
I personally really like this piece. I rarely like the things I write, but I actually like this. I tried hard. There's just something about V-Day...


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Finished~ BEFORE V-DAY TOO!!! WOOO!!!

http://amethystl.deviantart.com/art/Story-for-V-Day-112937710

So many grammar mistakes though. I probably didn't catch them all.

For those who don't have a DevArt account.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4864441

That was a good story hope you post the rest later i am really curious what you have in store for those two

Yay~ Comments~ Makes me happy~ *cries tears of joy*

Finished~ BEFORE V-DAY TOO!!! WOOO!!!

http://amethystl.deviantart.com/art/Story-for-V-Day-112937710

So many grammar mistakes though. I probably didn't catch them all.

For those who don't have a DevArt account.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4864441

*sniff* it was a very good just the ending was really sad hope you write another story like this i would love to read it

Sad stories are the best. They leave you crying and stuff. It's like... "Wahhh!!!" then you feel for the characters adns tuff.